杨玲打算暑假的时候和她的爸爸去英国旅行,他们将参观一些地方,请根据图片提示,展开想象,写一写他们的这次旅行吧。
要求:1. 符合主题,时态正确,表达流畅;

2. 书写规范,标点正确;
3. 不少于 5 句话。
要求:1. 符合主题,时态正确,表达流畅;
2. 书写规范,标点正确;
3. 不少于 5 句话。
主题写作提优
The summer holiday is coming. Yang Ling and her father will go to visit the UK. They will go there by plane. They will stay there for two weeks. They will visit some interesting cities like London and Oxford. They will visit Buckingham Palace, Big Ben, the London Eye, Tower Bridge and the universities in Oxford. They will also take a boat trip on the River Thames. Yang Ling and her father are both football-lovers. They will watch a football match in London. They will also go shopping and buy some gifts for their family and friends.
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The summer holiday is coming. Yang Ling and her father will go to visit the UK. They will go there by plane. They will stay there for two weeks. They will visit some interesting cities like London and Oxford. They will visit Buckingham Palace, Big Ben, the London Eye, Tower Bridge and the universities in Oxford. They will also take a boat trip on the River Thames. Yang Ling and her father are both football-lovers. They will watch a football match in London. They will also go shopping and buy some gifts for their family and friends.
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答案:主题写作提优
The summer holiday is coming. Yang Ling and her father will go to visit the UK. They will go there by plane. They will stay there for two weeks. They will visit some interesting cities like London and Oxford. They will visit Buckingham Palace, Big Ben, the London Eye, Tower Bridge and the universities in Oxford. They will also take a boat trip on the River Thames. Yang Ling and her father are both football-lovers. They will watch a football match in London. They will also go shopping and buy some gifts for their family and friends.
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The summer holiday is coming. Yang Ling and her father will go to visit the UK. They will go there by plane. They will stay there for two weeks. They will visit some interesting cities like London and Oxford. They will visit Buckingham Palace, Big Ben, the London Eye, Tower Bridge and the universities in Oxford. They will also take a boat trip on the River Thames. Yang Ling and her father are both football-lovers. They will watch a football match in London. They will also go shopping and buy some gifts for their family and friends.
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解析:
【分析】
首先,我们要明确这是一篇英语游记类写作,主题是暑假杨玲和爸爸的英国旅行。第一步确定时态:因为是计划将要发生的事,所以要用一般将来时(will+动词原形)。第二步搭建写作框架:先开篇点明暑假到来,引出旅行计划;接着说明出行方式、在英国停留的时间;然后结合图片里的大本钟、塔桥,拓展英国其他知名景点,列举要参观的地方;最后补充特色活动,比如泰晤士河游船、看足球赛、购物买礼物,让内容更丰富,满足不少于5句话的要求。写作时要注意语句流畅,标点正确,符合主题要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入:用“The summer holiday is coming.”点明时间背景,接着说明旅行计划“Yang Ling and her father will go to visit the UK.”
2. 出行安排:介绍交通方式“They will go there by plane.”和停留时长“They will stay there for two weeks.”
3. 参观内容:先提及要去的城市“They will visit some interesting cities like London and Oxford.”,再结合图片和英国知名景点,列举具体参观地点“They will visit Buckingham Palace, Big Ben, the London Eye, Tower Bridge and the universities in Oxford.”
4. 特色活动:补充游船、看球赛、购物等活动,丰富内容“They will also take a boat trip on the River Thames. Yang Ling and her father are both football-lovers. They will watch a football match in London. They will also go shopping and buy some gifts for their family and friends.”
整个写作围绕主题,使用一般将来时,内容充实,符合题目要求。
【答案】
The summer holiday is coming. Yang Ling and her father will go to visit the UK. They will go there by plane. They will stay there for two weeks. They will visit some interesting cities like London and Oxford. They will visit Buckingham Palace, Big Ben, the London Eye, Tower Bridge and the universities in Oxford. They will also take a boat trip on the River Thames. Yang Ling and her father are both football-lovers. They will watch a football match in London. They will also go shopping and buy some gifts for their family and friends.
(答案不唯一)
【知识点】
一般将来时用法,英语游记写作,英国文化常识
【点评】
本题考查学生对一般将来时的运用能力,以及结合图片和文化常识进行英语写作的综合能力。要求学生掌握相关景点词汇和日常活动表达,写作时需紧扣主题,语句连贯,内容饱满,能有效锻炼学生的英语书面表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先,我们要明确这是一篇英语游记类写作,主题是暑假杨玲和爸爸的英国旅行。第一步确定时态:因为是计划将要发生的事,所以要用一般将来时(will+动词原形)。第二步搭建写作框架:先开篇点明暑假到来,引出旅行计划;接着说明出行方式、在英国停留的时间;然后结合图片里的大本钟、塔桥,拓展英国其他知名景点,列举要参观的地方;最后补充特色活动,比如泰晤士河游船、看足球赛、购物买礼物,让内容更丰富,满足不少于5句话的要求。写作时要注意语句流畅,标点正确,符合主题要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入:用“The summer holiday is coming.”点明时间背景,接着说明旅行计划“Yang Ling and her father will go to visit the UK.”
2. 出行安排:介绍交通方式“They will go there by plane.”和停留时长“They will stay there for two weeks.”
3. 参观内容:先提及要去的城市“They will visit some interesting cities like London and Oxford.”,再结合图片和英国知名景点,列举具体参观地点“They will visit Buckingham Palace, Big Ben, the London Eye, Tower Bridge and the universities in Oxford.”
4. 特色活动:补充游船、看球赛、购物等活动,丰富内容“They will also take a boat trip on the River Thames. Yang Ling and her father are both football-lovers. They will watch a football match in London. They will also go shopping and buy some gifts for their family and friends.”
整个写作围绕主题,使用一般将来时,内容充实,符合题目要求。
【答案】
The summer holiday is coming. Yang Ling and her father will go to visit the UK. They will go there by plane. They will stay there for two weeks. They will visit some interesting cities like London and Oxford. They will visit Buckingham Palace, Big Ben, the London Eye, Tower Bridge and the universities in Oxford. They will also take a boat trip on the River Thames. Yang Ling and her father are both football-lovers. They will watch a football match in London. They will also go shopping and buy some gifts for their family and friends.
(答案不唯一)
【知识点】
一般将来时用法,英语游记写作,英国文化常识
【点评】
本题考查学生对一般将来时的运用能力,以及结合图片和文化常识进行英语写作的综合能力。要求学生掌握相关景点词汇和日常活动表达,写作时需紧扣主题,语句连贯,内容饱满,能有效锻炼学生的英语书面表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6