七、短文写作。
刘轩和家人一起去公园野餐。根据图片提示，帮刘轩写一写公园里有什么，以及他是如何关心家人的，不少于6句。
It is Sunday. My family and I are in the park. There are
We play and have a picnic. Dad is tired. I let him have a rest.
刘轩和家人一起去公园野餐。根据图片提示，帮刘轩写一写公园里有什么，以及他是如何关心家人的，不少于6句。
It is Sunday. My family and I are in the park. There are
some trees and flowers. There is a swing
.We play and have a picnic. Dad is tired. I let him have a rest.
Mum is thirsty. I give her some water. My sister is hungry. I give her some bread. We have a good time together.
答案：七、示例: It is Sunday. My family and I are in the park. There are some trees and flowers. There is a swing. We play and have a picnic. Dad is tired. I let him have a rest. Mum is thirsty. I give her some water. My sister is hungry. I give her some bread. We have a good time together.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确写作要求：一是要描述公园里存在的事物，二是要写出刘轩关心家人的具体行为，总句数不少于6句，还要结合给出的半开放开头和图片信息。第一步先处理第一个填空：前面是There are，需要填入复数形式的公园景物，观察图片能看到树木、花朵，所以先填对应的内容，还可以补充图里的秋千，让公园场景更饱满。第二步顺着题干已经给出的“爸爸累了我让他休息”的逻辑，依次观察图里其他家人的状态：妈妈正在喝水，对应妈妈口渴，我给她递饮品的关心行为；旁边的小妹妹正接过我递的食物，对应妹妹饿了我给她分享食物的行为，最后补充全家野餐很开心的收尾句，就能满足所有要求，语句也连贯自然。
【解析】
解：
1. 第一空结合图片中的景物，用there be句型的复数结构填入公园的事物：some trees and flowers，还可以额外补充"There is a swing in the park too"来丰富公园场景描述。
2. 顺着前文的叙事逻辑，结合图片细节补充后续内容：首先对应妈妈喝水的状态，写出"Mum is thirsty. I give her some water."，再对应我给妹妹递食物的画面，写出"My sister is hungry. I give her some bread."，最后补充收尾句"We have a good time together."，最终得到完整通顺的短文。
【答案】
示例: It is Sunday. My family and I are in the park. There are some trees and flowers. There is a swing. We play and have a picnic. Dad is tired. I let him have a rest. Mum is thirsty. I give her some water. My sister is hungry. I give her some bread. We have a good time together.
【知识点】
There be句型；英语情景写作；图文信息匹配
【点评】
本题属于小学英语半开放看图写作题，题干已经给出部分开头内容降低了写作门槛，学生只需要结合图片提取公园景物、家人状态的相关信息，顺着已有叙事逻辑补充内容即可，注意保证语句语法正确、内容贴合图片、句数满足要求就可以拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先明确写作要求：一是要描述公园里存在的事物，二是要写出刘轩关心家人的具体行为，总句数不少于6句，还要结合给出的半开放开头和图片信息。第一步先处理第一个填空：前面是There are，需要填入复数形式的公园景物，观察图片能看到树木、花朵，所以先填对应的内容，还可以补充图里的秋千，让公园场景更饱满。第二步顺着题干已经给出的“爸爸累了我让他休息”的逻辑，依次观察图里其他家人的状态：妈妈正在喝水，对应妈妈口渴，我给她递饮品的关心行为；旁边的小妹妹正接过我递的食物，对应妹妹饿了我给她分享食物的行为，最后补充全家野餐很开心的收尾句，就能满足所有要求，语句也连贯自然。
【解析】
解：
1. 第一空结合图片中的景物，用there be句型的复数结构填入公园的事物：some trees and flowers，还可以额外补充"There is a swing in the park too"来丰富公园场景描述。
2. 顺着前文的叙事逻辑，结合图片细节补充后续内容：首先对应妈妈喝水的状态，写出"Mum is thirsty. I give her some water."，再对应我给妹妹递食物的画面，写出"My sister is hungry. I give her some bread."，最后补充收尾句"We have a good time together."，最终得到完整通顺的短文。
【答案】
示例: It is Sunday. My family and I are in the park. There are some trees and flowers. There is a swing. We play and have a picnic. Dad is tired. I let him have a rest. Mum is thirsty. I give her some water. My sister is hungry. I give her some bread. We have a good time together.
【知识点】
There be句型；英语情景写作；图文信息匹配
【点评】
本题属于小学英语半开放看图写作题，题干已经给出部分开头内容降低了写作门槛，学生只需要结合图片提取公园景物、家人状态的相关信息，顺着已有叙事逻辑补充内容即可，注意保证语句语法正确、内容贴合图片、句数满足要求就可以拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.7