经典例题
请根据下面的故事梗概，发挥想象力，以“Two little pigs”为题写一则80词左右的小故事。
时间：从前
地点：森林里
人物：幸福的猪妈妈和两只小猪
情节：两只小猪长大了，猪妈妈决定让他们走出森林，到城市里去看一看……
Two little pigs
写作指导
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为一般过去时。
3. 故事梗概已给出，写作时应注意不要遗漏相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
写作模板
请根据下面的故事梗概，发挥想象力，以“Two little pigs”为题写一则80词左右的小故事。
时间：从前
地点：森林里
人物：幸福的猪妈妈和两只小猪
情节：两只小猪长大了，猪妈妈决定让他们走出森林，到城市里去看一看……
Two little pigs
写作指导
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为一般过去时。
3. 故事梗概已给出，写作时应注意不要遗漏相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
写作模板
答案：Once upon a time, there were two little pigs.
They lived happily with their mother in the forest. They played around the green trees and ate fresh fruits every day. When they grew up, their mother asked them to visit the city. When they got to the city, they saw busy streets and tall buildings, but the air was dirty and they felt lonely. They missed the quiet and warm life in the forest.
So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
They lived happily with their mother in the forest. They played around the green trees and ate fresh fruits every day. When they grew up, their mother asked them to visit the city. When they got to the city, they saw busy streets and tall buildings, but the air was dirty and they felt lonely. They missed the quiet and warm life in the forest.
So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先明确核心要求：以Two little pigs为题写80词左右的英语小故事，使用第三人称、一般过去时，覆盖所有给定情节要点，匹配给出的三段写作框架。第一步先完成开篇点题，直接用提示的开篇句交代故事的时间背景和核心人物，开门见山。第二步填充中间的详细介绍部分：先补充两只小猪原本和妈妈在森林的快乐日常，接着按照给定情节写小猪长大后妈妈让他们去城市游历，再写他们到城市后的所见所感，把情节逻辑补顺，避免出现逻辑断层。第三步收尾直接用提示的结尾句点明最终结局，最后通读检查时态是否全部为一般过去时，确认没有遗漏要点、字数符合要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇段：直接使用指定开篇句，用童话故事的经典开篇风格快速交代故事的起始背景，契合故事题材特点。
2. 主体段：首先补充森林生活的细节“他们每天在绿树间玩耍、吃新鲜的水果”，接着顺承情节写小猪长大后妈妈让他们去城市参观，再写抵达城市后的见闻：看到繁忙的街道和高楼，但空气污浊、内心孤独，十分想念森林里安宁温暖的生活，把所有给定的情节要素自然串联起来。
3. 结尾段：使用指定的收尾句点明故事结局，收束全文，整体时态全程保持一般过去时，叙事连贯，字数符合80词左右的要求。
完整范文如下：
Once upon a time, there were two little pigs.
They lived happily with their mother in the forest. They played around the green trees and ate fresh fruits every day. When they grew up, their mother asked them to visit the city. When they got to the city, they saw busy streets and tall buildings, but the air was dirty and they felt lonely. They missed the quiet and warm life in the forest.
So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
【答案】
Once upon a time, there were two little pigs.
They lived happily with their mother in the forest. They played around the green trees and ate fresh fruits every day. When they grew up, their mother asked them to visit the city. When they got to the city, they saw busy streets and tall buildings, but the air was dirty and they felt lonely. They missed the quiet and warm life in the forest.
So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
【知识点】
一般过去时，英语记叙文写作，故事要素整合
【点评】
本篇范文严格贴合题目给出的写作框架和所有情节要求，补充的细节合理自然，叙事逻辑流畅，全程正确使用一般过去时进行叙事，第三人称使用准确，字数控制在要求范围内，完整清晰地讲完了两只小猪的小故事，是一篇符合低年级英语写作要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先明确核心要求：以Two little pigs为题写80词左右的英语小故事，使用第三人称、一般过去时，覆盖所有给定情节要点，匹配给出的三段写作框架。第一步先完成开篇点题，直接用提示的开篇句交代故事的时间背景和核心人物，开门见山。第二步填充中间的详细介绍部分：先补充两只小猪原本和妈妈在森林的快乐日常，接着按照给定情节写小猪长大后妈妈让他们去城市游历，再写他们到城市后的所见所感，把情节逻辑补顺，避免出现逻辑断层。第三步收尾直接用提示的结尾句点明最终结局，最后通读检查时态是否全部为一般过去时，确认没有遗漏要点、字数符合要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇段：直接使用指定开篇句，用童话故事的经典开篇风格快速交代故事的起始背景，契合故事题材特点。
2. 主体段：首先补充森林生活的细节“他们每天在绿树间玩耍、吃新鲜的水果”，接着顺承情节写小猪长大后妈妈让他们去城市参观，再写抵达城市后的见闻：看到繁忙的街道和高楼，但空气污浊、内心孤独，十分想念森林里安宁温暖的生活，把所有给定的情节要素自然串联起来。
3. 结尾段：使用指定的收尾句点明故事结局，收束全文，整体时态全程保持一般过去时，叙事连贯，字数符合80词左右的要求。
完整范文如下：
Once upon a time, there were two little pigs.
They lived happily with their mother in the forest. They played around the green trees and ate fresh fruits every day. When they grew up, their mother asked them to visit the city. When they got to the city, they saw busy streets and tall buildings, but the air was dirty and they felt lonely. They missed the quiet and warm life in the forest.
So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
【答案】
Once upon a time, there were two little pigs.
They lived happily with their mother in the forest. They played around the green trees and ate fresh fruits every day. When they grew up, their mother asked them to visit the city. When they got to the city, they saw busy streets and tall buildings, but the air was dirty and they felt lonely. They missed the quiet and warm life in the forest.
So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
【知识点】
一般过去时，英语记叙文写作，故事要素整合
【点评】
本篇范文严格贴合题目给出的写作框架和所有情节要求，补充的细节合理自然，叙事逻辑流畅，全程正确使用一般过去时进行叙事，第三人称使用准确，字数控制在要求范围内，完整清晰地讲完了两只小猪的小故事，是一篇符合低年级英语写作要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7