九、书面表达。(共 8 分)
中国有许多的传统节日,你最喜欢哪一个节日呢? 请根据思维导图,以“My favourite festival”为题,写一写你最喜欢的节日。
要求:语句通顺,意思连贯,不少于 5 句话。

My favourite festival
中国有许多的传统节日,你最喜欢哪一个节日呢? 请根据思维导图,以“My favourite festival”为题,写一写你最喜欢的节日。
要求:语句通顺,意思连贯,不少于 5 句话。
My favourite festival
One possible version: My favourite festival My favourite festival is the Mid - Autumn Festival. It is in September or October. People get together with their families. I like this festival because I can eat moon cakes. And I usually look at the moon at night with my family. My parents tell interesting stories about the moon. We always have a good time.
答案:One possible version: My favourite festival My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is in September or October. People get together with their families. I like this festival because I can eat moon cakes. And I usually look at the moon at night with my family. My parents tell interesting stories about the moon. We always have a good time.
解析:
【分析】
首先,我们需要明确题目要求:以“My favourite festival”为题,围绕思维导图的四个要点(是什么节日、时间、人们的活动、喜欢的原因)写一篇不少于5句话的英语短文。解题思路如下:
1. 第一步确定要写的中国传统节日,比如中秋节,开篇直接点明自己最喜欢的节日是什么,回应思维导图的“What?”。
2. 接着说明这个节日的时间,回答“When?”的问题,明确节日的具体月份范围。
3. 然后描述这个节日里人们通常会做的事情,回应“What do people do?”,体现节日的传统习俗。
4. 最后阐述喜欢这个节日的原因,回答“Why?”,同时补充自己在节日中的相关经历,让内容更丰富,确保语句通顺连贯,满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:直接写出最喜欢的节日,如“My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival.”,明确回应“What?”的要点。
2. 介绍节日时间:用“It is in September or October.”回答“When?”的问题,清晰说明节日的时间范围。
3. 描述节日活动:通过“People get together with their families.”说明节日里人们的典型活动,回应“What do people do?”的要点。
4. 阐述喜爱原因:用“I like this festival because I can eat moon cakes.”点明核心喜爱原因,再补充个人专属活动“And I usually look at the moon at night with my family. My parents tell interesting stories about the moon.”丰富内容,最后用“We always have a good time.”收尾,强化情感表达,使文章连贯完整,满足不少于5句话的要求。
【答案】
One possible version: My favourite festival My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is in September or October. People get together with their families. I like this festival because I can eat moon cakes. And I usually look at the moon at night with my family. My parents tell interesting stories about the moon. We always have a good time.
【知识点】
节日主题书面表达、英语语句组织、传统节日英文表达
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目给出的思维导图要点,内容完整,逻辑清晰,语句通顺自然,既涵盖了节日的基本信息,又加入了个人的真实体验,生动地表达了对节日的喜爱之情,完全符合题目要求,是一篇优秀的节日主题英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.8
首先,我们需要明确题目要求:以“My favourite festival”为题,围绕思维导图的四个要点(是什么节日、时间、人们的活动、喜欢的原因)写一篇不少于5句话的英语短文。解题思路如下:
1. 第一步确定要写的中国传统节日,比如中秋节,开篇直接点明自己最喜欢的节日是什么,回应思维导图的“What?”。
2. 接着说明这个节日的时间,回答“When?”的问题,明确节日的具体月份范围。
3. 然后描述这个节日里人们通常会做的事情,回应“What do people do?”,体现节日的传统习俗。
4. 最后阐述喜欢这个节日的原因,回答“Why?”,同时补充自己在节日中的相关经历,让内容更丰富,确保语句通顺连贯,满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:直接写出最喜欢的节日,如“My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival.”,明确回应“What?”的要点。
2. 介绍节日时间:用“It is in September or October.”回答“When?”的问题,清晰说明节日的时间范围。
3. 描述节日活动:通过“People get together with their families.”说明节日里人们的典型活动,回应“What do people do?”的要点。
4. 阐述喜爱原因:用“I like this festival because I can eat moon cakes.”点明核心喜爱原因,再补充个人专属活动“And I usually look at the moon at night with my family. My parents tell interesting stories about the moon.”丰富内容,最后用“We always have a good time.”收尾,强化情感表达,使文章连贯完整,满足不少于5句话的要求。
【答案】
One possible version: My favourite festival My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is in September or October. People get together with their families. I like this festival because I can eat moon cakes. And I usually look at the moon at night with my family. My parents tell interesting stories about the moon. We always have a good time.
【知识点】
节日主题书面表达、英语语句组织、传统节日英文表达
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目给出的思维导图要点,内容完整,逻辑清晰,语句通顺自然,既涵盖了节日的基本信息,又加入了个人的真实体验,生动地表达了对节日的喜爱之情,完全符合题目要求,是一篇优秀的节日主题英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.8