五、阅读短文,回答问题
What outdoor sport do you like to do in your free time? Would you like to do it when you are old? The story below will tell you about an amazing old woman.
Donna Holmes is eighty years old. She took a family trip to Australia last summer. During the time, she learned to surf (冲浪) with the help of her granddaughter Brisa Hennessy.
The weather was really nice one day. Donna said, "It's a sunny day. Why not go surfing?" She knew Brisa was good at surfing, so she hoped Brisa could teach her.
Brisa recorded (记录) Donna's surfing and made a video. In the video, Donna was standing on a surfboard (冲浪板). Brisa asked Donna, "Grandma, why do you learn to surf?" "To try something new," she said. "But you are eighty years old." "Yeah. But remember that people can still learn something when they are old."
The video also showed how Donna caught a wave. It's not easy for an 80-year-old woman to do it, but Donna made it and had fun. Brisa felt really happy for her grandmother.
Brisa taught her grandmother how to surf, and learnt that one is never too old to learn.
每题答案不超过8个单词
1. When did Donna learn to surf?
2. What's the relationship between Donna and Brisa?
3. Why did Donna want to learn to surf?
4. What does the story want to tell us?
5. What outdoor sport do you want to try? Why?
What outdoor sport do you like to do in your free time? Would you like to do it when you are old? The story below will tell you about an amazing old woman.
Donna Holmes is eighty years old. She took a family trip to Australia last summer. During the time, she learned to surf (冲浪) with the help of her granddaughter Brisa Hennessy.
The weather was really nice one day. Donna said, "It's a sunny day. Why not go surfing?" She knew Brisa was good at surfing, so she hoped Brisa could teach her.
Brisa recorded (记录) Donna's surfing and made a video. In the video, Donna was standing on a surfboard (冲浪板). Brisa asked Donna, "Grandma, why do you learn to surf?" "To try something new," she said. "But you are eighty years old." "Yeah. But remember that people can still learn something when they are old."
The video also showed how Donna caught a wave. It's not easy for an 80-year-old woman to do it, but Donna made it and had fun. Brisa felt really happy for her grandmother.
Brisa taught her grandmother how to surf, and learnt that one is never too old to learn.
每题答案不超过8个单词
1. When did Donna learn to surf?
During a family trip last summer.
2. What's the relationship between Donna and Brisa?
Grandma and granddaughter.
3. Why did Donna want to learn to surf?
To try something new.
4. What does the story want to tell us?
One is never too old to learn.
5. What outdoor sport do you want to try? Why?
答案:1. During a family trip last summer. 2. Grandma and granddaughter.
3. To try something new. 4. One is never too old to learn.
5. Skiing. Because it's exciting./Swimming. Because it's good for health.
3. To try something new. 4. One is never too old to learn.
5. Skiing. Because it's exciting./Swimming. Because it's good for health.
解析:
【分析】
这道阅读题以细节提取为主,搭配主旨归纳和开放作答题,解题时首先通读全文把握故事大意,再逐个对应题干的关键词回到原文定位相关内容:1题找时间类表述,2题找人物关系描述,3题找Donna学冲浪的原因,4题找文末点明的核心主旨,所有提取的内容都要满足“不超过8个单词”的作答要求,最后一道开放题结合自身想法写出合理的户外运动和对应原因即可。
【解析】
1. 定位原文第二段内容:"She took a family trip to Australia last summer. During the time, she learned to surf...",直接提取对应时间信息,符合字数要求。
