六、书面表达
本月底你校将举办一次户外活动,为了更好地开展这次活动,校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华,请根据表格内容写一篇短文 (先介绍你喜欢的户外活动,再说明理由,最后就活动安排提出合理的建议),向社团投稿。包含所有要点,80词左右。
Dear Sir,
I'm excited to hear that our school will have an outdoor activity at the end of the month.
I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
本月底你校将举办一次户外活动,为了更好地开展这次活动,校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华,请根据表格内容写一篇短文 (先介绍你喜欢的户外活动,再说明理由,最后就活动安排提出合理的建议),向社团投稿。包含所有要点,80词左右。
Dear Sir,
I'm excited to hear that our school will have an outdoor activity at the end of the month.
I really love climbing mountains with my classmates. It allows us to enjoy nature's beauty, make friends, and help each other along the way.
To make the activity more fun, I hope to go to East Mountain on 25 June. Since it's a bit far, we could meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and take a bus there. We can collect some interesting stories about the mountain's history and share them with each other. It'll also be great to try some local food for lunch. In the afternoon, we can pick up the rubbish to help protect the environment. After that, we can go home at 4:30 p.m. We're sure to have a wonderful time.
I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
答案：One possible version:
Dear Sir,
I'm excited to hear that our school will have an outdoor activity at the end of the month.
I really love climbing mountains with my classmates. It allows us to enjoy nature's beauty, make friends, and help each other along the way.
To make the activity more fun, I hope to go to East Mountain on 25 June. Since it's a bit far, we could meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and take a bus there. We can collect some interesting stories about the mountain's history and share them with each other. It'll also be great to try some local food for lunch. In the afternoon, we can pick up the rubbish to help protect the environment. After that, we can go home at 4:30 p.m. We're sure to have a wonderful time.
I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Dear Sir,
I'm excited to hear that our school will have an outdoor activity at the end of the month.
I really love climbing mountains with my classmates. It allows us to enjoy nature's beauty, make friends, and help each other along the way.
To make the activity more fun, I hope to go to East Mountain on 25 June. Since it's a bit far, we could meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and take a bus there. We can collect some interesting stories about the mountain's history and share them with each other. It'll also be great to try some local food for lunch. In the afternoon, we can pick up the rubbish to help protect the environment. After that, we can go home at 4:30 p.m. We're sure to have a wonderful time.
I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
解析：
【解析】
本题要求以张华的身份向校英语社团投稿，需围绕“喜欢的户外活动、喜欢的理由、活动计划”三个要点撰写短文，需契合投稿语境，控制字数在80词左右，涵盖所有给定要点。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir,
I'm excited to hear that our school will have an outdoor activity at the end of the month.
I really love climbing mountains with my classmates. It allows us to enjoy nature's beauty, make friends, and help each other along the way.
To make the activity more fun, I hope to go to East Mountain on 25 June. Since it's a bit far, we could meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and take a bus there. We can collect some interesting stories about the mountain's history and share them with each other. It'll also be great to try some local food for lunch. In the afternoon, we can pick up the rubbish to help protect the environment. After that, we can go home at 4:30 p.m. We're sure to have a wonderful time.
I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
应用文写作，话题类写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要点，内容完整，逻辑清晰，语言表达流畅自然，活动安排合理贴合实际，符合投稿的正式语境，字数符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以张华的身份向校英语社团投稿，需围绕“喜欢的户外活动、喜欢的理由、活动计划”三个要点撰写短文，需契合投稿语境，控制字数在80词左右，涵盖所有给定要点。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir,
I'm excited to hear that our school will have an outdoor activity at the end of the month.
I really love climbing mountains with my classmates. It allows us to enjoy nature's beauty, make friends, and help each other along the way.
To make the activity more fun, I hope to go to East Mountain on 25 June. Since it's a bit far, we could meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and take a bus there. We can collect some interesting stories about the mountain's history and share them with each other. It'll also be great to try some local food for lunch. In the afternoon, we can pick up the rubbish to help protect the environment. After that, we can go home at 4:30 p.m. We're sure to have a wonderful time.
I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
应用文写作，话题类写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要点，内容完整，逻辑清晰，语言表达流畅自然，活动安排合理贴合实际，符合投稿的正式语境，字数符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.6