八、书面表达。（共 10 分）
假定你是李华,在学校举办的科技文化艺术节活动中,你打算参加以"Science and Technology Have Improved My English"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据思维导图提示,分享你的学习经历和感悟。词数 80 左右。
Dear friends,
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
Thank you for listening.
假定你是李华,在学校举办的科技文化艺术节活动中,你打算参加以"Science and Technology Have Improved My English"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据思维导图提示,分享你的学习经历和感悟。词数 80 左右。
Dear friends,
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I couldn't remember English words. I couldn't understand the teacher's words in class. Now with the help of science and technology, my English has improved a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practise my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes. Thanks to science and technology, my English has improved. I believe that science and technology will make learning English more convenient.
Thank you for listening.
答案：One possible version:
Dear friends,
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I couldn't remember English words. I couldn't understand the teacher's words in class. Now with the help of science and technology, my English has improved a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practise my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes. Thanks to science and technology, my English has improved. I believe that science and technology will make learning English more convenient.
Thank you for listening.
Dear friends,
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I couldn't remember English words. I couldn't understand the teacher's words in class. Now with the help of science and technology, my English has improved a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practise my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes. Thanks to science and technology, my English has improved. I believe that science and technology will make learning English more convenient.
Thank you for listening.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先明确写作要求：这是一篇主题英语演讲稿，需要完全对应思维导图给出的三个核心模块展开写作。第一步先梳理写作逻辑：首先承接题目已经给出的开篇句，先介绍自己过去学习英语遇到的困难，对应思维导图的Difficulties部分，可以选取记不住单词、跟不上课堂内容这类贴合学生真实情况的困难；第二步过渡到科技助力英语学习，对应Ways模块，把提示的三个路径逐一对应：遇到生词用电子词典查阅、借助各类APP练习英语能力、通过线上课程补足薄弱点，把提示的关键词自然融入行文；最后对应Feelings模块，抒发自己对科技助力学习的感悟，点明科技让英语学习更便捷的核心主旨，全程注意演讲稿语气自然流畅，控制总词数符合要求即可。
【解析】
写作可按照3步完成：
1. 审题定位：体裁为英语演讲文稿，第一人称叙事，时态混合使用一般过去时描述过往学习困境，一般现在时介绍当下的学习方法，现在完成时体现英语水平的提升，需覆盖全部思维导图提示要点。
2. 搭建行文框架：
① 开篇承接给定句，先介绍过去英语学习的难处：比如曾经英语很差，记不住单词，听不懂课堂内容；
② 主体部分介绍科技带来的改变：遇到生词可以用电子词典查阅，各类APP辅助练习听说能力，还可以通过线上课程拓展学习；
③ 结尾抒发感悟，点明科技让英语学习更便捷的核心观点。
3. 加入合适的过渡词（now, in addition, thanks to等）让行文逻辑连贯，调整语句让表达通顺，符合演讲稿的表达习惯，核对词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear friends,
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I couldn't remember English words. I couldn't understand the teacher's words in class. Now with the help of science and technology, my English has improved a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practise my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes. Thanks to science and technology, my English has improved. I believe that science and technology will make learning English more convenient.
Thank you for listening.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，要点式书面表达，时态综合运用
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文体写作，思维导图已经给出了非常清晰的写作维度和核心关键词，考生不需要自行构思复杂的内容，只需要按照困难、方法、感悟的逻辑串联要点，保证不遗漏提示信息，语句通顺就可以拿到不错的分数，日常练习时可以多积累相关的过渡表达，让演讲稿更有感染力。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先先明确写作要求：这是一篇主题英语演讲稿，需要完全对应思维导图给出的三个核心模块展开写作。第一步先梳理写作逻辑：首先承接题目已经给出的开篇句，先介绍自己过去学习英语遇到的困难，对应思维导图的Difficulties部分，可以选取记不住单词、跟不上课堂内容这类贴合学生真实情况的困难；第二步过渡到科技助力英语学习，对应Ways模块，把提示的三个路径逐一对应：遇到生词用电子词典查阅、借助各类APP练习英语能力、通过线上课程补足薄弱点，把提示的关键词自然融入行文；最后对应Feelings模块，抒发自己对科技助力学习的感悟，点明科技让英语学习更便捷的核心主旨，全程注意演讲稿语气自然流畅，控制总词数符合要求即可。
【解析】
写作可按照3步完成：
1. 审题定位：体裁为英语演讲文稿，第一人称叙事，时态混合使用一般过去时描述过往学习困境，一般现在时介绍当下的学习方法，现在完成时体现英语水平的提升，需覆盖全部思维导图提示要点。
2. 搭建行文框架：
① 开篇承接给定句，先介绍过去英语学习的难处：比如曾经英语很差，记不住单词，听不懂课堂内容；
② 主体部分介绍科技带来的改变：遇到生词可以用电子词典查阅，各类APP辅助练习听说能力，还可以通过线上课程拓展学习；
③ 结尾抒发感悟，点明科技让英语学习更便捷的核心观点。
3. 加入合适的过渡词（now, in addition, thanks to等）让行文逻辑连贯，调整语句让表达通顺，符合演讲稿的表达习惯，核对词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear friends,
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I couldn't remember English words. I couldn't understand the teacher's words in class. Now with the help of science and technology, my English has improved a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practise my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes. Thanks to science and technology, my English has improved. I believe that science and technology will make learning English more convenient.
Thank you for listening.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，要点式书面表达，时态综合运用
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文体写作，思维导图已经给出了非常清晰的写作维度和核心关键词，考生不需要自行构思复杂的内容，只需要按照困难、方法、感悟的逻辑串联要点，保证不遗漏提示信息，语句通顺就可以拿到不错的分数，日常练习时可以多积累相关的过渡表达，让演讲稿更有感染力。
【难度系数】
0.7