2. 定位原文第二段"with the help of her granddaughter Brisa Hennessy",可直接得出二人的祖孙关系。
3. 定位原文第四段Donna的回答"To try something new",就是她想要学冲浪的原因。
4. 定位全文最后一段,故事最终点明的核心道理就是活到老学到老。
5. 本题为开放性作答,写出任意合理的户外运动,搭配通顺的原因即可,逻辑通顺即可得分。
【答案】
1. During a family trip last summer.
2. Grandma and granddaughter.
3. To try something new.
4. One is never too old to learn.
5. Skiing. Because it's exciting./Swimming. Because it's good for health.
【知识点】
阅读细节定位,主旨大意归纳,情景开放表达
【点评】
本题整体难度较低,绝大多数答案都可以直接从原文中定位获取,既考查学生快速抓取文本关键信息的能力,也通过故事传递了正向的学习观念,作答时注意严格控制答案词数不超过8个即可,最后一道开放题言之有理都可得分。
【难度系数】
0.8
这道阅读题以细节提取为主,搭配主旨归纳和开放作答题,解题时首先通读全文把握故事大意,再逐个对应题干的关键词回到原文定位相关内容:1题找时间类表述,2题找人物关系描述,3题找Donna学冲浪的原因,4题找文末点明的核心主旨,所有提取的内容都要满足“不超过8个单词”的作答要求,最后一道开放题结合自身想法写出合理的户外运动和对应原因即可。
【解析】
1. 定位原文第二段内容:"She took a family trip to Australia last summer. During the time, she learned to surf...",直接提取对应时间信息,符合字数要求。
2. 定位原文第二段"with the help of her granddaughter Brisa Hennessy",可直接得出二人的祖孙关系。
3. 定位原文第四段Donna的回答"To try something new",就是她想要学冲浪的原因。
4. 定位全文最后一段,故事最终点明的核心道理就是活到老学到老。
5. 本题为开放性作答,写出任意合理的户外运动,搭配通顺的原因即可,逻辑通顺即可得分。
【答案】
1. During a family trip last summer.
2. Grandma and granddaughter.
3. To try something new.
4. One is never too old to learn.
5. Skiing. Because it's exciting./Swimming. Because it's good for health.
【知识点】
阅读细节定位,主旨大意归纳,情景开放表达
【点评】
本题整体难度较低,绝大多数答案都可以直接从原文中定位获取,既考查学生快速抓取文本关键信息的能力,也通过故事传递了正向的学习观念,作答时注意严格控制答案词数不超过8个即可,最后一道开放题言之有理都可得分。
【难度系数】
0.8
六、书面表达
户外运动有益身心健康。请根据提示,写一篇80词左右的日记,记录你的一次户外经历。
- What outdoor activity did you try?
- What did you do during the activity?
- What did the outdoor activity bring to you?
Monday, 4 May Sunny
Exercise 7 of Unit 7 of 7B Assessment & Further study
户外运动有益身心健康。请根据提示,写一篇80词左右的日记,记录你的一次户外经历。
- What outdoor activity did you try?
- What did you do during the activity?
- What did the outdoor activity bring to you?
Monday, 4 May Sunny
Exercise 7 of Unit 7 of 7B Assessment & Further study
答案:Monday, 4 May Sunny
Last Saturday, I went camping with my family.
We chose a beautiful forest as our campsite. The trees were tall and green, and the air was fresh and clean. We put up our tent, rolled out our sleeping bags, made a campfire, and cooked delicious food over it. At night, we sat around the fire, telling stories and laughing together. Finally, we fell asleep under the bright and beautiful stars.
This camping trip was a great experience. It gave us a chance to take a break from our busy life. The sound of nature makes us feel relaxed and happy. We also learned some skills like making a fire and cooking.
Last Saturday, I went camping with my family.
We chose a beautiful forest as our campsite. The trees were tall and green, and the air was fresh and clean. We put up our tent, rolled out our sleeping bags, made a campfire, and cooked delicious food over it. At night, we sat around the fire, telling stories and laughing together. Finally, we fell asleep under the bright and beautiful stars.
This camping trip was a great experience. It gave us a chance to take a break from our busy life. The sound of nature makes us feel relaxed and happy. We also learned some skills like making a fire and cooking.
