开门见山
根据图片并结合实际,写一篇关于交通安全的作文,谈谈关于交通安全我们应该做些什么。要求:不少于50词。
信息解读
要点点拨
· 参考词汇:must、mustn't、safe、the green man、run on the road、call。
· 参考句型:1. We must/mustn't ... 2. We can/can't ...
· 时态:一般现在时
实战整篇
根据图片并结合实际,写一篇关于交通安全的作文,谈谈关于交通安全我们应该做些什么。要求:不少于50词。
信息解读
要点点拨
· 参考词汇:must、mustn't、safe、the green man、run on the road、call。
· 参考句型:1. We must/mustn't ... 2. We can/can't ...
· 时态:一般现在时
实战整篇
We must keep safe on the road. We mustn't
run or play on the road. We mustn't cross the
road when there is the red man. We mustn't look
at the phones when we cross the road. We mustn't
make a call when we drive cars. It is not safe. To
keep safe, we must wait for the green man and
cross the road carefully. We can walk on the
pavement. We can look for a zebra crossing. We
must follow the rules. We can make some posters
to tell people how to keep safe on the road. We
can also draw some pictures about road safety.
make a call when we drive cars. It is not safe. To
keep safe, we must wait for the green man and
cross the road carefully. We can walk on the
pavement. We can look for a zebra crossing. We
must follow the rules. We can make some posters
to tell people how to keep safe on the road. We
can also draw some pictures about road safety.
答案：范文:
We must keep safe on the road. We mustn't
run or play on the road. We mustn't cross the
road when there is the red man. We mustn't look
at the phones when we cross the road. We mustn't
make a call when we drive cars. It is not safe. To
keep safe, we must wait for the green man and
cross the road carefully. We can walk on the
pavement. We can look for a zebra crossing. We
must follow the rules. We can make some posters
to tell people how to keep safe on the road. We
can also draw some pictures about road safety.
We must keep safe on the road. We mustn't
run or play on the road. We mustn't cross the
road when there is the red man. We mustn't look
at the phones when we cross the road. We mustn't
make a call when we drive cars. It is not safe. To
keep safe, we must wait for the green man and
cross the road carefully. We can walk on the
pavement. We can look for a zebra crossing. We
must follow the rules. We can make some posters
to tell people how to keep safe on the road. We
can also draw some pictures about road safety.
解析：
【分析】
这道题要求写一篇交通安全主题的英语短文，首先先明确核心要求：使用指定的参考词汇、给定的must/mustn't、can的句型，全程用一般现在时，字数不少于50词。解题时第一步先开篇点题，点明道路安全的重要性；第二步先列举我们绝对不能做的危险交通行为，把参考词汇里的run on the road、call这些元素融入进去；第三步列举我们必须遵守的安全行为，用到the green man、safe这些关键词；最后补充我们可以做的宣传交通安全的相关行动，收尾呼吁大家遵守交规，这样逻辑通顺，所有要求都能覆盖，字数也很容易达标。
【解析】
1. 开篇直接点题，用"We must keep safe on the road."开门见山，紧扣交通安全的核心主题，符合一般现在时的时态要求。
2. 用多组We mustn't句型列举危险的交通陋习：不在马路上追逐打闹、红灯时不横穿马路、过马路不看手机、驾驶时不接打电话，覆盖了参考词汇run on the road、call的使用场景。
3. 用We must句型列举正确的安全出行准则：等候绿灯亮起再小心过马路、走人行道、寻找斑马线横穿道路，用到指定参考词汇the green man、safe。
4. 最后补充We can引导的倡议内容：制作交通安全海报、绘制相关宣传画，呼吁所有人遵守交通规则，整体内容连贯，字数远超50词，完全符合题目的全部要求。
【答案】
We must keep safe on the road. We mustn't run or play on the road. We mustn't cross the road when there is the red man. We mustn't look at the phones when we cross the road. We mustn't make a call when we drive cars. It is not safe. To keep safe, we must wait for the green man and cross the road carefully. We can walk on the pavement. We can look for a zebra crossing. We must follow the rules. We can make some posters to tell people how to keep safe on the road. We can also draw some pictures about road safety.
【知识点】
1. 英语主题作文写作
2. 情态动词must用法
3. 一般现在时应用
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题目给出的所有提示要求，全部用到了指定的参考词汇和参考句型，时态使用准确，内容从禁止危险行为、践行安全准则到宣传交规倡议，逻辑层次清晰，要点覆盖全面，语言简单流畅，符合小学高段英语写作的表达要求，学生可以参考该文的结构，替换补充自己熟悉的相关内容完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题要求写一篇交通安全主题的英语短文，首先先明确核心要求：使用指定的参考词汇、给定的must/mustn't、can的句型，全程用一般现在时，字数不少于50词。解题时第一步先开篇点题，点明道路安全的重要性；第二步先列举我们绝对不能做的危险交通行为，把参考词汇里的run on the road、call这些元素融入进去；第三步列举我们必须遵守的安全行为，用到the green man、safe这些关键词；最后补充我们可以做的宣传交通安全的相关行动，收尾呼吁大家遵守交规，这样逻辑通顺，所有要求都能覆盖，字数也很容易达标。
【解析】
1. 开篇直接点题，用"We must keep safe on the road."开门见山，紧扣交通安全的核心主题，符合一般现在时的时态要求。
2. 用多组We mustn't句型列举危险的交通陋习：不在马路上追逐打闹、红灯时不横穿马路、过马路不看手机、驾驶时不接打电话，覆盖了参考词汇run on the road、call的使用场景。
3. 用We must句型列举正确的安全出行准则：等候绿灯亮起再小心过马路、走人行道、寻找斑马线横穿道路，用到指定参考词汇the green man、safe。
4. 最后补充We can引导的倡议内容：制作交通安全海报、绘制相关宣传画，呼吁所有人遵守交通规则，整体内容连贯，字数远超50词，完全符合题目的全部要求。
【答案】
We must keep safe on the road. We mustn't run or play on the road. We mustn't cross the road when there is the red man. We mustn't look at the phones when we cross the road. We mustn't make a call when we drive cars. It is not safe. To keep safe, we must wait for the green man and cross the road carefully. We can walk on the pavement. We can look for a zebra crossing. We must follow the rules. We can make some posters to tell people how to keep safe on the road. We can also draw some pictures about road safety.
【知识点】
1. 英语主题作文写作
2. 情态动词must用法
3. 一般现在时应用
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题目给出的所有提示要求，全部用到了指定的参考词汇和参考句型，时态使用准确，内容从禁止危险行为、践行安全准则到宣传交规倡议，逻辑层次清晰，要点覆盖全面，语言简单流畅，符合小学高段英语写作的表达要求，学生可以参考该文的结构，替换补充自己熟悉的相关内容完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.7