六、短文仿写。
Look at the picture. My friends and I are in the school garden. It is sunny. The garden is beautiful. There are some flowers in the garden. There is also a big tree. There is a beautiful butterfly by the tree. We draw some nice pictures. We have a good time together.
Look at the picture. My friends and I are in the park.
Look at the picture. My friends and I are in the school garden. It is sunny. The garden is beautiful. There are some flowers in the garden. There is also a big tree. There is a beautiful butterfly by the tree. We draw some nice pictures. We have a good time together.
Look at the picture. My friends and I are in the park.
It is sunny. The park is beautiful. There are many trees in the park. There are some birds in the trees. There is also a lake in the park. There are some ducks on the lake. We go boating in the park. We have great fun together.
答案：示例: Look at the picture. My friends and I are in the park. It is sunny. The park is beautiful. There are many trees in the park. There are some birds in the trees. There is also a lake in the park. There are some ducks on the lake. We go boating in the park. We have great fun together.
解析：
【分析】
首先先拆解给出的参考范文的行文逻辑：范文的结构依次是「交代当日天气→描述所在场所的整体特点→用There be句型逐一介绍场所内的各类景物→描述人物开展的对应活动→最后总结大家游玩的愉悦感受」。现在仿写的场景是公园，我们只需要顺着这个固定结构，替换成公园对应的天气、公园整体特点、公园常见的景物、适配公园的游玩活动，保证语法通顺、符合场景逻辑，就能完成仿写。
【解析】
1. 第一步对应范文的天气描写，补充天气描述：It is sunny.
2. 第二步对应范文的场所整体描写，描述公园的观感：The park is beautiful.
3. 第三步使用There be句型列举公园的典型景物，先写公园里的树木：There are many trees in the park. 接着写树上的小鸟：There are some birds in the trees. 再补充公园常见的湖：There is also a lake in the park. 最后写湖面上的鸭子：There are some ducks on the lake.
4. 第四步对应范文的人物活动描写，写出适配公园的活动：We go boating in the park.
5. 最后收尾对应范文的心情总结，改写为符合公园场景的表达：We have great fun together.
整体句式和范文保持对应，没有超纲词汇，语法完全正确。
【答案】
示例: Look at the picture. My friends and I are in the park. It is sunny. The park is beautiful. There are many trees in the park. There are some birds in the trees. There is also a lake in the park. There are some ducks on the lake. We go boating in the park. We have great fun together.
【知识点】
1. 英语短文仿写
2. There be句型
3. 场景景物描写
【点评】
本题属于基础的英语写作仿写题，不需要学生自主搭建行文框架，只需要先梳理参考范文的固定写作逻辑，结合公园的常见元素替换对应内容即可完成，写作时注意There be句型的就近原则，保证名词单复数和be动词匹配，就能拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.8
首先先拆解给出的参考范文的行文逻辑：范文的结构依次是「交代当日天气→描述所在场所的整体特点→用There be句型逐一介绍场所内的各类景物→描述人物开展的对应活动→最后总结大家游玩的愉悦感受」。现在仿写的场景是公园，我们只需要顺着这个固定结构，替换成公园对应的天气、公园整体特点、公园常见的景物、适配公园的游玩活动，保证语法通顺、符合场景逻辑，就能完成仿写。
【解析】
1. 第一步对应范文的天气描写，补充天气描述：It is sunny.
2. 第二步对应范文的场所整体描写，描述公园的观感：The park is beautiful.
3. 第三步使用There be句型列举公园的典型景物，先写公园里的树木：There are many trees in the park. 接着写树上的小鸟：There are some birds in the trees. 再补充公园常见的湖：There is also a lake in the park. 最后写湖面上的鸭子：There are some ducks on the lake.
4. 第四步对应范文的人物活动描写，写出适配公园的活动：We go boating in the park.
5. 最后收尾对应范文的心情总结，改写为符合公园场景的表达：We have great fun together.
整体句式和范文保持对应，没有超纲词汇，语法完全正确。
【答案】
示例: Look at the picture. My friends and I are in the park. It is sunny. The park is beautiful. There are many trees in the park. There are some birds in the trees. There is also a lake in the park. There are some ducks on the lake. We go boating in the park. We have great fun together.
【知识点】
1. 英语短文仿写
2. There be句型
3. 场景景物描写
【点评】
本题属于基础的英语写作仿写题，不需要学生自主搭建行文框架，只需要先梳理参考范文的固定写作逻辑，结合公园的常见元素替换对应内容即可完成，写作时注意There be句型的就近原则，保证名词单复数和be动词匹配，就能拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.8