七、书面表达(共 1 小题;满分 25 分)
71. 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 对线上旅游很感兴趣。请你根据提示,给他写一封邮件,介绍你通过线上旅游了解连云港的经历。
【提示】1. 你通过一个线上旅游平台游览了连云港。
2. 介绍两个你感兴趣的景点(如花果山、连岛等)。
3. 谈谈你对这次线上旅游的感受。
【要求】1. 词数 90 左右。
2. 内容完整,条理清晰,语句通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
71. 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 对线上旅游很感兴趣。请你根据提示,给他写一封邮件,介绍你通过线上旅游了解连云港的经历。
【提示】1. 你通过一个线上旅游平台游览了连云港。
2. 介绍两个你感兴趣的景点(如花果山、连岛等)。
3. 谈谈你对这次线上旅游的感受。
【要求】1. 词数 90 左右。
2. 内容完整,条理清晰,语句通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
答案：71. One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in online tours. Last week, I took an online tour of Lianyungang through a travel website.
First, I visited Huaguo Mountain, a famous mountain related to the Monkey King. By clicking on the icon, I saw the beautiful Water Curtain Cave. Then I zoomed in on Lian Island Scenic Area, where the golden beach and clear sea looked amazing.
This online tour was convenient and interesting. It let me explore the city without leaving home. I hope you can try it too!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in online tours. Last week, I took an online tour of Lianyungang through a travel website.
First, I visited Huaguo Mountain, a famous mountain related to the Monkey King. By clicking on the icon, I saw the beautiful Water Curtain Cave. Then I zoomed in on Lian Island Scenic Area, where the golden beach and clear sea looked amazing.
This online tour was convenient and interesting. It let me explore the city without leaving home. I hope you can try it too!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：
【解析】
这是一封给笔友的介绍线上游览连云港经历的邮件，写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇点明背景：得知对方对线上旅游感兴趣，引出自己上周通过线上旅游平台游览连云港的经历，符合书信的交际语境。
2. 主体部分依次介绍两个景点：首先介绍和孙悟空相关的花果山，提及水帘洞的游览体验；再介绍连岛景区，描述金色沙滩与澄澈大海的景致，覆盖题目要求的两个景点介绍要点。
3. 收尾部分分享线上旅游足不出户探索城市的便捷有趣的感受，同时向笔友发出尝试的邀约，整体词数控制在90左右，内容完整逻辑通顺，符合所有写作要求。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in online tours. Last week, I took an online tour of Lianyungang through a travel website.
First, I visited Huaguo Mountain, a famous mountain related to the Monkey King. By clicking on the icon, I saw the beautiful Water Curtain Cave. Then I zoomed in on Lian Island Scenic Area, where the golden beach and clear sea looked amazing.
This online tour was convenient and interesting. It let me explore the city without leaving home. I hope you can try it too!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文书信写作，景点话题表达，要点式谋篇布局
【点评】
本篇书面表达完整覆盖了题干给出的所有提示要点，书信格式规范正确，语句流畅自然，景点介绍生动具体，个人感受贴合主题，词数符合要求，没有出现违规的个人信息，是一篇符合评分标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一封给笔友的介绍线上游览连云港经历的邮件，写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇点明背景：得知对方对线上旅游感兴趣，引出自己上周通过线上旅游平台游览连云港的经历，符合书信的交际语境。
2. 主体部分依次介绍两个景点：首先介绍和孙悟空相关的花果山，提及水帘洞的游览体验；再介绍连岛景区，描述金色沙滩与澄澈大海的景致，覆盖题目要求的两个景点介绍要点。
3. 收尾部分分享线上旅游足不出户探索城市的便捷有趣的感受，同时向笔友发出尝试的邀约，整体词数控制在90左右，内容完整逻辑通顺，符合所有写作要求。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in online tours. Last week, I took an online tour of Lianyungang through a travel website.
First, I visited Huaguo Mountain, a famous mountain related to the Monkey King. By clicking on the icon, I saw the beautiful Water Curtain Cave. Then I zoomed in on Lian Island Scenic Area, where the golden beach and clear sea looked amazing.
This online tour was convenient and interesting. It let me explore the city without leaving home. I hope you can try it too!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文书信写作，景点话题表达，要点式谋篇布局
【点评】
本篇书面表达完整覆盖了题干给出的所有提示要点，书信格式规范正确，语句流畅自然，景点介绍生动具体，个人感受贴合主题，词数符合要求，没有出现违规的个人信息，是一篇符合评分标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7