十、（南京鼓楼区）书面表达。（共 10 分）
为了让我们的城市更美丽，张华和爸爸妈妈决定一起过“绿色出行日（Green travel day）”，用实际行动为保护环境出一份力。英语课上，张华展示了画画作品并分享了他们的经历。假设你是张华，请你根据表格内容，以“Our green travel day”为题，写一篇短文介绍“绿色出行日”。
要求：1. 包含表格中的所有内容，可以适当发挥想象；2. 使用正确的时态，表达连贯；3. 50 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考句型：…go to the…by/on/…want to…
Our green travel day
Good morning，I’m Zhang Hua. To make our city more beautiful，my family have a green travel day. I go to the bookshop on foot.
为了让我们的城市更美丽，张华和爸爸妈妈决定一起过“绿色出行日（Green travel day）”，用实际行动为保护环境出一份力。英语课上，张华展示了画画作品并分享了他们的经历。假设你是张华，请你根据表格内容，以“Our green travel day”为题，写一篇短文介绍“绿色出行日”。
要求：1. 包含表格中的所有内容，可以适当发挥想象；2. 使用正确的时态，表达连贯；3. 50 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考句型：…go to the…by/on/…want to…
Our green travel day
Good morning，I’m Zhang Hua. To make our city more beautiful，my family have a green travel day. I go to the bookshop on foot.
I want to find some new books and buy a storybook. My father goes to the post office by bus. He wants to send a package and buy some stamps. My mother goes to the supermarket by bike. She wants to buy some vegetables and meat. We all have a great time on our green travel day.
答案：One possible version:
Our green travel day
Good morning, I'm Zhang Hua. To make our city more beautiful, my family have a green travel day. I go to the bookshop on foot. I want to find some new books and buy a storybook. My father goes to the post office by bus. He wants to send a package and buy some stamps. My mother goes to the supermarket by bike. She wants to buy some vegetables and meat. We all have a great time on our green travel day.
Our green travel day
Good morning, I'm Zhang Hua. To make our city more beautiful, my family have a green travel day. I go to the bookshop on foot. I want to find some new books and buy a storybook. My father goes to the post office by bus. He wants to send a package and buy some stamps. My mother goes to the supermarket by bike. She wants to buy some vegetables and meat. We all have a great time on our green travel day.
解析：
【分析】
首先，我们要明确写作任务：以张华的身份，围绕“绿色出行日”，结合表格所有信息完成短文，需符合词数、时态要求。解题步骤如下：
1. 承接给定开头，先介绍自己的出行方式、目的地和要做的事，运用参考句型“go to...on foot”“want to...”；
2. 按照表格信息，依次介绍爸爸和妈妈的出行方式、地点及活动，注意第三人称单数主语对应的动词形式（如go要变为goes）；
3. 添加一句总结性话语，让短文结构更完整，点明活动的美好感受。
要确保内容涵盖所有要点，时态用一般现在时，语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头补充自身活动：用“I want to find some new books and buy a storybook.”引出自己在书店的计划，契合参考句型；
2. 介绍爸爸的行程：“My father goes to the post office by bus. He wants to send a package and buy some stamps.”，注意第三人称单数主语对应的动词变形，完整呈现表格里爸爸的出行信息；
3. 介绍妈妈的行程：“My mother goes to the supermarket by bike. She wants to buy some vegetables and meat.”，同样注意动词形式，准确呈现妈妈的活动；
4. 添加总结句“We all have a great time on our green travel day.”，让短文情感更饱满，结构更完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
Our green travel day
Good morning, I'm Zhang Hua. To make our city more beautiful, my family have a green travel day. I go to the bookshop on foot. I want to find some new books and buy a storybook. My father goes to the post office by bus. He wants to send a package and buy some stamps. My mother goes to the supermarket by bike. She wants to buy some vegetables and meat. We all have a great time on our green travel day.
【知识点】
1. 一般现在时用法
2. 出行方式表达
3. 日常活动表述
【点评】
本文紧扣“绿色出行日”主题，完整涵盖表格所有信息，时态运用准确，语句连贯自然，符合词数要求，结尾的总结句让短文情感更饱满，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.8
首先，我们要明确写作任务：以张华的身份，围绕“绿色出行日”，结合表格所有信息完成短文，需符合词数、时态要求。解题步骤如下：
1. 承接给定开头，先介绍自己的出行方式、目的地和要做的事，运用参考句型“go to...on foot”“want to...”；
2. 按照表格信息，依次介绍爸爸和妈妈的出行方式、地点及活动，注意第三人称单数主语对应的动词形式（如go要变为goes）；
3. 添加一句总结性话语，让短文结构更完整，点明活动的美好感受。
要确保内容涵盖所有要点，时态用一般现在时，语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头补充自身活动：用“I want to find some new books and buy a storybook.”引出自己在书店的计划，契合参考句型；
2. 介绍爸爸的行程：“My father goes to the post office by bus. He wants to send a package and buy some stamps.”，注意第三人称单数主语对应的动词变形，完整呈现表格里爸爸的出行信息；
3. 介绍妈妈的行程：“My mother goes to the supermarket by bike. She wants to buy some vegetables and meat.”，同样注意动词形式，准确呈现妈妈的活动；
4. 添加总结句“We all have a great time on our green travel day.”，让短文情感更饱满，结构更完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
Our green travel day
Good morning, I'm Zhang Hua. To make our city more beautiful, my family have a green travel day. I go to the bookshop on foot. I want to find some new books and buy a storybook. My father goes to the post office by bus. He wants to send a package and buy some stamps. My mother goes to the supermarket by bike. She wants to buy some vegetables and meat. We all have a great time on our green travel day.
【知识点】
1. 一般现在时用法
2. 出行方式表达
3. 日常活动表述
【点评】
本文紧扣“绿色出行日”主题，完整涵盖表格所有信息，时态运用准确，语句连贯自然，符合词数要求，结尾的总结句让短文情感更饱满，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.8