七、书面表达(共1小题;满分25分)
71. 某英文报纸开展了关于生活变化的征文活动,请你根据下表所提示的要点,以"Changes in our life"为题,用英语为该报写一篇稿件,简述家乡、生活、学校及学习方式的若干变化,展望未来生活并说明你如何为此努力。
【注意】1. 作文中必须包含所给的要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数90左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
【参考词汇】path 小路
Changes in our life
With the rapid development of China's economy(经济), great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
71. 某英文报纸开展了关于生活变化的征文活动,请你根据下表所提示的要点,以"Changes in our life"为题,用英语为该报写一篇稿件,简述家乡、生活、学校及学习方式的若干变化,展望未来生活并说明你如何为此努力。
【注意】1. 作文中必须包含所给的要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数90左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
【参考词汇】path 小路
Changes in our life
With the rapid development of China's economy(经济), great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
答案：One possible version:
Changes in our life
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years. In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old ones. There they not only learn from books but also through the Internet.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder from now on so that I can realize my dream.
Changes in our life
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years. In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old ones. There they not only learn from books but also through the Internet.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder from now on so that I can realize my dream.
解析：
【解析】
写作思路：
1. 开篇已给出，后续按照表格提示依次展开内容：
① 家乡部分：描述小路变为宽阔马路，出行变得更便利；
② 生活部分：对比过去人们步行、骑车通勤，现在更多人乘坐公交甚至自驾出行；
③ 学校部分：说明旧校舍变为崭新的教学楼；
④ 学习方式部分：对比过去仅从书本获取知识，现在可以借助互联网拓展学习渠道；
⑤ 收尾部分：展望未来更美好的生活，说明自己会更加努力学习来实现目标。
2. 注意词数控制在90左右，不要逐字翻译提示内容，适当使用衔接词让行文流畅自然，保证语法正确。
参考行文：
In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old ones. There they not only learn from books but also through the Internet.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder from now on so that I can realize my dream.
【答案】
One possible version:
In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old ones. There they not only learn from books but also through the Internet.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder from now on so that I can realize my dream.
【知识点】
英语提示类作文；一般过去时；一般将来时
【点评】
这道书面表达题属于提纲类话题作文，要点清晰明确，学生只需要按照提示覆盖家乡、生活、学校学习的变化，补充展望和自身努力的内容即可，难度适中。写作时要注意避免逐字翻译提示信息，合理使用used to、not only...but also等表达丰富句式，同时控制词数符合要求，保证行文逻辑连贯。
【难度系数】
0.6
写作思路：
1. 开篇已给出，后续按照表格提示依次展开内容：
① 家乡部分：描述小路变为宽阔马路，出行变得更便利；
② 生活部分：对比过去人们步行、骑车通勤，现在更多人乘坐公交甚至自驾出行；
③ 学校部分：说明旧校舍变为崭新的教学楼；
④ 学习方式部分：对比过去仅从书本获取知识，现在可以借助互联网拓展学习渠道；
⑤ 收尾部分：展望未来更美好的生活，说明自己会更加努力学习来实现目标。
2. 注意词数控制在90左右，不要逐字翻译提示内容，适当使用衔接词让行文流畅自然，保证语法正确。
参考行文：
In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old ones. There they not only learn from books but also through the Internet.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder from now on so that I can realize my dream.
【答案】
One possible version:
In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old ones. There they not only learn from books but also through the Internet.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder from now on so that I can realize my dream.
【知识点】
英语提示类作文；一般过去时；一般将来时
【点评】
这道书面表达题属于提纲类话题作文，要点清晰明确，学生只需要按照提示覆盖家乡、生活、学校学习的变化，补充展望和自身努力的内容即可，难度适中。写作时要注意避免逐字翻译提示信息，合理使用used to、not only...but also等表达丰富句式，同时控制词数符合要求，保证行文逻辑连贯。
【难度系数】
0.6