佳作赏析
如何应对自然灾害是学生生存的必备知识和技能,为此你校英语俱乐部正在开展征文活动,要求给出一些应对自然灾害的建议。请根据下图中的信息,用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
注意事项:1. 短文须包括图中所有信息,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意;2. 90 词左右,已给出部分(画直线部分)不计入总词数。
如何应对自然灾害是学生生存的必备知识和技能,为此你校英语俱乐部正在开展征文活动,要求给出一些应对自然灾害的建议。请根据下图中的信息,用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
注意事项:1. 短文须包括图中所有信息,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意;2. 90 词左右,已给出部分(画直线部分)不计入总词数。
答案：Natural disasters
Natural disasters may happen around us sometimes. It's important for us to learn to protect ourselves when they come.
There are many different kinds of natural disasters, including fires, earthquakes and so on. If a fire happens, you should get out of the burning building as soon as possible, and remember to cover your mouth and nose with a wet towel. If an earthquake happens, hide under a strong table first, and do not stand near the window or outside tall buildings.
Keep calm, and we can protect ourselves better.
Natural disasters may happen around us sometimes. It's important for us to learn to protect ourselves when they come.
There are many different kinds of natural disasters, including fires, earthquakes and so on. If a fire happens, you should get out of the burning building as soon as possible, and remember to cover your mouth and nose with a wet towel. If an earthquake happens, hide under a strong table first, and do not stand near the window or outside tall buildings.
Keep calm, and we can protect ourselves better.
解析：
这是一篇提示类英语短文写作，写作要求贴合八年级上册知识范围：1. 需先点明主题，引出常见的自然灾害类型，覆盖提示里的火灾、地震等信息；2. 分别对应说明火灾发生时要尽快撤离、遮挡口鼻的自救要点，以及地震发生时要躲避、不要随意站立的正确做法；3. 保证语句通顺连贯，所有提示信息全部覆盖，总词数控制在90词左右，使用已学的基础句式即可，无需使用超纲复杂结构。