素材积累
[开头句]
1. DIY, which stands for "Do-It-Yourself", has become popular among students.
(引出主题)
2. I enjoy doing things by myself. (个人态度)
3. If you want to have fun making new things at home, why not try tie-dyeing? (提出建议)
[中间句]
1. First, we chose a clean glove with bright colours and a fun pattern. (阐述步骤,下同)
2. Finally, we added some colourful thread onto the head.
3. I plan to take a course in DIY so I can do better in the future.
(表达规划)
[结尾句]
1. Doing DIY brings me great joy. (总结收获)
2. After we finished, we felt very proud and happy.
(抒发感想)
3. DIY is a good way to have fun and save money.
(表达观点)
[名言警句]
1. The best way to learn is by doing.
学习的最佳方式就是实践。
2. DIY is not about perfection; it's about the joy of creating something.
自己动手不在于完美,而在于创造某物的乐趣。
写作演练
假设你校英语报正在组织主题为“我的DIY故事”的征文比赛,请你用英语写一篇短文
投稿,介绍你自己的DIY经历及看法。短文中须包含以下几个方面的内容:

注意:词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 开头:以第一人称简洁介绍身份,点明热爱DIY的原因。② 主体:用一般过去时讲述DIY的过程。③ 结尾(观点):总结DIY的意义,表达对DIY的喜爱。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
Dear Sir,
Best wishes,
A DIY lover
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. DIY, which stands for "Do-It-Yourself", has become popular among students.
(引出主题)
2. I enjoy doing things by myself. (个人态度)
3. If you want to have fun making new things at home, why not try tie-dyeing? (提出建议)
[中间句]
1. First, we chose a clean glove with bright colours and a fun pattern. (阐述步骤,下同)
2. Finally, we added some colourful thread onto the head.
3. I plan to take a course in DIY so I can do better in the future.
(表达规划)
[结尾句]
1. Doing DIY brings me great joy. (总结收获)
2. After we finished, we felt very proud and happy.
(抒发感想)
3. DIY is a good way to have fun and save money.
(表达观点)
[名言警句]
1. The best way to learn is by doing.
学习的最佳方式就是实践。
2. DIY is not about perfection; it's about the joy of creating something.
自己动手不在于完美,而在于创造某物的乐趣。
写作演练
假设你校英语报正在组织主题为“我的DIY故事”的征文比赛,请你用英语写一篇短文
投稿,介绍你自己的DIY经历及看法。短文中须包含以下几个方面的内容:
注意:词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 开头:以第一人称简洁介绍身份,点明热爱DIY的原因。② 主体:用一般过去时讲述DIY的过程。③ 结尾(观点):总结DIY的意义,表达对DIY的喜爱。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Sir,
I am a Grade Eight student. I'm crazy about DIY because I can find great joy in creating things with my own hands.
DIY has become a wonderful part of my life. It brings me happiness and a sense of achievement. Last week, I successfully put in a light in my room by myself. At first, I had no idea how to do it, but I didn't give up.
I searched online for step-by-step instructions and followed them carefully. When I finally made it, I was so excited that I couldn't help laughing and cheering for myself.
In my opinion, DIY makes life more colourful and meaningful. Through DIY, I've learned that with patience and effort, anything is possible.
I hope my story inspires others to try DIY too.
Best wishes,
A DIY lover
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案:One possible version:
Dear Sir,
I am a Grade Eight student. I'm crazy about DIY because I can find great joy in creating things with my own hands.
DIY has become a wonderful part of my life. It brings me happiness and a sense of achievement. Last week, I successfully put in a light in my room by myself. At first, I had no idea how to do it, but I didn't give up. I searched online for step-by-step instructions and followed them carefully. When I finally made it, I was so excited that I couldn't help laughing and cheering for myself.
In my opinion, DIY makes life more colourful and meaningful. Through DIY, I've learned that with patience and effort, anything is possible.
I hope my story inspires others to try DIY too.
Best wishes,
A DIY lover
Dear Sir,
I am a Grade Eight student. I'm crazy about DIY because I can find great joy in creating things with my own hands.
