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五、书面表达
家是每个人心中宁静的港湾。每个人的家有着不一样的布局,演绎着不同的故事。请你根据以下提示内容,写一篇文章,向大家介绍一下你的家。

Hello, everyone. I'm glad to introduce my home to you all.







Exercise 7 of Unit 1 of 7B Assessment & Further study
答案:Hello, everyone. I'm glad to introduce my home to you all.
I live in a flat in a tall building with twenty floors in the city centre. Our flat is on the tenth floor. It is 90 square metres in area. We have a living room, two bedrooms, a kitchen and a bathroom. We also have a very nice balcony.
I like the balcony best because my whole family often chat there after dinner. We would like to share each other's daily life and enjoy the beautiful night view. It's very relaxing.
My home is not very big, but it's really comfortable to live in it with my family. It's a place full of love and happiness.
解析:
【分析】
这是一篇七年级的介绍类书面表达,解题时首先要明确题目通过思维导图给出的四个写作维度,按照提示顺序依次填充内容:第一步先对应第一个问题,交代家的类型、所处位置、面积大小等基础属性;第二步对应第二个问题,逐一介绍屋内包含的不同功能房间,把家的布局讲清楚;第三步对应第三个问题,选出自己最喜欢的家中区域,结合日常生活场景说明喜欢的理由,让内容更有真情实感;第四步对应最后一个问题,总结自己对家的整体感受,升华主题。写作时注意衔接已给出的开头,使用符合七年级水平的词汇和句式,保证所有提示要点都覆盖到,逻辑通顺无语法错误即可。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头,首先介绍家的基本特征:说明自己住在市中心20层高楼的公寓里,家在10楼,总面积90平,完成第一个维度“描述家的类型、大小”的写作要求。
2. 接下来介绍屋内布局:依次列出家中的客厅、两间卧室、厨房、卫生间,还有一处漂亮的阳台,完成第二个维度“介绍屋内不同房间”的写作要求。
3. 之后说明自己最喜爱的区域是阳台,解释原因:晚饭后全家人常在这里聊天,分享日常琐事、欣赏夜景,非常放松,完成第三个维度“说明最喜欢的地方及理由”的写作要求。
4. 最后收尾抒发感受:点明家虽然不大,但和家人同住十分舒适,是充满爱与幸福的地方,完成第四个维度“表达对家的整体评价”的写作要求,通读全文检查语法错误,保证语句连贯自然。
【答案】
Hello, everyone. I'm glad to introduce my home to you all.
I live in a flat in a tall building with twenty floors in the city centre. Our flat is on the tenth floor. It is 90 square metres in area. We have a living room, two bedrooms, a kitchen and a bathroom. We also have a very nice balcony.
I like the balcony best because my whole family often chat there after dinner. We would like to share each other's daily life and enjoy the beautiful night view. It's very relaxing.
My home is not very big, but it's really comfortable to live in it with my family. It's a place full of love and happiness.
【知识点】
英语介绍类写作,家居词汇运用,写作要点覆盖
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题目给出的所有提示要点,行文逻辑层层递进,从客观介绍家的基本情况、内部布局,过渡到主观的喜好理由,最后抒发对家的情感,紧扣“My Sweet Home”的主题,用词简单贴合七年级学生的学习水平,没有复杂的超纲句式,情感真挚自然,是一篇非常规范的初中低年级介绍类写作范例。学生完成同类写作时,优先把题干给出的所有提示点全部写全,再适当补充细节丰富内容,就能轻松拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
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