典型例题 假设你叫李华，你们学校要举办“我最喜欢的画家”主题展览，你想推荐著名画家齐白石。请根据以下要点，写一篇不少于 90 词的英文介绍稿，向同学们介绍他，可适当发挥。
1. 齐白石，中国近现代最著名的国画大师之一；2. 观察入微，善于观察生活，尤其喜欢画虾、花鸟；勤奋刻苦，一生都在坚持创作，90 多岁时仍在画画；3. 最爱的画作：《虾》，象征……他的画让我学会观察生活中的美。（自由发挥 1—2 点）
Hi, everyone! Today I'd like to introduce my favourite painter—Qi Baishi.
1. 齐白石，中国近现代最著名的国画大师之一；2. 观察入微，善于观察生活，尤其喜欢画虾、花鸟；勤奋刻苦，一生都在坚持创作，90 多岁时仍在画画；3. 最爱的画作：《虾》，象征……他的画让我学会观察生活中的美。（自由发挥 1—2 点）
Hi, everyone! Today I'd like to introduce my favourite painter—Qi Baishi.
答案：He is one of the most famous masters of traditional Chinese painting in modern and contemporary China.
Qi Baishi has a sharp eye for small details in daily life, and he is especially good at painting shrimps, flowers and birds. He is very hard-working, he stuck to creating paintings all his life, and he still kept drawing even when he was in his nineties.
My favorite work of his is *Shrimps*. The vivid and lively shrimps in the painting symbolize the endless vitality of ordinary little lives.
His works teach me to learn to watch carefully and find the beauty hidden in the small details of daily life.
I hope you can spend more time enjoying his works in the coming exhibition, and you will surely get lots of warm inspiration from them.
Qi Baishi has a sharp eye for small details in daily life, and he is especially good at painting shrimps, flowers and birds. He is very hard-working, he stuck to creating paintings all his life, and he still kept drawing even when he was in his nineties.
My favorite work of his is *Shrimps*. The vivid and lively shrimps in the painting symbolize the endless vitality of ordinary little lives.
His works teach me to learn to watch carefully and find the beauty hidden in the small details of daily life.
I hope you can spend more time enjoying his works in the coming exhibition, and you will surely get lots of warm inspiration from them.
解析：
本题要求写一篇介绍画家齐白石的英文发言稿，写作时需注意：1. 文体为口头介绍稿，语气自然亲切，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；2. 完整覆盖题干给出的所有要点：齐白石的身份地位、创作特点与勤奋特质、个人最爱的作品及从中获得的感悟，可适当补充合理细节让行文流畅；3. 选用九年级已学的词汇和句式，避免超纲表达，词数不少于90词。
Hi, everyone! Today I'd like to introduce my favourite painter—Qi Baishi.
As one of the most famous traditional Chinese painters, Qi Baishi was very observant, good at watching life, especially shrimps, flowers and birds, which made his paintings lively and real. He was also hard-working. He kept creating art all his life and was still painting in his nineties.
His painting Shrimp is my favourite. With just black ink and simple brushstrokes, he brought the shrimp to life. It symbolizes the beauty of nature and the spirit of life. His paintings teach me to observe the beauty in daily lives. Looking at his works makes me feel peaceful and connected to the natural world. I hope you can also feel the charm in his paintings. Thank you!
As one of the most famous traditional Chinese painters, Qi Baishi was very observant, good at watching life, especially shrimps, flowers and birds, which made his paintings lively and real. He was also hard-working. He kept creating art all his life and was still painting in his nineties.
His painting Shrimp is my favourite. With just black ink and simple brushstrokes, he brought the shrimp to life. It symbolizes the beauty of nature and the spirit of life. His paintings teach me to observe the beauty in daily lives. Looking at his works makes me feel peaceful and connected to the natural world. I hope you can also feel the charm in his paintings. Thank you!
答案：答案略
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇英语人物介绍类的短篇文稿，我们可以顺着行文逻辑梳理核心信息：第一步先抓住开篇的核心主题，明确文章要介绍的是作者最喜爱的画家齐白石；第二步提取人物的核心属性信息，梳理齐白石的艺术特点、生平特质；第三步梳理作者对其代表作《虾》的赏析以及作品带给自己的启发，就能完整把握整篇文本的全部内容，这类文稿也可以直接作为同主题英语写作、口语展示的参考范本。
【解析】
本篇文本没有设置配套习题，全文内容可拆解为3个逻辑部分：
1. 开篇点题：直接向听众引出本次介绍的核心对象——作者最喜爱的画家齐白石。
2. 人物基础介绍：说明齐白石是中国最知名的传统画家之一，他观察力敏锐，擅长观察生活，尤其擅长刻画虾、花鸟等形象，让自己的作品生动写实；同时他一生勤勉，毕生坚持艺术创作，年至九十多岁仍在作画。
3. 个人感悟输出：点明作者最喜爱的齐白石作品是《虾》，仅用墨色和简练的笔触就将虾刻画得鲜活生动，作品承载了自然之美与生命精神，也教会作者留意观察日常生活中的美，观赏作品能让人内心平静、和自然产生联结，最后向听众发出邀请，呼吁大家一同感受齐白石画作的独特魅力。
【答案】
答案略
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作，文化类英语表达，定语从句用法
【点评】
这篇短文逻辑清晰结构完整，从引入人物到介绍人物特质再到输出个人感悟层层递进，用词准确难度适中，既把齐白石的艺术特色讲得清楚易懂，也自然融入了个人的真实感受，同时还涉及中国传统文化相关的内容，非常适合作为中小学英语人物主题口语展示、短篇写作的参考素材，也能帮助学生积累用英语介绍中国传统文化人物的相关表达。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一篇英语人物介绍类的短篇文稿，我们可以顺着行文逻辑梳理核心信息：第一步先抓住开篇的核心主题，明确文章要介绍的是作者最喜爱的画家齐白石；第二步提取人物的核心属性信息，梳理齐白石的艺术特点、生平特质；第三步梳理作者对其代表作《虾》的赏析以及作品带给自己的启发，就能完整把握整篇文本的全部内容，这类文稿也可以直接作为同主题英语写作、口语展示的参考范本。
【解析】
本篇文本没有设置配套习题，全文内容可拆解为3个逻辑部分：
1. 开篇点题：直接向听众引出本次介绍的核心对象——作者最喜爱的画家齐白石。
2. 人物基础介绍：说明齐白石是中国最知名的传统画家之一，他观察力敏锐，擅长观察生活，尤其擅长刻画虾、花鸟等形象，让自己的作品生动写实；同时他一生勤勉，毕生坚持艺术创作，年至九十多岁仍在作画。
3. 个人感悟输出：点明作者最喜爱的齐白石作品是《虾》，仅用墨色和简练的笔触就将虾刻画得鲜活生动，作品承载了自然之美与生命精神，也教会作者留意观察日常生活中的美，观赏作品能让人内心平静、和自然产生联结，最后向听众发出邀请，呼吁大家一同感受齐白石画作的独特魅力。
【答案】
答案略
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作，文化类英语表达，定语从句用法
【点评】
这篇短文逻辑清晰结构完整，从引入人物到介绍人物特质再到输出个人感悟层层递进，用词准确难度适中，既把齐白石的艺术特色讲得清楚易懂，也自然融入了个人的真实感受，同时还涉及中国传统文化相关的内容，非常适合作为中小学英语人物主题口语展示、短篇写作的参考素材，也能帮助学生积累用英语介绍中国传统文化人物的相关表达。
【难度系数】
0.8