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（2025·江苏南京第二十九中学调研）4 月 23 日是世界读书日（World Reading Day），为进一步提高学生的阅读意识，培养更好的阅读习惯，我校英文俱乐部开展了以“Reading makes me better”为题的研讨活动，旨在鼓励更多的学生爱上读书。请根据要点提示写一篇英文短文，分享你对阅读的看法和建议。
【要点】1. What type of books do you like best? Why?
2. Why do you need to read more books?
3. What reading advice can you give to your classmates?（time，habits...）
【注意】1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
2. 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
（2025·江苏南京第二十九中学调研）4 月 23 日是世界读书日（World Reading Day），为进一步提高学生的阅读意识，培养更好的阅读习惯，我校英文俱乐部开展了以“Reading makes me better”为题的研讨活动，旨在鼓励更多的学生爱上读书。请根据要点提示写一篇英文短文，分享你对阅读的看法和建议。
【要点】1. What type of books do you like best? Why?
2. Why do you need to read more books?
3. What reading advice can you give to your classmates?（time，habits...）
【注意】1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
2. 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
Reading can broaden our horizons. Through it, we may know useful experiences and new ideas which make us better. I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we have now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also open our eyes and let us know more about the world.
Therefore, we should read more books every day, for it is never too late to read.
答案：One possible version
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
Reading can broaden our horizons. Through it, we may know useful experiences and new ideas which make us better. I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we have now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also open our eyes and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day, for it is never too late to read.
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
Reading can broaden our horizons. Through it, we may know useful experiences and new ideas which make us better. I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we have now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also open our eyes and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day, for it is never too late to read.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心要求：主题是“Reading makes me better”，必须覆盖题干给出的三个指定要点，词数控制在80左右，不能出现真实姓名校名。解题时的思考顺序是：1. 先承接题目已经给出的开头谚语，自然引入阅读的整体价值；2. 先回应第一个要点：明确说出自己最喜欢的书籍类型，再给出对应的合理理由；3. 接着回应第二个要点，从知识获取、视野拓展、能力提升等角度说明多读书的必要性；4. 最后回应第三个要点，从时间安排、习惯培养的角度给出具体可行的阅读建议，最后简单收尾点题即可，全程注意语句通顺，语法正确，不要遗漏任何一个要点。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：本题属于提示性话题作文，核心主题围绕阅读的意义展开，三个要点明确，属于初中阶段常考的生活化写作题型，词数要求宽松，开头已给出无需自行创作开篇句。
2. 框架搭建：
① 承接开篇谚语，先总述阅读的基础作用，比如拓宽视野、获取新经验新理念；
② 回应要点1：点明自己最喜欢历史类书籍，说明可以通过这类书了解过去，从过往的问题解决方案中获得当下的参考；
③ 回应要点2：说明多读书的价值，既可以积累知识和技能应对生活难题，也能打开眼界加深对世界的认知；
④ 回应要点3：给出建议，号召大家坚持每日阅读，养成长期阅读的好习惯，收尾呼应主题。
3. 润色优化：适当使用定语从句、not only...but also等常用亮点句式，让行文衔接更自然，控制总词数符合要求，规避真实个人信息。
【答案】
Reading can broaden our horizons. Through it, we may know useful experiences and new ideas which make us better. I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we have now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also open our eyes and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day, for it is never too late to read.
【知识点】
英语话题写作；阅读类主题表达；复合句式运用
【点评】
本题要点指向非常清晰，学生只需要按照题干给出的三个问题逐一回应，补充少量衔接语句即可完成写作，参考范文完整覆盖了所有指定要点，逻辑流畅自然，用到了定语从句、并列结构等亮点表达，词数符合题干要求，没有出现违规信息，是一篇标准的考场佳作。同学们写作时要注意不要遗漏任意一个要点，同时尽量避免基础语法错误，就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心要求：主题是“Reading makes me better”，必须覆盖题干给出的三个指定要点，词数控制在80左右，不能出现真实姓名校名。解题时的思考顺序是：1. 先承接题目已经给出的开头谚语，自然引入阅读的整体价值；2. 先回应第一个要点：明确说出自己最喜欢的书籍类型，再给出对应的合理理由；3. 接着回应第二个要点，从知识获取、视野拓展、能力提升等角度说明多读书的必要性；4. 最后回应第三个要点，从时间安排、习惯培养的角度给出具体可行的阅读建议，最后简单收尾点题即可，全程注意语句通顺，语法正确，不要遗漏任何一个要点。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：本题属于提示性话题作文，核心主题围绕阅读的意义展开，三个要点明确，属于初中阶段常考的生活化写作题型，词数要求宽松，开头已给出无需自行创作开篇句。
2. 框架搭建：
① 承接开篇谚语，先总述阅读的基础作用，比如拓宽视野、获取新经验新理念；
② 回应要点1：点明自己最喜欢历史类书籍，说明可以通过这类书了解过去，从过往的问题解决方案中获得当下的参考；
③ 回应要点2：说明多读书的价值，既可以积累知识和技能应对生活难题，也能打开眼界加深对世界的认知；
④ 回应要点3：给出建议，号召大家坚持每日阅读，养成长期阅读的好习惯，收尾呼应主题。
3. 润色优化：适当使用定语从句、not only...but also等常用亮点句式，让行文衔接更自然，控制总词数符合要求，规避真实个人信息。
【答案】
Reading can broaden our horizons. Through it, we may know useful experiences and new ideas which make us better. I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we have now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also open our eyes and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day, for it is never too late to read.
【知识点】
英语话题写作；阅读类主题表达；复合句式运用
【点评】
本题要点指向非常清晰，学生只需要按照题干给出的三个问题逐一回应，补充少量衔接语句即可完成写作，参考范文完整覆盖了所有指定要点，逻辑流畅自然，用到了定语从句、并列结构等亮点表达，词数符合题干要求，没有出现违规信息，是一篇标准的考场佳作。同学们写作时要注意不要遗漏任意一个要点，同时尽量避免基础语法错误，就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7