实战演练
根据表格内容，以“Let's save energy”为题，写一篇短文发出节约能源的倡议。
【要求】1. 内容完整，要点齐全，逻辑清晰，表达流畅。
2. 不少于 90 词。
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。
根据表格内容，以“Let's save energy”为题，写一篇短文发出节约能源的倡议。
【要求】1. 内容完整，要点齐全，逻辑清晰，表达流畅。
2. 不少于 90 词。
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。
答案：One possible version
Let's save energy
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the taps when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. This cuts down on waste and saves resources. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Remember that things like glass jars, old clothes, and books can be reused. Don't forget to repair broken things too.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
Let's save energy
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the taps when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. This cuts down on waste and saves resources. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Remember that things like glass jars, old clothes, and books can be reused. Don't forget to repair broken things too.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
解析：
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作要求：主题是发出节约能源的倡议，标题已经给定为Let's save energy。第一步先梳理表格给出的所有要点：核心主题下有三类行动，分别是节约、管理、重复利用，每类行动都附带了具体示例，还有对应的意义方向。接下来搭建行文逻辑：开篇先点明节约能源的必要性，自然引出三个核心行动关键词；中间分段分别对应三类行动，每部分先说明做法，把表格里的示例完整融入内容，补充对应的节能意义，保证要点不遗漏；最后结尾发出集体行动的呼吁，升华主题，同时控制字数满足不少于90词的要求，全程不要出现真实人名校名地名即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：开门见山抛出倡议主题，点明每个人都可以为节约资源出力，直接点出三个核心行动关键词save、manage、reuse，总领全文。
2. 分点阐述第一类行动“节约（save）”：依次写出表格给出的两个示例——刷牙时关闭水龙头节水、优先选择公共交通或骑行代替私家车出行，点明这类做法可以直接减少日常能源消耗，降低资源浪费。
3. 分点阐述第二类行动“管理（manage）”：对应表格示例，说明日常可以通过使用节能灯具、将空调调整到适宜温度的方式管控能源使用，进一步减少不必要的能源损耗，践行环保生活。
4. 分点阐述第三类行动“重复利用（reuse）”：把重复使用玻璃罐、旧衣物、书籍，维修破损物品的示例融入内容，点明这类做法可以最大化挖掘已有物品的使用价值，从源头减少废弃物产生。
5. 结尾收尾：发出集体行动的号召，说明所有人都践行这些简单做法，就能节约大量能源，共同拥有更绿色的世界，完成倡议的收尾。
【答案】
One possible version
Let's save energy
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the taps when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. This cuts down on waste and saves resources. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Remember that things like glass jars, old clothes, and books can be reused. Don't forget to repair broken things too.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作，节能环保话题表达，要点整合写作
【点评】
本题属于提示类话题英语写作，表格给出的行动、示例提示非常明确，学生只需要按照“总起引入-分述三类节能做法-结尾呼吁”的逻辑梳理内容，把所有给定要点完整覆盖，就能写出符合要求的短文，既考察了学生的信息整合和书面表达能力，也能引导学生建立日常节能的环保意识，写作时要注意不要遗漏表格里的任何示例要点，避免不必要的失分。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题先明确写作要求：主题是发出节约能源的倡议，标题已经给定为Let's save energy。第一步先梳理表格给出的所有要点：核心主题下有三类行动，分别是节约、管理、重复利用，每类行动都附带了具体示例，还有对应的意义方向。接下来搭建行文逻辑：开篇先点明节约能源的必要性，自然引出三个核心行动关键词；中间分段分别对应三类行动，每部分先说明做法，把表格里的示例完整融入内容，补充对应的节能意义，保证要点不遗漏；最后结尾发出集体行动的呼吁，升华主题，同时控制字数满足不少于90词的要求，全程不要出现真实人名校名地名即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：开门见山抛出倡议主题，点明每个人都可以为节约资源出力，直接点出三个核心行动关键词save、manage、reuse，总领全文。
2. 分点阐述第一类行动“节约（save）”：依次写出表格给出的两个示例——刷牙时关闭水龙头节水、优先选择公共交通或骑行代替私家车出行，点明这类做法可以直接减少日常能源消耗，降低资源浪费。
3. 分点阐述第二类行动“管理（manage）”：对应表格示例，说明日常可以通过使用节能灯具、将空调调整到适宜温度的方式管控能源使用，进一步减少不必要的能源损耗，践行环保生活。
4. 分点阐述第三类行动“重复利用（reuse）”：把重复使用玻璃罐、旧衣物、书籍，维修破损物品的示例融入内容，点明这类做法可以最大化挖掘已有物品的使用价值，从源头减少废弃物产生。
5. 结尾收尾：发出集体行动的号召，说明所有人都践行这些简单做法，就能节约大量能源，共同拥有更绿色的世界，完成倡议的收尾。
【答案】
One possible version
Let's save energy
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the taps when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. This cuts down on waste and saves resources. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Remember that things like glass jars, old clothes, and books can be reused. Don't forget to repair broken things too.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作，节能环保话题表达，要点整合写作
【点评】
本题属于提示类话题英语写作，表格给出的行动、示例提示非常明确，学生只需要按照“总起引入-分述三类节能做法-结尾呼吁”的逻辑梳理内容，把所有给定要点完整覆盖，就能写出符合要求的短文，既考察了学生的信息整合和书面表达能力，也能引导学生建立日常节能的环保意识，写作时要注意不要遗漏表格里的任何示例要点，避免不必要的失分。
【难度系数】
0.7