七、书面表达(共1小题;满分25分)(2025·江苏苏州振华中学期中)
71. 你是一名英文视频博主(vlogger),受邀为苏州旅游推广拍摄一期英文短视频。请根据以下提示,撰写视频拍摄脚本(video script),向国际友人介绍苏州城市变迁与旅游特色。
【要点】
【要求】1. 语句通顺,逻辑清晰。
2. 词数:90—100词。文中不得出现真实姓名或校名。
Hi, friends! Today, we're exploring Suzhou, a city where ancient beauty meets modern life.
Don't forget to like and comment below and tell me which spot you'd love to visit! See you next time!
71. 你是一名英文视频博主(vlogger),受邀为苏州旅游推广拍摄一期英文短视频。请根据以下提示,撰写视频拍摄脚本(video script),向国际友人介绍苏州城市变迁与旅游特色。
【要点】
【要求】1. 语句通顺,逻辑清晰。
2. 词数:90—100词。文中不得出现真实姓名或校名。
Hi, friends! Today, we're exploring Suzhou, a city where ancient beauty meets modern life.
Don't forget to like and comment below and tell me which spot you'd love to visit! See you next time!
答案：71.One possible version:
Hi, friends! Today, we're exploring Suzhou, a city where ancient beauty meets modern life.
In the past, Suzhou was famous for its small bridges and flowing water and classical gardens, showing a peaceful and idyllic scene. Now, it has modern buildings and convenient transportation, full of vitality.
I'd like to recommend two spots. The Humble Administrator's Garden is a masterpiece of Chinese classical garden art, where you can feel the elegance and tranquility of the past. And the Gate of the Orient represents the modern side of Suzhou with its unique design.
Come and experience the charm of old and new Suzhou!
Don't forget to like and comment below and tell me which spot you'd love to visit! See you next time!
Hi, friends! Today, we're exploring Suzhou, a city where ancient beauty meets modern life.
In the past, Suzhou was famous for its small bridges and flowing water and classical gardens, showing a peaceful and idyllic scene. Now, it has modern buildings and convenient transportation, full of vitality.
I'd like to recommend two spots. The Humble Administrator's Garden is a masterpiece of Chinese classical garden art, where you can feel the elegance and tranquility of the past. And the Gate of the Orient represents the modern side of Suzhou with its unique design.
Come and experience the charm of old and new Suzhou!
Don't forget to like and comment below and tell me which spot you'd love to visit! See you next time!
解析：
【解析】
这是一篇英文短视频脚本写作题，写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇已给出引入句，首先完成城市变迁部分的表述：对比介绍苏州过去小桥流水、古典园林的温婉风貌，和如今现代化建筑林立、交通便捷的蓬勃新貌，完成第一部分要点覆盖。
2. 接着完成特色推荐部分：选取1-2个代表性景点，比如古典代表拙政园、现代代表东方之门，分别说明各自的特色亮点，让国际友人直观感知苏州的古今魅力。
3. 最后补充诚挚邀请的收尾句，总词数控制在90-100词，保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合博主的口语化表达风格，不出现真实个人信息。
参考完整内容：
In the past, Suzhou was famous for its small bridges, flowing water and classical gardens, showing a peaceful idyllic scene. Now, it has modern buildings and convenient public transport, full of new vitality.
I'd like to recommend two spots. The Humble Administrator's Garden is a classic Chinese garden, where you can feel ancient elegance and quietness. The Gate of the Orient, with its special shape, shows Suzhou's modern side perfectly.
Come and experience the special charm of both old and new Suzhou!
【答案】
One possible version:
In the past, Suzhou was famous for its small bridges and flowing water and classical gardens, showing a peaceful and idyllic scene. Now, it has modern buildings and convenient transportation, full of vitality.
I'd like to recommend two spots. The Humble Administrator's Garden is a masterpiece of Chinese classical garden art, where you can feel the elegance and tranquility of the past. And the Gate of the Orient represents the modern side of Suzhou with its unique design.
Come and experience the charm of old and new Suzhou!
【知识点】
英文应用文写作，话题作文审题，语篇逻辑组织
【点评】
本题贴合生活实际，以旅游推广短视频脚本为写作载体，既考查学生对提示要点的完整覆盖能力，也要求学生能灵活运用所学词汇和句式，用自然流畅的英文传递城市特色，难度适中，需要学生兼顾内容完整性和词数要求，避免出现语法错误。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英文短视频脚本写作题，写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇已给出引入句，首先完成城市变迁部分的表述：对比介绍苏州过去小桥流水、古典园林的温婉风貌，和如今现代化建筑林立、交通便捷的蓬勃新貌，完成第一部分要点覆盖。
2. 接着完成特色推荐部分：选取1-2个代表性景点，比如古典代表拙政园、现代代表东方之门，分别说明各自的特色亮点，让国际友人直观感知苏州的古今魅力。
3. 最后补充诚挚邀请的收尾句，总词数控制在90-100词，保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合博主的口语化表达风格，不出现真实个人信息。
参考完整内容：
In the past, Suzhou was famous for its small bridges, flowing water and classical gardens, showing a peaceful idyllic scene. Now, it has modern buildings and convenient public transport, full of new vitality.
I'd like to recommend two spots. The Humble Administrator's Garden is a classic Chinese garden, where you can feel ancient elegance and quietness. The Gate of the Orient, with its special shape, shows Suzhou's modern side perfectly.
Come and experience the special charm of both old and new Suzhou!
【答案】
One possible version:
In the past, Suzhou was famous for its small bridges and flowing water and classical gardens, showing a peaceful and idyllic scene. Now, it has modern buildings and convenient transportation, full of vitality.
I'd like to recommend two spots. The Humble Administrator's Garden is a masterpiece of Chinese classical garden art, where you can feel the elegance and tranquility of the past. And the Gate of the Orient represents the modern side of Suzhou with its unique design.
Come and experience the charm of old and new Suzhou!
【知识点】
英文应用文写作，话题作文审题，语篇逻辑组织
【点评】
本题贴合生活实际，以旅游推广短视频脚本为写作载体，既考查学生对提示要点的完整覆盖能力，也要求学生能灵活运用所学词汇和句式，用自然流畅的英文传递城市特色，难度适中，需要学生兼顾内容完整性和词数要求，避免出现语法错误。
【难度系数】
0.6