六、习作。(35分)
面对危险,沉稳果断的司机让肖复兴一生难忘。在你的成长过程中一定也有让你难忘的人,他(她)身上的什么品质让你难以忘怀?请以《难忘的他(她)》为题,选取典型事例,运用恰当的描写方法,表现人物特点。注意内容具体,感情真实,语句通顺。题目自拟,不少于400字。
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面对危险,沉稳果断的司机让肖复兴一生难忘。在你的成长过程中一定也有让你难忘的人,他(她)身上的什么品质让你难以忘怀?请以《难忘的他(她)》为题,选取典型事例,运用恰当的描写方法,表现人物特点。注意内容具体,感情真实,语句通顺。题目自拟,不少于400字。
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答案:[思路点拨]本题为命题作文。首先,从自己的成长过程中,挑选出一位让你难忘的人。其次,思考这个人身上的什么品质让你难以忘怀,比如善良、勇敢、真诚等。然后,选取能体现该品质的典型事例,在叙述事例时,运用恰当的描写方法,像外貌描写、语言描写、动作描写、心理描写等,来表现人物特点。最后,再次强调对这个人的难忘之情,抒发感悟。