写作指导
在你成长的历程中，有些日子会让你开心快乐，经久难忘。请以“My Happy Trip”为题，用英语写一篇 60 词左右的短文(开头已给出，不计入总词数)，并根据提示记述你那天的活动和感受。
My Happy Trip
I had a happy trip last Sunday. In the morning，
写作佳句
1. 早上，我参观了一个农场，并和那里的一位农民交谈。
In the morning，I
2. 市场里人太多了。
3. 然后我在一家餐馆吃了午饭。
Then I
4. 下午，我去爬山并拍了一些照片。
In the afternoon，I climbed the mountain and
5. 那天我很累，但我非常开心。
I was tired that day，but I
思路导引
1. 人称：第
2. 时态：
3. 体裁：
4. 列提纲
在你成长的历程中，有些日子会让你开心快乐，经久难忘。请以“My Happy Trip”为题，用英语写一篇 60 词左右的短文(开头已给出，不计入总词数)，并根据提示记述你那天的活动和感受。
My Happy Trip
I had a happy trip last Sunday. In the morning，
写作佳句
1. 早上，我参观了一个农场，并和那里的一位农民交谈。
In the morning，I
visited
a
farm
and talked with a farmer there.2. 市场里人太多了。
There
were
too many people in the market.3. 然后我在一家餐馆吃了午饭。
Then I
had
lunch
in a restaurant.4. 下午，我去爬山并拍了一些照片。
In the afternoon，I climbed the mountain and
took
some
photos
.5. 那天我很累，但我非常开心。
I was tired that day，but I
was
very
happy
.思路导引
1. 人称：第
一
人称2. 时态：
一般过去时
3. 体裁：
记叙文
4. 列提纲
答案： My Happy Trip
I had a happy trip last Sunday. I visited a farm and talked with a farmer there. At noon, I went to a market. There were too many people in the market. I bought some gifts for my friends. Then I had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon, I climbed the mountain and took some photos.
I was tired that day, but I was very happy.
1. visited a farm 2. There were 3. had lunch4. took some photos 5. was very happy
1. 一 2. 一般过去时 3. 记叙文
I had a happy trip last Sunday. I visited a farm and talked with a farmer there. At noon, I went to a market. There were too many people in the market. I bought some gifts for my friends. Then I had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon, I climbed the mountain and took some photos.
I was tired that day, but I was very happy.
1. visited a farm 2. There were 3. had lunch4. took some photos 5. was very happy
1. 一 2. 一般过去时 3. 记叙文
解析：
【解析】
1. 补全写作佳句：
① 句子描述过去发生的动作，“参观农场”译为visit a farm，一般过去时中visit变为visited，因此填visited a farm。
② 表达“某地存在某物”用there be句型，主语too many people为复数，一般过去时中be动词用were，因此填There were。
③ “吃午饭”译为have lunch，一般过去时中have变为had，因此填had lunch。
④ “拍一些照片”译为take some photos，一般过去时中take变为took，因此填took some photos。
⑤ “非常开心”译为be very happy，主语为I，一般过去时中be动词用was，因此填was very happy。
2. 思路导引：
① 文章记述自己的旅行经历，使用第一人称叙事。
② 描述上周日发生的过往事件，全文统一使用一般过去时。
③ 文章记录个人旅行的经历与感受，属于记叙文体裁。
3. 完整参考短文按照时间顺序串联早中晚的活动，最后收尾表达感受，总词数符合60词左右的要求，叙事连贯逻辑清晰。
【答案】
补全佳句：
1. visited a farm
2. There were
3. had lunch
4. took some photos
5. was very happy
思路导引：
1. 一
2. 一般过去时
3. 记叙文
参考完整短文：
My Happy Trip
I had a happy trip last Sunday. In the morning, I visited a farm and talked with a farmer there. At noon, I went to a market. There were too many people in the market. I bought some gifts for my friends. Then I had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon, I climbed the mountain and took some photos. I was tired that day, but I was very happy.
【知识点】
一般过去时，英语记叙文写作，there be句型
【点评】
本题是面向初中低年级的基础英语写作训练，先通过核心句子补全降低写作门槛，再借助思维导图梳理时间线叙事逻辑，引导学生掌握旅行类记叙文的基本写作框架，巩固一般过去时的动词变形规则。
【难度系数】
0.8
1. 补全写作佳句：
① 句子描述过去发生的动作，“参观农场”译为visit a farm，一般过去时中visit变为visited，因此填visited a farm。
② 表达“某地存在某物”用there be句型，主语too many people为复数，一般过去时中be动词用were，因此填There were。
③ “吃午饭”译为have lunch，一般过去时中have变为had，因此填had lunch。
④ “拍一些照片”译为take some photos，一般过去时中take变为took，因此填took some photos。
⑤ “非常开心”译为be very happy，主语为I，一般过去时中be动词用was，因此填was very happy。
2. 思路导引：
① 文章记述自己的旅行经历，使用第一人称叙事。
② 描述上周日发生的过往事件，全文统一使用一般过去时。
③ 文章记录个人旅行的经历与感受，属于记叙文体裁。
3. 完整参考短文按照时间顺序串联早中晚的活动，最后收尾表达感受，总词数符合60词左右的要求，叙事连贯逻辑清晰。
【答案】
补全佳句：
1. visited a farm
2. There were
3. had lunch
4. took some photos
5. was very happy
思路导引：
1. 一
2. 一般过去时
3. 记叙文
参考完整短文：
My Happy Trip
I had a happy trip last Sunday. In the morning, I visited a farm and talked with a farmer there. At noon, I went to a market. There were too many people in the market. I bought some gifts for my friends. Then I had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon, I climbed the mountain and took some photos. I was tired that day, but I was very happy.
【知识点】
一般过去时，英语记叙文写作，there be句型
【点评】
本题是面向初中低年级的基础英语写作训练，先通过核心句子补全降低写作门槛，再借助思维导图梳理时间线叙事逻辑，引导学生掌握旅行类记叙文的基本写作框架，巩固一般过去时的动词变形规则。
【难度系数】
0.8