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八、书面表达(25分)
假设你们学校下周将举办慈善日活动,当天安排了以下三项活动。请选择其中一项参与,
写一篇90词左右的英语短文,并说明你选择该活动的理由、具体规划以及期望达成的愿望。开
头已给出,不计入总词数。

Next week's Charity Day offers three meaningful activities,and I decide to visit











答案:Next week's Charity Day offers three meaningful activities, and I decide to visit the House for the Orphans.
The children without parents often feel lonely. Many of them have no confidence to communicate with others. It's necessary for us to show our care and bring warmth to their lives.
Before the visit, I will collect some lovely toys and picture books for them. Besides, my classmates and I plan to organize a charity sale to raise money for them. During the visit, we will play games and tell jokes to cheer them up. We will also listen patiently to their trouble and encourage them to talk more about their dreams.
I hope this visit can help the children build confidence. I also wish more people will pay attention to orphans and give a helping hand.
解析:
【分析】
首先,我们需要明确题目要求:从三个慈善活动中选择一项,撰写一篇90词左右的英语短文,内容需包含选择理由、具体规划和期望愿望,开头已给出。
解题思路:
1. 确定选择的活动:优先选择容易展开内容的选项,比如孤儿院之行,这类主题有较多可写的关爱细节。
2. 阐述理由:从孤儿的处境出发,说明他们缺少陪伴、容易孤独,需要外界的关爱与温暖,点明活动的意义。
3. 规划具体行动:分事前准备(收集玩具、绘本,组织义卖)和活动过程(玩游戏、讲笑话、倾听心声)来写,让内容更具体。
4. 表达期望:从帮助孤儿建立自信,呼吁更多人关注孤儿群体两个角度,升华主题。
5. 注意控制词数,使用符合语境的句式和词汇,保证语句流畅。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:承接给定开头,直接说明选择的活动是the House for the Orphans,明确写作方向。
2. 理由阐述:用简单的句子描述孤儿的心理状态(feel lonely, lack confidence),说明关爱他们的必要性,让文章有情感基础。
3. 具体规划:分Before the visit和During the visit两个部分,分别介绍准备工作和现场活动,内容详实,符合逻辑。
4. 愿望表达:从对孤儿的帮助和呼吁社会关注两个层面,表达活动的期望,让文章更有深度。
5. 全程注意词汇和句式的恰当使用,比如使用"It's necessary for us to..."、"plan to"、"hope to"等结构,保证语言规范,词数符合要求。
【答案】
Next week's Charity Day offers three meaningful activities, and I decide to visit the House for the Orphans.
The children without parents often feel lonely. Many of them have no confidence to communicate with others. It's necessary for us to show our care and bring warmth to their lives.
Before the visit, I will collect some lovely toys and picture books for them. Besides, my classmates and I plan to organize a charity sale to raise money for them. During the visit, we will play games and tell jokes to cheer them up. We will also listen patiently to their trouble and encourage them to talk more about their dreams.
I hope this visit can help the children build confidence. I also wish more people will pay attention to orphans and give a helping hand.
【知识点】
慈善主题写作、记叙文写作、英语话题作文
【点评】
本题围绕慈善活动展开,既考察学生的英语语言组织与表达能力,也引导学生关注弱势群体,培养关爱他人的意识。写作内容需要结合实际,逻辑清晰,既要有具体的行动规划,也要有情感的传递,能较好地体现学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
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