六、书面表达
作为一座历史文化名城,无锡自古以来就是文人墨客笔下的常客。假如你的加拿大笔友想了解无锡,请你根据以下提示,写一篇80词左右的文章,简单介绍一下无锡。
Exercise 7 of Unit 3 of 7B Assessment & Further study
作为一座历史文化名城,无锡自古以来就是文人墨客笔下的常客。假如你的加拿大笔友想了解无锡,请你根据以下提示,写一篇80词左右的文章,简单介绍一下无锡。
Exercise 7 of Unit 3 of 7B Assessment & Further study
答案：Wuxi is in the south of Jiangsu Province. It is a beautiful city by the Taihu Lake.
Wuxi is famous for its ancient towns. Every year, millions of visitors come to Wuxi to enjoy the peace and quiet of these towns, Also, Yuantouzhu is really worth visiting. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing here. You can also take a boat trip on the Taihu Lake to enjoy the nice view of Yuantouzhu.
Feeling hungry? Try some delicious xiaolongbao in one of the local restaurants. You will love them.
Wuxi is a wonderful place for people to live. It's well worth a visit.
Wuxi is famous for its ancient towns. Every year, millions of visitors come to Wuxi to enjoy the peace and quiet of these towns, Also, Yuantouzhu is really worth visiting. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing here. You can also take a boat trip on the Taihu Lake to enjoy the nice view of Yuantouzhu.
Feeling hungry? Try some delicious xiaolongbao in one of the local restaurants. You will love them.
Wuxi is a wonderful place for people to live. It's well worth a visit.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先明确写作要求：需要给加拿大笔友介绍无锡，要覆盖图中所有提示信息，篇幅控制在80词左右。我们可以按照从基础信息到特色内容的逻辑排布：第一步先开篇点明无锡的地理位置，把“位于江苏南部、毗邻太湖”的区位信息交代清楚；第二步介绍当地名胜，先写提示里的众多古镇，再结合太湖配图补充合理的游玩细节让内容更生动；第三步引出特色美食小笼包，完成美食部分的介绍；最后收尾总结，推荐无锡值得游览，整个行文逻辑流畅，也适配七年级的英语词汇水平。
【解析】
本篇书面表达采用清晰的总-分-总结构完成：
1. 开篇引入：直接点明无锡的地理位置，完整覆盖提示给出的两个位置要点，开门见山让读者快速了解无锡的基础区位。
2. 景点介绍部分：先说明无锡以古镇闻名，补充游客来此感受水乡静谧的内容，再结合太湖景观补充鼋头渚的游玩体验，比如赏花听鸟、乘船游湖赏景，内容贴合实际不生硬。
3. 美食介绍部分：自然过渡到美食推荐，引出当地特色小笼包，引导读者体验本地美味。
4. 结尾总结：点明无锡是宜居城市，非常值得游览，完成整篇介绍。
全文用词贴合七年级下册的学习内容，无超纲表达，所有提示要点全部覆盖，行文流畅自然。
【答案】
Wuxi is in the south of Jiangsu Province. It is a beautiful city by the Taihu Lake.
Wuxi is famous for its ancient towns. Every year, millions of visitors come to Wuxi to enjoy the peace and quiet of these towns. Also, Yuantouzhu is really worth visiting. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing here. You can also take a boat trip on the Taihu Lake to enjoy the nice view of Yuantouzhu.
Feeling hungry? Try some delicious xiaolongbao in one of the local restaurants. You will love them.
Wuxi is a wonderful place for people to live. It's well worth a visit.
【知识点】
地点类英语写作
方位介词表达
景点描述句型
【点评】
本题是七年级下册的单元配套基础写作题，属于城市介绍类的应用文写作，题干给出的提示要点清晰明确，既考察学生对本单元方位描述、景点相关词汇的掌握程度，也锻炼学生梳理信息、排布行文逻辑的能力，学生只需要在给定要点基础上补充少量符合实际的游玩细节，就能写出内容饱满通顺的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先先明确写作要求：需要给加拿大笔友介绍无锡，要覆盖图中所有提示信息，篇幅控制在80词左右。我们可以按照从基础信息到特色内容的逻辑排布：第一步先开篇点明无锡的地理位置，把“位于江苏南部、毗邻太湖”的区位信息交代清楚；第二步介绍当地名胜，先写提示里的众多古镇，再结合太湖配图补充合理的游玩细节让内容更生动；第三步引出特色美食小笼包，完成美食部分的介绍；最后收尾总结，推荐无锡值得游览，整个行文逻辑流畅，也适配七年级的英语词汇水平。
【解析】
本篇书面表达采用清晰的总-分-总结构完成：
1. 开篇引入：直接点明无锡的地理位置，完整覆盖提示给出的两个位置要点，开门见山让读者快速了解无锡的基础区位。
2. 景点介绍部分：先说明无锡以古镇闻名，补充游客来此感受水乡静谧的内容，再结合太湖景观补充鼋头渚的游玩体验，比如赏花听鸟、乘船游湖赏景，内容贴合实际不生硬。
3. 美食介绍部分：自然过渡到美食推荐，引出当地特色小笼包，引导读者体验本地美味。
4. 结尾总结：点明无锡是宜居城市，非常值得游览，完成整篇介绍。
全文用词贴合七年级下册的学习内容，无超纲表达，所有提示要点全部覆盖，行文流畅自然。
【答案】
Wuxi is in the south of Jiangsu Province. It is a beautiful city by the Taihu Lake.
Wuxi is famous for its ancient towns. Every year, millions of visitors come to Wuxi to enjoy the peace and quiet of these towns. Also, Yuantouzhu is really worth visiting. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing here. You can also take a boat trip on the Taihu Lake to enjoy the nice view of Yuantouzhu.
Feeling hungry? Try some delicious xiaolongbao in one of the local restaurants. You will love them.
Wuxi is a wonderful place for people to live. It's well worth a visit.
【知识点】
地点类英语写作
方位介词表达
景点描述句型
【点评】
本题是七年级下册的单元配套基础写作题，属于城市介绍类的应用文写作，题干给出的提示要点清晰明确，既考察学生对本单元方位描述、景点相关词汇的掌握程度，也锻炼学生梳理信息、排布行文逻辑的能力，学生只需要在给定要点基础上补充少量符合实际的游玩细节，就能写出内容饱满通顺的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7