主题写作提优
主题分析
学校是我们学习和成长的重要场所，它有不同功能的区域，如图书馆、操场、教室等，还有各类教学设施与物品。请围绕“Welcome to my school”，运用相关词汇和句型，介绍学校里的场所及事物，展现校园风貌，让读者感受校园生活的丰富与美好。
思路点拨
佳作欣赏
Welcome to my school
My school is big and beautiful. Let me show you around.
First, there is a library. It’s on the second floor. It’s full of books. We can read different books there and also borrow them to read at home. Then, there’s a large sports ground. We have PE lessons in the sports ground and play sport like running and playing basketball during breaks. Our classrooms are bright and clean. There are desks, chairs and a blackboard in each classroom. Teachers teach us knowledge here every day.
I love my school very much. Come and visit my school if you have time. You’ll like it too!
小试身手
你的学校是什么样子的呢？有哪些场所或建筑呢？请向大家介绍一下吧！
主题分析
学校是我们学习和成长的重要场所，它有不同功能的区域，如图书馆、操场、教室等，还有各类教学设施与物品。请围绕“Welcome to my school”，运用相关词汇和句型，介绍学校里的场所及事物，展现校园风貌，让读者感受校园生活的丰富与美好。
思路点拨
佳作欣赏
Welcome to my school
My school is big and beautiful. Let me show you around.
First, there is a library. It’s on the second floor. It’s full of books. We can read different books there and also borrow them to read at home. Then, there’s a large sports ground. We have PE lessons in the sports ground and play sport like running and playing basketball during breaks. Our classrooms are bright and clean. There are desks, chairs and a blackboard in each classroom. Teachers teach us knowledge here every day.
I love my school very much. Come and visit my school if you have time. You’ll like it too!
小试身手
你的学校是什么样子的呢？有哪些场所或建筑呢？请向大家介绍一下吧！
主题写作提优
One possible version:
This is my school. It's big and nice.
My classroom is on the second floor. On the first floor, there is an art room. We draw pictures there. There is a music room next to it. We sing songs in it. There is a computer room on the third floor. Outside, there is a big sports ground. We play football there.
I love my school.
One possible version:
This is my school. It's big and nice.
My classroom is on the second floor. On the first floor, there is an art room. We draw pictures there. There is a music room next to it. We sing songs in it. There is a computer room on the third floor. Outside, there is a big sports ground. We play football there.
I love my school.
答案：主题写作提优
One possible version:
This is my school. It's big and nice.
My classroom is on the second floor. On the first floor, there is an art room. We draw pictures there. There is a music room next to it. We sing songs in it. There is a computer room on the third floor. Outside, there is a big sports ground. We play football there.
I love my school.
One possible version:
This is my school. It's big and nice.
My classroom is on the second floor. On the first floor, there is an art room. We draw pictures there. There is a music room next to it. We sing songs in it. There is a computer room on the third floor. Outside, there is a big sports ground. We play football there.
I love my school.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先明确核心要求：围绕介绍自己的学校展开，按照思维导图给出的三段结构梳理思路：第一步写开头，直接点题，点明学校的整体特点，自然引出后续要介绍的校园场所内容；第二步写主体部分，按照从教学楼楼层到室外的空间顺序，依次介绍不同功能的校园设施，使用题干提示的There be句型、方位表达说明每个场所的位置，还可以补充我们在对应场所开展的日常活动，让内容更生动真实；第三步写结尾，抒发对学校的喜爱之情，收束全文，保证逻辑通顺，贴合校园介绍的主题。
【解析】
1. 开篇段：开门见山点明写作对象，说明学校整体的外观特点，自然引出后续介绍，对应开篇内容：This is my school. It's big and nice.
2. 主体段：按照空间顺序逐层介绍设施：先说明自己教室的所在楼层，再依次介绍一楼的美术室、紧邻美术室的音乐室，三楼的电脑室，最后介绍室外的大操场，每处设施都补充对应的校园活动，同时正确使用There be句型、方位介词on/next to来表述位置，符合题干给出的句型使用要求。
3. 结尾段：直接表达对学校的喜爱，简洁收束全文，符合写作逻辑。
完整参考范文如下：
This is my school. It's big and nice.
My classroom is on the second floor. On the first floor, there is an art room. We draw pictures there. There is a music room next to it. We sing songs in it. There is a computer room on the third floor. Outside, there is a big sports ground. We play football there.
I love my school.
【答案】
One possible version:
This is my school. It's big and nice.
My classroom is on the second floor. On the first floor, there is an art room. We draw pictures there. There is a music room next to it. We sing songs in it. There is a computer room on the third floor. Outside, there is a big sports ground. We play football there.
I love my school.
【知识点】
There be句型
方位介词使用
校园话题写作
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合写作要求，遵循题干给出的三段式写作框架，按照清晰的空间顺序介绍校园设施，条理清楚，正确运用了要求的核心句型和方位表达，内容贴合真实的校园生活，语句简单流畅，表意清晰，非常适合作为小学阶段校园主题写作的参考范本。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先明确核心要求：围绕介绍自己的学校展开，按照思维导图给出的三段结构梳理思路：第一步写开头，直接点题，点明学校的整体特点，自然引出后续要介绍的校园场所内容；第二步写主体部分，按照从教学楼楼层到室外的空间顺序，依次介绍不同功能的校园设施，使用题干提示的There be句型、方位表达说明每个场所的位置，还可以补充我们在对应场所开展的日常活动，让内容更生动真实；第三步写结尾，抒发对学校的喜爱之情，收束全文，保证逻辑通顺，贴合校园介绍的主题。
【解析】
1. 开篇段：开门见山点明写作对象，说明学校整体的外观特点，自然引出后续介绍，对应开篇内容：This is my school. It's big and nice.
2. 主体段：按照空间顺序逐层介绍设施：先说明自己教室的所在楼层，再依次介绍一楼的美术室、紧邻美术室的音乐室，三楼的电脑室，最后介绍室外的大操场，每处设施都补充对应的校园活动，同时正确使用There be句型、方位介词on/next to来表述位置，符合题干给出的句型使用要求。
3. 结尾段：直接表达对学校的喜爱，简洁收束全文，符合写作逻辑。
完整参考范文如下：
This is my school. It's big and nice.
My classroom is on the second floor. On the first floor, there is an art room. We draw pictures there. There is a music room next to it. We sing songs in it. There is a computer room on the third floor. Outside, there is a big sports ground. We play football there.
I love my school.
【答案】
One possible version:
This is my school. It's big and nice.
My classroom is on the second floor. On the first floor, there is an art room. We draw pictures there. There is a music room next to it. We sing songs in it. There is a computer room on the third floor. Outside, there is a big sports ground. We play football there.
I love my school.
【知识点】
There be句型
方位介词使用
校园话题写作
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合写作要求，遵循题干给出的三段式写作框架，按照清晰的空间顺序介绍校园设施，条理清楚，正确运用了要求的核心句型和方位表达，内容贴合真实的校园生活，语句简单流畅，表意清晰，非常适合作为小学阶段校园主题写作的参考范本。
【难度系数】
0.7