梦想是我们前进的方向，你的梦想是什么呢？请以“My dream”为题，写一篇短文来告诉我们吧。可着重围绕以下三个方面。
提示：1. What do you want to be in the future?
2. Why do you want to be...?
3. What should you do to make your dream(s) come true?
要求：语句通顺、意思连贯；表达正确、书写规范；不少于5句话。
My dream
提示：1. What do you want to be in the future?
2. Why do you want to be...?
3. What should you do to make your dream(s) come true?
要求：语句通顺、意思连贯；表达正确、书写规范；不少于5句话。
My dream
主题写作提优
My dream
I have a wonderful dream. I want to be a music teacher in the future. I like singing. And I like staying with children. I want to teach them to sing many beautiful songs. To make my dream come true, I will study hard. I will practise singing more. I'm sure my dream will come true. What's your dream?（答案不唯一）
My dream
I have a wonderful dream. I want to be a music teacher in the future. I like singing. And I like staying with children. I want to teach them to sing many beautiful songs. To make my dream come true, I will study hard. I will practise singing more. I'm sure my dream will come true. What's your dream?（答案不唯一）
答案：主题写作提优
My dream
I have a wonderful dream. I want to be a music teacher in the future. I like singing. And I like staying with children. I want to teach them to sing many beautiful songs. To make my dream come true, I will study hard. I will practise singing more. I'm sure my dream will come true. What's your dream?（答案不唯一）
My dream
I have a wonderful dream. I want to be a music teacher in the future. I like singing. And I like staying with children. I want to teach them to sing many beautiful songs. To make my dream come true, I will study hard. I will practise singing more. I'm sure my dream will come true. What's your dream?（答案不唯一）
解析：
【分析】
首先，我们要紧扣题目给出的三个核心提示来构思作文：第一步先明确未来想要从事的职业，这是文章的核心主题；第二步结合自身兴趣或经历阐述选择该职业的原因，让内容更真实可信；第三步具体说明为实现梦想将要付出的行动，体现规划性。写作时要注意开头点明主题，中间分层次回应三个提示，结尾可以表达对梦想的信心或发起互动，同时要保证语句通顺连贯，满足不少于5句话的要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：用“I have a wonderful dream.”直接引出主题，清晰明了。
2. 回应第一个提示：明确说出未来的职业目标“I want to be a music teacher in the future.”
3. 回应第二个提示：结合自身喜好阐述原因，“I like singing. And I like staying with children. I want to teach them to sing many beautiful songs.”，让理由充分且贴合自身情况。
4. 回应第三个提示：用一般将来时列出实现梦想的具体计划，“To make my dream come true, I will study hard. I will practise singing more.”，体现为梦想努力的决心。
5. 结尾升华：表达对梦想实现的信心，并询问对方梦想，使文章更完整自然，“I'm sure my dream will come true. What's your dream?”
【答案】
My dream
I have a wonderful dream. I want to be a music teacher in the future. I like singing. And I like staying with children. I want to teach them to sing many beautiful songs. To make my dream come true, I will study hard. I will practise singing more. I'm sure my dream will come true. What's your dream?（答案不唯一）
【知识点】
话题作文写作、一般将来时运用、语句连贯技巧
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求的三个核心要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯。从点明梦想，到阐述原因、规划行动，再到结尾表达信心，层层递进，符合写作逻辑。语句简单易懂、用词准确，既满足字数要求，又能很好地完成“My dream”主题的表达，适合学生模仿学习。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们要紧扣题目给出的三个核心提示来构思作文：第一步先明确未来想要从事的职业，这是文章的核心主题；第二步结合自身兴趣或经历阐述选择该职业的原因，让内容更真实可信；第三步具体说明为实现梦想将要付出的行动，体现规划性。写作时要注意开头点明主题，中间分层次回应三个提示，结尾可以表达对梦想的信心或发起互动，同时要保证语句通顺连贯，满足不少于5句话的要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：用“I have a wonderful dream.”直接引出主题，清晰明了。
2. 回应第一个提示：明确说出未来的职业目标“I want to be a music teacher in the future.”
3. 回应第二个提示：结合自身喜好阐述原因，“I like singing. And I like staying with children. I want to teach them to sing many beautiful songs.”，让理由充分且贴合自身情况。
4. 回应第三个提示：用一般将来时列出实现梦想的具体计划，“To make my dream come true, I will study hard. I will practise singing more.”，体现为梦想努力的决心。
5. 结尾升华：表达对梦想实现的信心，并询问对方梦想，使文章更完整自然，“I'm sure my dream will come true. What's your dream?”
【答案】
My dream
I have a wonderful dream. I want to be a music teacher in the future. I like singing. And I like staying with children. I want to teach them to sing many beautiful songs. To make my dream come true, I will study hard. I will practise singing more. I'm sure my dream will come true. What's your dream?（答案不唯一）
【知识点】
话题作文写作、一般将来时运用、语句连贯技巧
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求的三个核心要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯。从点明梦想，到阐述原因、规划行动，再到结尾表达信心，层层递进，符合写作逻辑。语句简单易懂、用词准确，既满足字数要求，又能很好地完成“My dream”主题的表达，适合学生模仿学习。
【难度系数】
0.7