写作演练＞＞
某英文杂志正在征集保护动物方面的文章,你对此很感兴趣,上网了解到国家一级保护动物金丝猴被列为濒危物种。请根据以下提示写一篇介绍金丝猴的英语短文投稿,并呼吁大家保护金丝猴。
(续表)
注意:1. 词数 90 左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第三人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先介绍金丝猴的外貌、性格和分布,再介绍金丝猴的特点和爱好,最后介绍金丝猴的现状并提出你的建议。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
某英文杂志正在征集保护动物方面的文章,你对此很感兴趣,上网了解到国家一级保护动物金丝猴被列为濒危物种。请根据以下提示写一篇介绍金丝猴的英语短文投稿,并呼吁大家保护金丝猴。
(续表)
注意:1. 词数 90 左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第三人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先介绍金丝猴的外貌、性格和分布,再介绍金丝猴的特点和爱好,最后介绍金丝猴的现状并提出你的建议。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. They mainly live in China. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly.
They are very good at climbing trees. As for food, they like eating leaves and fruit and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and killed them for their fur. Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案：One possible version:
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. They mainly live in China. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly.
They are very good at climbing trees. As for food, they like eating leaves and fruit and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and killed them for their fur. Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. They mainly live in China. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly.
They are very good at climbing trees. As for food, they like eating leaves and fruit and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and killed them for their fur. Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
解析：
【分析】
本题要求写一篇关于保护金丝猴的英语投稿短文，需遵循以下思路：① 人称以第三人称为主，时态用一般现在时；② 写作顺序：先介绍金丝猴的外貌、性格、分布，再说明其生活特点与爱好，最后点明现状并发出保护呼吁；③ 注意词数90左右，避免真实信息，适当补充细节使内容连贯。
【解析】
1. 开头段：引入金丝猴，说明其主要分布在中国，描述外貌（金色毛发、圆嘴巴），点明性格（可爱、聪明、友好）；2. 中间段：介绍生活习性，如擅长爬树，食物偏好（树叶、水果），栖息于森林；3. 结尾段：说明金丝猴濒危的现状及原因（树木被砍伐、被猎杀取皮），呼吁大家采取行动保护。全程使用一般现在时，控制词数，确保语句通顺自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. They mainly live in China. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly.
They are very good at climbing trees. As for food, they like eating leaves and fruit and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and killed them for their fur. Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、动物保护主题表达
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格遵循写作提纲的顺序，时态运用准确，内容完整涵盖了金丝猴的外貌、习性、现状及保护呼吁，用词恰当，语句连贯，符合投稿要求，有效传递了保护动物的主题。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一篇关于保护金丝猴的英语投稿短文，需遵循以下思路：① 人称以第三人称为主，时态用一般现在时；② 写作顺序：先介绍金丝猴的外貌、性格、分布，再说明其生活特点与爱好，最后点明现状并发出保护呼吁；③ 注意词数90左右，避免真实信息，适当补充细节使内容连贯。
【解析】
1. 开头段：引入金丝猴，说明其主要分布在中国，描述外貌（金色毛发、圆嘴巴），点明性格（可爱、聪明、友好）；2. 中间段：介绍生活习性，如擅长爬树，食物偏好（树叶、水果），栖息于森林；3. 结尾段：说明金丝猴濒危的现状及原因（树木被砍伐、被猎杀取皮），呼吁大家采取行动保护。全程使用一般现在时，控制词数，确保语句通顺自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. They mainly live in China. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly.
They are very good at climbing trees. As for food, they like eating leaves and fruit and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and killed them for their fur. Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、动物保护主题表达
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格遵循写作提纲的顺序，时态运用准确，内容完整涵盖了金丝猴的外貌、习性、现状及保护呼吁，用词恰当，语句连贯，符合投稿要求，有效传递了保护动物的主题。
【难度系数】
0.6