写作演练
Teens' Talk Magazine* 向中学生征集有关
“环保”话题的投稿。假设你是李华,请以
"Protecting the forests"* 为题,从森林的重要性、
人类活动对它的影响、它面临的问题等方面撰
写一篇文章,呼吁人们保护森林,词数 80 左右。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第三人称为主;② 时态:一般现
在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先介绍森林的重要
性,再说它现在面临的严峻问题,并给出解决方
案,最后呼吁人们行动起来,保护森林。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
Teens' Talk Magazine* 向中学生征集有关
“环保”话题的投稿。假设你是李华,请以
"Protecting the forests"* 为题,从森林的重要性、
人类活动对它的影响、它面临的问题等方面撰
写一篇文章,呼吁人们保护森林,词数 80 左右。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第三人称为主;② 时态:一般现
在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先介绍森林的重要
性,再说它现在面临的严峻问题,并给出解决方
案,最后呼吁人们行动起来,保护森林。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance.
They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems.
People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die.
To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper.
Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案：One possible version:
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类英语环保主题写作，解题时首先要紧扣题目要求和给定的三段式框架展开思考：第一步先完成首段，承接已经给出的开头句，按照提示要点依次说明森林的生态价值，先点明森林是动植物的家园，再写它能为人类提供的资源，最后补充其他生态作用，把森林的重要性讲清楚；第二步完成中段，用转折词However引出森林当前面临的现实问题，说明人类破坏森林的行为和带来的危害，再对应给出可落地的解决措施；第三步完成尾段，按照要求发出行动倡议，最后通读全文核对时态、词数，保证逻辑通顺，符合写作规范。
【解析】
1. 填充第一段内容：按照给定的提示句式，补充森林的具体作用：说明森林是无数动植物的栖息地，为人类提供新鲜空气，还可以起到防止水土流失、调节气候的作用，清晰点明森林的重要价值。
2. 填充第二段内容：用However转折引出矛盾，点明森林正面临严重危机，举例说明人类乱砍滥伐的行为，以及该行为对动植物造成的伤害，之后对应给出保护森林的可行方案，比如多植树、减少纸张使用、号召更多人参与护林。
3. 填充第三段内容：按照提示发出行动呼吁，号召大家立刻行动，参与护林活动，做出实际改变。
4. 最终通读全文，核对语法错误，调整内容让总词数符合80左右的要求，保证行文连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
【知识点】
环保类英语写作，一般现在时运用，三段式作文结构
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段常见的提示类主题写作，已经给出了明确的段落框架和参考句式，降低了行文构思的难度，既考查学生对基础英语句式、相关主题词汇的掌握程度，也能引导学生树立保护森林的环保意识，学生写作时注意内容贴合实际、逻辑转折自然即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇提纲类英语环保主题写作，解题时首先要紧扣题目要求和给定的三段式框架展开思考：第一步先完成首段，承接已经给出的开头句，按照提示要点依次说明森林的生态价值，先点明森林是动植物的家园，再写它能为人类提供的资源，最后补充其他生态作用，把森林的重要性讲清楚；第二步完成中段，用转折词However引出森林当前面临的现实问题，说明人类破坏森林的行为和带来的危害，再对应给出可落地的解决措施；第三步完成尾段，按照要求发出行动倡议，最后通读全文核对时态、词数，保证逻辑通顺，符合写作规范。
【解析】
1. 填充第一段内容：按照给定的提示句式，补充森林的具体作用：说明森林是无数动植物的栖息地，为人类提供新鲜空气，还可以起到防止水土流失、调节气候的作用，清晰点明森林的重要价值。
2. 填充第二段内容：用However转折引出矛盾，点明森林正面临严重危机，举例说明人类乱砍滥伐的行为，以及该行为对动植物造成的伤害，之后对应给出保护森林的可行方案，比如多植树、减少纸张使用、号召更多人参与护林。
3. 填充第三段内容：按照提示发出行动呼吁，号召大家立刻行动，参与护林活动，做出实际改变。
4. 最终通读全文，核对语法错误，调整内容让总词数符合80左右的要求，保证行文连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
【知识点】
环保类英语写作，一般现在时运用，三段式作文结构
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段常见的提示类主题写作，已经给出了明确的段落框架和参考句式，降低了行文构思的难度，既考查学生对基础英语句式、相关主题词汇的掌握程度，也能引导学生树立保护森林的环保意识，学生写作时注意内容贴合实际、逻辑转折自然即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6