写作演练
假设你是一只在大自然中奋力求生的野生动物，一天，你意外知晓了WCS（野生动物保护协会）网站，上面人类对野生动物生存现状的热烈讨论深深触动了你。请以你的视角，用英语写一封信，向人类发出保护的恳切呼吁，词数80左右。内容需涵盖：1. What animal are you? 2. What problems do you have? 3. What help do you need?
[思路点拨]
① 人称：以第一人称为主；② 时态：以一般现在时为主；③ 开篇用简短语句介绍自己，然后写出野生动物生存的核心困境，最后提出诉求。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear humans,
I am an Indian tiger.
An Indian tiger
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
假设你是一只在大自然中奋力求生的野生动物，一天，你意外知晓了WCS（野生动物保护协会）网站，上面人类对野生动物生存现状的热烈讨论深深触动了你。请以你的视角，用英语写一封信，向人类发出保护的恳切呼吁，词数80左右。内容需涵盖：1. What animal are you? 2. What problems do you have? 3. What help do you need?
[思路点拨]
① 人称：以第一人称为主；② 时态：以一般现在时为主；③ 开篇用简短语句介绍自己，然后写出野生动物生存的核心困境，最后提出诉求。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear humans,
I am an Indian tiger.
I live in the thick forests and grasslands of India. I mainly eat deer, wild pigs and other small and medium-sized animals.
But now I'm in big trouble. Our living area is getting smaller and smaller because people are cutting down forests to build houses and farmlands.
Also, there are some bad people who hunt us for our beautiful fur and bones.
As a result, our number is dropping quickly.
In the future, I hope you can plant more trees and stop any activities that harm us.
Please don't buy any products made from our body parts.
Also, I hope more people could join in protecting us
and help create a better home for me and my friends.
An Indian tiger
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案：One possible version:
Dear humans,
I am an Indian tiger. I live in the thick forests and grasslands of India. I mainly eat deer, wild pigs and other small and medium-sized animals.
But now I'm in big trouble. Our living area is getting smaller and smaller because people are cutting down forests to build houses and farmlands. Also, there are some bad people who hunt us for our beautiful fur and bones. As a result, our number is dropping quickly.
In the future, I hope you can plant more trees and stop any activities that harm us. Please don't buy any products made from our body parts. Also, I hope more people could join in protecting us and help create a better home for me and my friends.
An Indian tiger
Dear humans,
I am an Indian tiger. I live in the thick forests and grasslands of India. I mainly eat deer, wild pigs and other small and medium-sized animals.
But now I'm in big trouble. Our living area is getting smaller and smaller because people are cutting down forests to build houses and farmlands. Also, there are some bad people who hunt us for our beautiful fur and bones. As a result, our number is dropping quickly.
In the future, I hope you can plant more trees and stop any activities that harm us. Please don't buy any products made from our body parts. Also, I hope more people could join in protecting us and help create a better home for me and my friends.
An Indian tiger
解析：
【分析】
这道题要求以第一人称野生动物的视角写一封呼吁人类保护动物的英文信，解题时可以按照题目给出的三段式要点提示逐步完成：第一步先完成开篇自我介绍，对应表格第一段的提示，补充清楚自己的物种、居住环境、主要食物，把身份信息交代完整；第二步写生存困境，用指定的"But now I'm in big trouble"开头，先说明栖息地被破坏的现状，再补充人类非法捕猎的问题，把当前遇到的危机讲清楚；第三步写诉求与呼吁，按照第三段的提示，依次写出希望人类开展的保护行动、禁止的伤害行为，最后发出美好愿景，全程保持第一人称叙事，统一使用一般现在时，控制内容连贯不遗漏三个核心写作要求即可。
【解析】
1. 完成第一段：在给出的"I am an Indian tiger."之后，按照提示补充居住地点和食性，交代清楚自身基本信息：I live in the thick forests and grasslands of India. I mainly eat deer, wild pigs and other small and medium-sized animals.
2. 完成第二段：以指定提示句"But now I'm in big trouble."开头，先说明栖息地缩小的原因，再补充非法捕猎的危害，点明种群数量下降的现状：Our living area is getting smaller and smaller because people are cutting down forests to build houses and farmlands. Also, there are some bad people who hunt us for our beautiful fur and bones. As a result, our number is dropping quickly.