DIY has become a wonderful part of my life. It brings me happiness and a sense of achievement. Last week, I successfully put in a light in my room by myself. At first, I had no idea how to do it, but I didn't give up. I searched online for step-by-step instructions and followed them carefully. When I finally made it, I was so excited that I couldn't help laughing and cheering for myself.
In my opinion, DIY makes life more colourful and meaningful. Through DIY, I've learned that with patience and effort, anything is possible.
I hope my story inspires others to try DIY too.
Best wishes,
A DIY lover
解析:
【分析】
本次写作是英语书信类征文,主题为“我的DIY故事”,需遵循思路点拨:开头以第一人称点明身份与热爱DIY的原因;主体用一般过去时讲述具体DIY经历;结尾总结DIY的意义。需结合给定素材中的句子,确保内容完整、语言通顺,符合书信格式与词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头:点明身份与对DIY的热爱,如“I am a Grade Eight student. I'm crazy about DIY because I can find great joy in creating things with my own hands.”;
2. 主体:用一般过去时讲述DIY经历,结合素材中的步骤类内容,如“Last week, I tried tie-dyeing a glove. First, I chose a clean glove with bright colours. Then I followed the dyeing steps carefully. Finally, I added colourful thread on the head. I felt proud after finishing it.”;
3. 结尾:总结DIY的意义,融入素材中的观点,如“DIY brings me joy and makes life meaningful. It's not about perfection but the fun of creating something.”,表达对DIY的喜爱。
【答案】
Dear Sir,
I am a Grade Eight student. I'm crazy about DIY because I can find great joy in creating things with my own hands.
DIY has become a wonderful part of my life. It brings me happiness and a sense of achievement. Last week, I successfully put in a light in my room by myself. At first, I had no idea how to do it, but I didn't give up. I searched online for step-by-step instructions and followed them carefully. When I finally made it, I was so excited that I couldn't help laughing and cheering for myself.
In my opinion, DIY makes life more colourful and meaningful. Through DIY, I've learned that with patience and effort, anything is possible.
I hope my story inspires others to try DIY too.
Best wishes,
A DIY lover
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时运用、主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,结构清晰,符合书信格式,用第一人称讲述DIY经历,语言流畅自然,融入了素材中的观点,情感真挚,完整覆盖了写作要求的要点,是一篇优秀的参赛作文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作是英语书信类征文,主题为“我的DIY故事”,需遵循思路点拨:开头以第一人称点明身份与热爱DIY的原因;主体用一般过去时讲述具体DIY经历;结尾总结DIY的意义。需结合给定素材中的句子,确保内容完整、语言通顺,符合书信格式与词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头:点明身份与对DIY的热爱,如“I am a Grade Eight student. I'm crazy about DIY because I can find great joy in creating things with my own hands.”;
2. 主体:用一般过去时讲述DIY经历,结合素材中的步骤类内容,如“Last week, I tried tie-dyeing a glove. First, I chose a clean glove with bright colours. Then I followed the dyeing steps carefully. Finally, I added colourful thread on the head. I felt proud after finishing it.”;
3. 结尾:总结DIY的意义,融入素材中的观点,如“DIY brings me joy and makes life meaningful. It's not about perfection but the fun of creating something.”,表达对DIY的喜爱。
【答案】
Dear Sir,
I am a Grade Eight student. I'm crazy about DIY because I can find great joy in creating things with my own hands.
DIY has become a wonderful part of my life. It brings me happiness and a sense of achievement. Last week, I successfully put in a light in my room by myself. At first, I had no idea how to do it, but I didn't give up. I searched online for step-by-step instructions and followed them carefully. When I finally made it, I was so excited that I couldn't help laughing and cheering for myself.
In my opinion, DIY makes life more colourful and meaningful. Through DIY, I've learned that with patience and effort, anything is possible.
I hope my story inspires others to try DIY too.
Best wishes,
A DIY lover
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时运用、主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,结构清晰,符合书信格式,用第一人称讲述DIY经历,语言流畅自然,融入了素材中的观点,情感真挚,完整覆盖了写作要求的要点,是一篇优秀的参赛作文。
【难度系数】
0.5