十一、书面表达。10分
在一年中,总有一天对你来说格外重要,可能是某个节日,可能是某人的生日,请以“My important day”为题,用英语介绍在一年中你觉得重要的一天。
What is it? When is it?
What do you do on that day?
How do you feel on that day?
...
要求:
1. 语句通顺,表达正确;
2. 不少于40词(不包含已给出的词)。
My important day
My important day is
在一年中,总有一天对你来说格外重要,可能是某个节日,可能是某人的生日,请以“My important day”为题,用英语介绍在一年中你觉得重要的一天。
What is it? When is it?
What do you do on that day?
How do you feel on that day?
...
要求:
1. 语句通顺,表达正确;
2. 不少于40词(不包含已给出的词)。
My important day
My important day is
the Mid-Autumn Festival
It usually comes in September or October every year. On that day, I always visit my grandparents with my parents. We often have a big dinner together. After dinner, we watch the moon, eat the moon cakes and talk. We all have a good time.
答案:One possible version:
My important day
My important day is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It usually comes in September or October every year. On that day, I always visit my grandparents with my parents. We often have a big dinner together. After dinner, we watch the moon, eat the moon cakes and talk. We all have a good time.
My important day
My important day is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It usually comes in September or October every year. On that day, I always visit my grandparents with my parents. We often have a big dinner together. After dinner, we watch the moon, eat the moon cakes and talk. We all have a good time.
解析:
【解析】
写作时可先明确重要的日子,点明其时间;接着围绕当天的活动展开描述,如和家人的相处、具体的活动内容;最后体现出当天的愉悦感受,需紧扣题目中的几个问题,保证语句通顺,满足不少于40词的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My important day
My important day is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It usually comes in September or October every year. On that day, I always visit my grandparents with my parents. We often have a big dinner together. After dinner, we watch the moon, eat the moon cakes and talk. We all have a good time.
【知识点】
节日主题英语写作、一般现在时运用
【点评】
该范文紧扣写作要求,清晰回应了“重要的日子是什么、时间、当天活动及感受”等问题,内容完整,语句通顺流畅,符合字数要求,是一篇合格的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.8
写作时可先明确重要的日子,点明其时间;接着围绕当天的活动展开描述,如和家人的相处、具体的活动内容;最后体现出当天的愉悦感受,需紧扣题目中的几个问题,保证语句通顺,满足不少于40词的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My important day
My important day is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It usually comes in September or October every year. On that day, I always visit my grandparents with my parents. We often have a big dinner together. After dinner, we watch the moon, eat the moon cakes and talk. We all have a good time.
【知识点】
节日主题英语写作、一般现在时运用
【点评】
该范文紧扣写作要求,清晰回应了“重要的日子是什么、时间、当天活动及感受”等问题,内容完整,语句通顺流畅,符合字数要求,是一篇合格的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.8