七、书面表达(共1小题;满分25分)
71.《环球时报》目前正举办以"My Country, My Pride"为题的征文活动,这个活动面向全球的青少年,鼓励他们通过文字来介绍自己深爱的祖国。请你写一篇短文投稿,从下面的提示中选择两到三点适当展开,介绍你深爱的祖国。
【注意】1. 词数90左右(开头已写好,不计入总词数)。
2. 短文中不得泄露个人信息。
My Country, My Pride
I come from a great country. It has a beautiful name—China.
71.《环球时报》目前正举办以"My Country, My Pride"为题的征文活动,这个活动面向全球的青少年,鼓励他们通过文字来介绍自己深爱的祖国。请你写一篇短文投稿,从下面的提示中选择两到三点适当展开,介绍你深爱的祖国。
【注意】1. 词数90左右(开头已写好,不计入总词数)。
2. 短文中不得泄露个人信息。
My Country, My Pride
I come from a great country. It has a beautiful name—China.
It is a country with a long history and rich culture. It has amazing attractions like the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Terracotta Army. They all show the wisdom and hard work of Chinese people. China's landscapes are fantastic, from its famous mountains and vast deserts to its lively cities and peaceful villages. Visitors often find them attractive and don't want to leave. Chinese people are friendly, trying to make the country rich and powerful. I love my motherland deeply. And I am proud of its achievements. I will study hard to contribute to its future development.
答案：71. One possible version:
My Country, My Pride
I come from a great country. It has a beautiful name—China. It is a country with a long history and rich culture. It has amazing attractions like the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Terracotta Army. They all show the wisdom and hard work of Chinese people.
China's landscapes are fantastic, from its famous mountains and vast deserts to its lively cities and peaceful villages. Visitors often find them attractive and don't want to leave.
Chinese people are friendly, trying to make the country rich and powerful. I love my motherland deeply. And I am proud of its achievements. I will study hard to contribute to its future development.
My Country, My Pride
I come from a great country. It has a beautiful name—China. It is a country with a long history and rich culture. It has amazing attractions like the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Terracotta Army. They all show the wisdom and hard work of Chinese people.
China's landscapes are fantastic, from its famous mountains and vast deserts to its lively cities and peaceful villages. Visitors often find them attractive and don't want to leave.
Chinese people are friendly, trying to make the country rich and powerful. I love my motherland deeply. And I am proud of its achievements. I will study hard to contribute to its future development.
解析：
【解析】
这是一篇主题征文类书面表达，写作步骤如下：
1. 明确写作要求：围绕"My Country, My Pride"主题，从提示的写作方向中选取2-3个角度展开，词数控制在90左右，已给出的开头不计入总词数，不得泄露个人信息。
2. 选取写作角度：本次参考范文选取历史文化、名胜风光、人民特质三个方向展开：
- 第一部分介绍中国悠久的历史与丰富文化，列举长城、故宫、兵马俑等标志性文化景点，点明其承载的中国人民的智慧与勤劳。
- 第二部分描绘中国多样的自然风光，涵盖名山大漠、城乡风貌，体现景观的吸引力。
- 第三部分刻画中国人民友善奋进的特质，抒发对祖国的热爱与身为国人的自豪，同时表达自己未来为祖国发展贡献力量的决心。
3. 调整语句衔接，保证行文流畅自然，符合词数要求，规避个人隐私信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Country, My Pride
I come from a great country. It has a beautiful name—China. It is a country with a long history and rich culture. It has amazing attractions like the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Terracotta Army. They all show the wisdom and hard work of Chinese people.
China's landscapes are fantastic, from its famous mountains and vast deserts to its lively cities and peaceful villages. Visitors often find them attractive and don't want to leave.
Chinese people are friendly, trying to make the country rich and powerful. I love my motherland deeply. And I am proud of its achievements. I will study hard to contribute to its future development.
【知识点】
英语主题征文写作；英语语句衔接；英语词数控制
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣征文主题，选取的写作角度清晰明确，内容充实积极，语句通顺连贯，符合题目的所有格式与内容要求，既完成了介绍祖国的写作任务，也自然抒发了爱国自豪感，是一篇符合初中英语写作评分标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇主题征文类书面表达，写作步骤如下：
1. 明确写作要求：围绕"My Country, My Pride"主题，从提示的写作方向中选取2-3个角度展开，词数控制在90左右，已给出的开头不计入总词数，不得泄露个人信息。
2. 选取写作角度：本次参考范文选取历史文化、名胜风光、人民特质三个方向展开：
- 第一部分介绍中国悠久的历史与丰富文化，列举长城、故宫、兵马俑等标志性文化景点，点明其承载的中国人民的智慧与勤劳。
- 第二部分描绘中国多样的自然风光，涵盖名山大漠、城乡风貌，体现景观的吸引力。
- 第三部分刻画中国人民友善奋进的特质，抒发对祖国的热爱与身为国人的自豪，同时表达自己未来为祖国发展贡献力量的决心。
3. 调整语句衔接，保证行文流畅自然，符合词数要求，规避个人隐私信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Country, My Pride
I come from a great country. It has a beautiful name—China. It is a country with a long history and rich culture. It has amazing attractions like the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Terracotta Army. They all show the wisdom and hard work of Chinese people.
China's landscapes are fantastic, from its famous mountains and vast deserts to its lively cities and peaceful villages. Visitors often find them attractive and don't want to leave.
Chinese people are friendly, trying to make the country rich and powerful. I love my motherland deeply. And I am proud of its achievements. I will study hard to contribute to its future development.
【知识点】
英语主题征文写作；英语语句衔接；英语词数控制
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣征文主题，选取的写作角度清晰明确，内容充实积极，语句通顺连贯，符合题目的所有格式与内容要求，既完成了介绍祖国的写作任务，也自然抒发了爱国自豪感，是一篇符合初中英语写作评分标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6