3. 完成第三段：按照提示结构依次提出保护诉求，先说明希望人类开展的正向行动，再点明禁止的伤害行为，最后发出共同守护家园的呼吁：In the future, I hope you can plant more trees and stop any activities that harm us. Please don't buy any products made from our body parts. Also, I hope more people could join in protecting us and help create a better home for me and my friends.
最后检查全文格式、人称、时态，确认三个核心写作要点全部覆盖，语句通顺符合逻辑。
【答案】
Dear humans,
I am an Indian tiger. I live in the thick forests and grasslands of India. I mainly eat deer, wild pigs and other small and medium-sized animals.
But now I'm in big trouble. Our living area is getting smaller and smaller because people are cutting down forests to build houses and farmlands. Also, there are some bad people who hunt us for our beautiful fur and bones. As a result, our number is dropping quickly.
In the future, I hope you can plant more trees and stop any activities that harm us. Please don't buy any products made from our body parts. Also, I hope more people could join in protecting us and help create a better home for me and my friends.
An Indian tiger
【知识点】
英文书信写作
主题词汇运用
一般现在时
【点评】
本题属于情景引导类英语写作题，题目给出了明确的三段式结构框架和相关素材参考，降低了写作门槛，学生只需要紧扣"介绍自身、说明困境、提出诉求"三个核心要求，保持第一人称叙事、统一使用一般现在时即可完成写作，适当融入给出的保护动物相关素材可以让作文内容更饱满，表达更出彩。
【难度系数】
0.6
这道题要求以第一人称野生动物的视角写一封呼吁人类保护动物的英文信，解题时可以按照题目给出的三段式要点提示逐步完成：第一步先完成开篇自我介绍，对应表格第一段的提示，补充清楚自己的物种、居住环境、主要食物，把身份信息交代完整；第二步写生存困境，用指定的"But now I'm in big trouble"开头，先说明栖息地被破坏的现状，再补充人类非法捕猎的问题，把当前遇到的危机讲清楚；第三步写诉求与呼吁，按照第三段的提示，依次写出希望人类开展的保护行动、禁止的伤害行为，最后发出美好愿景，全程保持第一人称叙事，统一使用一般现在时，控制内容连贯不遗漏三个核心写作要求即可。
【解析】
1. 完成第一段：在给出的"I am an Indian tiger."之后，按照提示补充居住地点和食性，交代清楚自身基本信息：I live in the thick forests and grasslands of India. I mainly eat deer, wild pigs and other small and medium-sized animals.
2. 完成第二段：以指定提示句"But now I'm in big trouble."开头，先说明栖息地缩小的原因，再补充非法捕猎的危害，点明种群数量下降的现状：Our living area is getting smaller and smaller because people are cutting down forests to build houses and farmlands. Also, there are some bad people who hunt us for our beautiful fur and bones. As a result, our number is dropping quickly.
3. 完成第三段：按照提示结构依次提出保护诉求，先说明希望人类开展的正向行动，再点明禁止的伤害行为，最后发出共同守护家园的呼吁：In the future, I hope you can plant more trees and stop any activities that harm us. Please don't buy any products made from our body parts. Also, I hope more people could join in protecting us and help create a better home for me and my friends.
最后检查全文格式、人称、时态，确认三个核心写作要点全部覆盖，语句通顺符合逻辑。
【答案】
Dear humans,
I am an Indian tiger. I live in the thick forests and grasslands of India. I mainly eat deer, wild pigs and other small and medium-sized animals.
But now I'm in big trouble. Our living area is getting smaller and smaller because people are cutting down forests to build houses and farmlands. Also, there are some bad people who hunt us for our beautiful fur and bones. As a result, our number is dropping quickly.
In the future, I hope you can plant more trees and stop any activities that harm us. Please don't buy any products made from our body parts. Also, I hope more people could join in protecting us and help create a better home for me and my friends.
An Indian tiger
【知识点】
英文书信写作
主题词汇运用
一般现在时
【点评】
本题属于情景引导类英语写作题，题目给出了明确的三段式结构框架和相关素材参考，降低了写作门槛，学生只需要紧扣"介绍自身、说明困境、提出诉求"三个核心要求，保持第一人称叙事、统一使用一般现在时即可完成写作，适当融入给出的保护动物相关素材可以让作文内容更饱满，表达更出彩。
【难度系数】
0.6