实战演练
假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友 Tony 即将来中国，他想向你了解一下中国人的生活方式和中国的传统习俗。请你根据下面的表格提示进行适当发挥，用英语给 Tony 写一封 100 词左右的邮件，对此进行简单介绍并对他的到来表示期待和欢迎。
假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友 Tony 即将来中国，他想向你了解一下中国人的生活方式和中国的传统习俗。请你根据下面的表格提示进行适当发挥，用英语给 Tony 写一封 100 词左右的邮件，对此进行简单介绍并对他的到来表示期待和欢迎。
答案：One possible version
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about Chinese way of life and traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of knives and forks. Most people like to chat with others during the meal. Third, on birthdays we usually have a birthday cake and a bowl of long noodles, and get presents. We should accept presents with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together. Children get hongbao which means lucky money. You'd better not have your hair cut during the Spring Festival month.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you like China very much.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about Chinese way of life and traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of knives and forks. Most people like to chat with others during the meal. Third, on birthdays we usually have a birthday cake and a bowl of long noodles, and get presents. We should accept presents with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together. Children get hongbao which means lucky money. You'd better not have your hair cut during the Spring Festival month.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you like China very much.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先审题，明确三个核心要素：第一，文体是给笔友的英文邮件，身份是李华，收信人是即将来华的澳大利亚笔友Tony；第二，写作核心任务是向对方介绍中国的生活方式和传统习俗，表格给出的所有提示信息必须全部覆盖，不能遗漏；第三，结构规划：开头先回应对方的询问，表达得知他要来华的开心情绪，主体部分按照表格给出的四个场景（初次见面、用餐、过生日、过春节）依次介绍对应的习俗，过春节部分可以适当补充符合中国传统的合理内容让内容更饱满，最后收尾表达对他到来的欢迎和期待，整体控制词数在要求范围内，语气要符合好友交流的轻松友好感，避免生硬的正式表达。
【解析】
步骤1：规范格式，按照英文邮件的要求，开头写称呼Dear Tony，结尾写落款Yours, Li Hua，符合书信写作规范。
步骤2：搭建正文框架：
① 开篇引入：直接点明得知对方即将来华，回应对方想要了解中国生活习俗的诉求，自然引出下文介绍。
② 主体部分逐一覆盖所有提示要点：
初次见面场景：说明中国人第一次见面通常握手或者点头致意；
用餐场景：说明我们习惯使用筷子而非刀叉，用餐时大多喜欢边吃边和身边人聊天；
过生日场景：说明生日时我们会吃生日蛋糕和寓意长寿的面条，收到礼物时要双手接过表示礼貌；
春节场景：补充符合传统的内容，比如春节是中国最重要的节日，全家团聚吃年夜饭，小孩可以收到寓意好运的红包等，内容符合实际。
③ 结尾部分：表达自己十分期待和对方见面，欢迎他来到中国。
步骤3：将所有要点用流畅自然的英文串联，调整语句逻辑，修正语法错误，控制总词数符合题目要求。
【答案】
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about Chinese way of life and traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of knives and forks. Most people like to chat with others during the meal. Third, on birthdays we usually have a birthday cake and a bowl of long noodles, and get presents. We should accept presents with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together. Children get hongbao which means lucky money. You'd better not have your hair cut during the Spring Festival month.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you like China very much.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文书信写作，传统习俗表达，情景应用文
【点评】
本题是结合中国传统文化的英语应用文写作，既考查了学生基础的英文邮件写作能力，也引导学生掌握用英语介绍本土文化的表达，写作时要注意不要遗漏题干表格给出的所有提示信息，补充的习俗内容要符合中国传统实际，整体语气贴合笔友交流的场景，做到表达通顺、要点齐全即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先先审题，明确三个核心要素：第一，文体是给笔友的英文邮件，身份是李华，收信人是即将来华的澳大利亚笔友Tony；第二，写作核心任务是向对方介绍中国的生活方式和传统习俗，表格给出的所有提示信息必须全部覆盖，不能遗漏；第三，结构规划：开头先回应对方的询问，表达得知他要来华的开心情绪，主体部分按照表格给出的四个场景（初次见面、用餐、过生日、过春节）依次介绍对应的习俗，过春节部分可以适当补充符合中国传统的合理内容让内容更饱满，最后收尾表达对他到来的欢迎和期待，整体控制词数在要求范围内，语气要符合好友交流的轻松友好感，避免生硬的正式表达。
【解析】
步骤1：规范格式，按照英文邮件的要求，开头写称呼Dear Tony，结尾写落款Yours, Li Hua，符合书信写作规范。
步骤2：搭建正文框架：
① 开篇引入：直接点明得知对方即将来华，回应对方想要了解中国生活习俗的诉求，自然引出下文介绍。
② 主体部分逐一覆盖所有提示要点：
初次见面场景：说明中国人第一次见面通常握手或者点头致意；
用餐场景：说明我们习惯使用筷子而非刀叉，用餐时大多喜欢边吃边和身边人聊天；
过生日场景：说明生日时我们会吃生日蛋糕和寓意长寿的面条，收到礼物时要双手接过表示礼貌；
春节场景：补充符合传统的内容，比如春节是中国最重要的节日，全家团聚吃年夜饭，小孩可以收到寓意好运的红包等，内容符合实际。
③ 结尾部分：表达自己十分期待和对方见面，欢迎他来到中国。
步骤3：将所有要点用流畅自然的英文串联，调整语句逻辑，修正语法错误，控制总词数符合题目要求。
【答案】
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about Chinese way of life and traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of knives and forks. Most people like to chat with others during the meal. Third, on birthdays we usually have a birthday cake and a bowl of long noodles, and get presents. We should accept presents with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together. Children get hongbao which means lucky money. You'd better not have your hair cut during the Spring Festival month.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you like China very much.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文书信写作，传统习俗表达，情景应用文
【点评】
本题是结合中国传统文化的英语应用文写作，既考查了学生基础的英文邮件写作能力，也引导学生掌握用英语介绍本土文化的表达，写作时要注意不要遗漏题干表格给出的所有提示信息，补充的习俗内容要符合中国传统实际，整体语气贴合笔友交流的场景，做到表达通顺、要点齐全即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6