十一、书面表达。(共5分)
星海小学五(2)班打算举办"用英语讲童话故事"的活动。请你根据图片发挥想象,帮李兵完成以"The fox and the cock"为题的童话故事。不少于60词。
The fox and the cock
星海小学五(2)班打算举办"用英语讲童话故事"的活动。请你根据图片发挥想象,帮李兵完成以"The fox and the cock"为题的童话故事。不少于60词。
The fox and the cock
答案：One possible version: The fox and the cock One day, a fox sees a cock. He is so hungry. He wants to eat the cock for his lunch. He comes to the cock and says, "Why are you so sad?" The cock answers, "Because I can't sing well." "I know you can sing well. Can you sing to me?" The cock is happy. He closes his eyes and begins to sing. The fox catches the cock with his mouth and eats him.
解析：
【分析】
首先观察四幅图片梳理故事脉络：狐狸发现情绪低落的公鸡→狐狸主动搭话→公鸡在狐狸夸赞下开心唱歌→狐狸趁机抓走公鸡。
接着按照童话故事结构构思：开头交代故事背景（时间、人物、起因），中间通过对话展现狐狸的计谋与公鸡的反应，结尾点明结局。写作时使用正确的一般过去时，保证语句通顺，内容贴合图片逻辑，满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇铺垫：用“One day, a fox sees a cock. He is so hungry. He wants to eat the cock for his lunch.”交代故事时间、人物和狐狸的动机，引出故事起因。
2. 情节推进：通过狐狸与公鸡的对话“Why are you so sad?”“Because I can't sing well.”“I know you can sing well. Can you sing to me?”展现狐狸的哄骗策略，推动情节发展。
3. 收尾结局：用“The cock is happy. He closes his eyes and begins to sing. The fox catches the cock with his mouth and eats him.”描述公鸡上当后的行为和狐狸的最终行动，完成故事收尾。
【答案】
One possible version: The fox and the cock One day, a fox sees a cock. He is so hungry. He wants to eat the cock for his lunch. He comes to the cock and says, "Why are you so sad?" The cock answers, "Because I can't sing well." "I know you can sing well. Can you sing to me?" The cock is happy. He closes his eyes and begins to sing. The fox catches the cock with his mouth and eats him.
【知识点】
一般过去时运用，情景对话写作，故事类书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣图片内容，情节完整连贯，通过对话生动展现了狐狸的狡诈和公鸡的单纯，语言简洁通顺，符合童话故事的写作要求，也满足了题目中的字数要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先观察四幅图片梳理故事脉络：狐狸发现情绪低落的公鸡→狐狸主动搭话→公鸡在狐狸夸赞下开心唱歌→狐狸趁机抓走公鸡。
接着按照童话故事结构构思：开头交代故事背景（时间、人物、起因），中间通过对话展现狐狸的计谋与公鸡的反应，结尾点明结局。写作时使用正确的一般过去时，保证语句通顺，内容贴合图片逻辑，满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇铺垫：用“One day, a fox sees a cock. He is so hungry. He wants to eat the cock for his lunch.”交代故事时间、人物和狐狸的动机，引出故事起因。
2. 情节推进：通过狐狸与公鸡的对话“Why are you so sad?”“Because I can't sing well.”“I know you can sing well. Can you sing to me?”展现狐狸的哄骗策略，推动情节发展。
3. 收尾结局：用“The cock is happy. He closes his eyes and begins to sing. The fox catches the cock with his mouth and eats him.”描述公鸡上当后的行为和狐狸的最终行动，完成故事收尾。
【答案】
One possible version: The fox and the cock One day, a fox sees a cock. He is so hungry. He wants to eat the cock for his lunch. He comes to the cock and says, "Why are you so sad?" The cock answers, "Because I can't sing well." "I know you can sing well. Can you sing to me?" The cock is happy. He closes his eyes and begins to sing. The fox catches the cock with his mouth and eats him.
【知识点】
一般过去时运用，情景对话写作，故事类书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣图片内容，情节完整连贯，通过对话生动展现了狐狸的狡诈和公鸡的单纯，语言简洁通顺，符合童话故事的写作要求，也满足了题目中的字数要求。
【难度系数】
0.6