十一、好朋友是一生的财富。当朋友有困难的时候,给他/她提出好的建议;当他/她快乐的时候,与他/她分享喜悦。请你根据提示,写一篇短文。(7分)
要求:1. 句子通顺,书写工整;2. 不少于6句话。

I have many good friends, and we always help each other when we are in need.
When Oliver is sad, I read funny stories to him and listen to his troubles carefully.

要求:1. 句子通顺,书写工整;2. 不少于6句话。
I have many good friends, and we always help each other when we are in need.
When Oliver is sad, I read funny stories to him and listen to his troubles carefully.
If Mike feels tired, I suggest he have a good rest or go to bed early. When Cathy is ill, I tell her to see a doctor and stay in bed to rest well. When Zhang Li is happy, I sing and dance with her and share her happiness.
I love my friends very much, and being with them makes my life full of joy.
答案:One possible version:
I have many good friends, and we always help each other when we are in need.
When Oliver is sad, I read funny stories to him and listen to his troubles carefully. If Mike feels tired, I suggest he have a good rest or go to bed early. When Cathy is ill, I tell her to see a doctor and stay in bed to rest well. When Zhang Li is happy, I sing and dance with her and share her happiness.
I love my friends very much, and being with them makes my life full of joy.
I have many good friends, and we always help each other when we are in need.
When Oliver is sad, I read funny stories to him and listen to his troubles carefully. If Mike feels tired, I suggest he have a good rest or go to bed early. When Cathy is ill, I tell her to see a doctor and stay in bed to rest well. When Zhang Li is happy, I sing and dance with her and share her happiness.
I love my friends very much, and being with them makes my life full of joy.
解析:
【分析】首先明确题目要求:围绕“好朋友是一生的财富”这一主题,短文需体现“朋友有困难时提建议、快乐时分享喜悦”,不少于6句话,已给出开头和Oliver的相关内容,接下来要补充其他朋友的不同场景(如疲惫、生病、开心)的应对,确保句子通顺、贴合主题,满足字数要求。
【解析】根据题目要求,结合已给内容,依次补充不同朋友的情况:当Mike疲惫时建议休息,Cathy生病时建议看医生,张丽开心时一起分享喜悦,最后表达对朋友的喜爱,形成完整短文。
【答案】I have many good friends, and we always help each other when we are in need.
When Oliver is sad, I read funny stories to him and listen to his troubles carefully. If Mike feels tired, I suggest he have a good rest or go to bed early. When Cathy is ill, I tell her to see a doctor and stay in bed to rest well. When Zhang Li is happy, I sing and dance with her and share her happiness.
I love my friends very much, and being with them makes my life full of joy.
【知识点】英语写作、记叙文写作
【点评】本题围绕“好朋友”主题,要求体现互助与分享,符合初中英语写作基础要求,内容充实贴合题意。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】根据题目要求,结合已给内容,依次补充不同朋友的情况:当Mike疲惫时建议休息,Cathy生病时建议看医生,张丽开心时一起分享喜悦,最后表达对朋友的喜爱,形成完整短文。
【答案】I have many good friends, and we always help each other when we are in need.
When Oliver is sad, I read funny stories to him and listen to his troubles carefully. If Mike feels tired, I suggest he have a good rest or go to bed early. When Cathy is ill, I tell her to see a doctor and stay in bed to rest well. When Zhang Li is happy, I sing and dance with her and share her happiness.
I love my friends very much, and being with them makes my life full of joy.
【知识点】英语写作、记叙文写作
【点评】本题围绕“好朋友”主题,要求体现互助与分享,符合初中英语写作基础要求,内容充实贴合题意。
【难度系数】0.6