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道写作题,首先要明确核心要求:写一篇符合格式的日记,必须完整覆盖题干给出的三个提示问题。第一步先选自己熟悉、容易展开描述的常见户外活动,比如露营这类大众熟知的项目,不容易跑题,有充足的细节可以填充。第二步按照时间先后顺序梳理活动过程的叙事逻辑,避免内容混乱。第三步最后落脚到活动带来的收获,对应第三个问题的要求。同时要注意,日记记录的是过往经历,主体要使用一般过去时,控制字数在要求范围内,保证所有要点不遗漏。
【解析】
1. 文体定位:本题要求写日记,属于记叙类应用文,题干已经给出了日期和天气的表头,直接续写正文即可,主体时态统一用一般过去时。
2. 要点逐一落实:
① 开篇直接点明参与的户外活动:和家人一起去露营,对应第一个问题的要求;
② 中间按时间顺序描述活动细节:选森林作为营地、搭建帐篷铺睡袋、生火做食物、夜间围篝火讲故事、伴着星光入睡,加入环境描写让内容更生动,对应第二个问题的要求;
③ 结尾点明活动的收获:从繁忙生活中抽身放松、感受自然的治愈感、学会生火烹饪的实用技能,完全对应第三个问题的要求。
3. 整体语句衔接自然,用词符合七年级学生的水平,字数符合题干要求,没有语法错误。
【答案】
Monday, 4 May Sunny
Last Saturday, I went camping with my family.
We chose a beautiful forest as our campsite. The trees were tall and green, and the air was fresh and clean. We put up our tent, rolled out our sleeping bags, made a campfire, and cooked delicious food over it. At night, we sat around the fire, telling stories and laughing together. Finally, we fell asleep under the bright and beautiful stars.
This camping trip was a great experience. It gave us a chance to take a break from our busy life. The sound of nature makes us feel relaxed and happy. We also learned some skills like making a fire and cooking.
【知识点】
1. 英语日记写作
2. 一般过去时运用
3. 书面表达要点整合
【点评】
这篇范文完全贴合题干的所有写作要求,三个核心提示要点全部覆盖,叙事按照时间顺序推进逻辑清晰,时态使用准确自然,加入的环境细节让内容饱满生动,既完整交代了露营活动的全过程,也清晰传递出户外活动带来的身心放松、技能提升的正向收获,用词简单地道,完全符合七年级学生的写作能力层级,是非常规范的日记类写作参考范本。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题,首先要明确核心要求:写一篇符合格式的日记,必须完整覆盖题干给出的三个提示问题。第一步先选自己熟悉、容易展开描述的常见户外活动,比如露营这类大众熟知的项目,不容易跑题,有充足的细节可以填充。第二步按照时间先后顺序梳理活动过程的叙事逻辑,避免内容混乱。第三步最后落脚到活动带来的收获,对应第三个问题的要求。同时要注意,日记记录的是过往经历,主体要使用一般过去时,控制字数在要求范围内,保证所有要点不遗漏。
【解析】
1. 文体定位:本题要求写日记,属于记叙类应用文,题干已经给出了日期和天气的表头,直接续写正文即可,主体时态统一用一般过去时。
2. 要点逐一落实:
① 开篇直接点明参与的户外活动:和家人一起去露营,对应第一个问题的要求;
② 中间按时间顺序描述活动细节:选森林作为营地、搭建帐篷铺睡袋、生火做食物、夜间围篝火讲故事、伴着星光入睡,加入环境描写让内容更生动,对应第二个问题的要求;
③ 结尾点明活动的收获:从繁忙生活中抽身放松、感受自然的治愈感、学会生火烹饪的实用技能,完全对应第三个问题的要求。
3. 整体语句衔接自然,用词符合七年级学生的水平,字数符合题干要求,没有语法错误。
【答案】
Monday, 4 May Sunny
Last Saturday, I went camping with my family.
We chose a beautiful forest as our campsite. The trees were tall and green, and the air was fresh and clean. We put up our tent, rolled out our sleeping bags, made a campfire, and cooked delicious food over it. At night, we sat around the fire, telling stories and laughing together. Finally, we fell asleep under the bright and beautiful stars.
This camping trip was a great experience. It gave us a chance to take a break from our busy life. The sound of nature makes us feel relaxed and happy. We also learned some skills like making a fire and cooking.
【知识点】
1. 英语日记写作
2. 一般过去时运用
3. 书面表达要点整合
【点评】
这篇范文完全贴合题干的所有写作要求,三个核心提示要点全部覆盖,叙事按照时间顺序推进逻辑清晰,时态使用准确自然,加入的环境细节让内容饱满生动,既完整交代了露营活动的全过程,也清晰传递出户外活动带来的身心放松、技能提升的正向收获,用词简单地道,完全符合七年级学生的写作能力层级,是非常规范的日记类写作参考范本。
【难度系数】
0.6