实战演练
根据所给要点提示，以“The changes in my hometown”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。
【要点】1. What was your hometown like in the past?
2. What is your hometown like now?
3. How do you like your hometown?
【要求】1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括要点中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3. 词数100左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名。
The changes in my hometown
根据所给要点提示，以“The changes in my hometown”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。
【要点】1. What was your hometown like in the past?
2. What is your hometown like now?
3. How do you like your hometown?
【要求】1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括要点中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3. 词数100左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名。
The changes in my hometown
One possible version
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old but beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk or ride bikes to town, but the mountains were greener. They enjoyed a clearer sky.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old but beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk or ride bikes to town, but the mountains were greener. They enjoyed a clearer sky.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
答案：One possible version
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old but beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk or ride bikes to town, but the mountains were greener. They enjoyed a clearer sky.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old but beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk or ride bikes to town, but the mountains were greener. They enjoyed a clearer sky.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先要先明确核心要求：必须覆盖三个指定要点，按照「过去的家乡→现在的家乡→我对家乡的看法」的逻辑线展开。第一步先构思过去的家乡的特征，可以从生活水平、住房条件、交通、自然环境几个常见维度切入，用used to结构来描述过去的状态，符合表达习惯；第二步对应过去的内容写现在的变化，形成自然对比，还可以适当补充大家重视环保、吸引游客这类符合逻辑的细节，让内容更饱满；最后收尾部分表达自己对家乡的情感和未来的期许，同时注意控制词数在100左右，不出现真实个人信息，保证语法正确、上下文连贯即可。
【解析】
这是一篇要点类说明文写作，按照以下步骤完成即可符合要求：
1. 开篇总起：先简单点明家乡的基本属性，引出下文的变化描述；
2. 完成第一个要点：用一般过去时和used to do结构，描述过去家乡的小体量、人们的贫困生活、老旧狭小的住房、不便利的交通，同时补充过去山更绿、天空更清澈的环境特点；
3. 完成第二个要点：用现在完成时引出家乡发生的巨变，和过去的内容形成对应对比：人们生活变好、住房宽敞明亮、很多人有私家车、出行方式更多样，同时客观提及发展带来的空气不如从前、树木减少的小问题，补充现在大家都重视环保、每年有大量世界各地游客来游玩的拓展内容，让内容更真实；
4. 完成第三个要点：直接表达对家乡的认可，展望家乡未来会变得越来越好，完成全文收尾。
全程注意切换时态时逻辑通顺，所有要点无遗漏，词数控制在要求范围内即可。
【答案】
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old but beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk or ride bikes to town, but the mountains were greener. They enjoyed a clearer sky.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
【知识点】
提纲类作文写作；used to用法；现在完成时
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题目所有要求，完整覆盖全部三个核心要点，采用今昔对比的行文结构脉络非常清晰，自然运用了初中阶段核心的used to、现在完成时等语法知识点，内容既展现了家乡发展带来的生活红利，也客观提及了发展过程中需要重视的环保问题，补充的游客到访的拓展内容让文章更充实有温度，上下文衔接流畅，词数符合要求，是同类题目的优质参考范本。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题，首先要先明确核心要求：必须覆盖三个指定要点，按照「过去的家乡→现在的家乡→我对家乡的看法」的逻辑线展开。第一步先构思过去的家乡的特征，可以从生活水平、住房条件、交通、自然环境几个常见维度切入，用used to结构来描述过去的状态，符合表达习惯；第二步对应过去的内容写现在的变化，形成自然对比，还可以适当补充大家重视环保、吸引游客这类符合逻辑的细节，让内容更饱满；最后收尾部分表达自己对家乡的情感和未来的期许，同时注意控制词数在100左右，不出现真实个人信息，保证语法正确、上下文连贯即可。
【解析】
这是一篇要点类说明文写作，按照以下步骤完成即可符合要求：
1. 开篇总起：先简单点明家乡的基本属性，引出下文的变化描述；
2. 完成第一个要点：用一般过去时和used to do结构，描述过去家乡的小体量、人们的贫困生活、老旧狭小的住房、不便利的交通，同时补充过去山更绿、天空更清澈的环境特点；
3. 完成第二个要点：用现在完成时引出家乡发生的巨变，和过去的内容形成对应对比：人们生活变好、住房宽敞明亮、很多人有私家车、出行方式更多样，同时客观提及发展带来的空气不如从前、树木减少的小问题，补充现在大家都重视环保、每年有大量世界各地游客来游玩的拓展内容，让内容更真实；
4. 完成第三个要点：直接表达对家乡的认可，展望家乡未来会变得越来越好，完成全文收尾。
全程注意切换时态时逻辑通顺，所有要点无遗漏，词数控制在要求范围内即可。
【答案】
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old but beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk or ride bikes to town, but the mountains were greener. They enjoyed a clearer sky.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
【知识点】
提纲类作文写作；used to用法；现在完成时
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题目所有要求，完整覆盖全部三个核心要点，采用今昔对比的行文结构脉络非常清晰，自然运用了初中阶段核心的used to、现在完成时等语法知识点，内容既展现了家乡发展带来的生活红利，也客观提及了发展过程中需要重视的环保问题，补充的游客到访的拓展内容让文章更充实有温度，上下文衔接流畅，词数符合要求，是同类题目的优质参考范本。
【难度系数】
0.6