八、书面表达。(共10分)
假设你是李娜(英文名Anna),下面是你的个人小档案。请根据相关信息,写一篇英语短文,做一个自我介绍。

要求:
1. 短文应包含思维导图中的全部内容,可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello! I'm Li Na. I'm 13 years old. My English name is Anna. I come from Nanjing, and I'm in Class 6, Grade 7.
假设你是李娜(英文名Anna),下面是你的个人小档案。请根据相关信息,写一篇英语短文,做一个自我介绍。
要求:
1. 短文应包含思维导图中的全部内容,可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello! I'm Li Na. I'm 13 years old. My English name is Anna. I come from Nanjing, and I'm in Class 6, Grade 7.
答案:One possible version:
Hello! I'm Li Na. I'm 13 years old. My English name is Anna. I come from Nanjing, and I'm in Class 6, Grade 7.
I'm tall and slim, and I wear a pair of glasses. I'm a polite and friendly girl. I like to smile and get along with others, so I have many good friends. I'm also helpful—I'm always ready to lend a hand when someone needs it.
In my free time, I enjoy playing volleyball and reading books. They make me happy and keep me active.
Do you want to be my friend?
Hello! I'm Li Na. I'm 13 years old. My English name is Anna. I come from Nanjing, and I'm in Class 6, Grade 7.
I'm tall and slim, and I wear a pair of glasses. I'm a polite and friendly girl. I like to smile and get along with others, so I have many good friends. I'm also helpful—I'm always ready to lend a hand when someone needs it.
In my free time, I enjoy playing volleyball and reading books. They make me happy and keep me active.
Do you want to be my friend?
解析:
【分析】
本题要求以李娜(英文名Anna)的身份写自我介绍,需覆盖思维导图中所有内容(年龄、班级年级、外貌、性格、爱好等),开头已给出,词数约80。解题思路:1. 承接给定开头,补充外貌描述(对应looks);2. 介绍性格特点(对应character);3. 说明兴趣爱好(对应hobby);4. 添加收尾语句,使内容连贯完整,符合词数要求。
【解析】
先使用给定开头,接着描述外貌:“I'm tall and slim, and I wear a pair of glasses.”;再介绍性格:“I'm a polite and friendly girl. I like to smile and get along with others, so I have many good friends. I'm also helpful—I'm always ready to lend a hand when someone needs it.”;然后写爱好:“In my free time, I enjoy playing volleyball and reading books. They make me happy and keep me active.”;最后添加邀请语句:“Do you want to be my friend?”,确保覆盖所有思维导图元素,语言通顺符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello! I'm Li Na. I'm 13 years old. My English name is Anna. I come from Nanjing, and I'm in Class 6, Grade 7.
I'm tall and slim, and I wear a pair of glasses. I'm a polite and friendly girl. I like to smile and get along with others, so I have many good friends. I'm also helpful—I'm always ready to lend a hand when someone needs it.
In my free time, I enjoy playing volleyball and reading books. They make me happy and keep me active.
Do you want to be my friend?
【知识点】
英语书面表达、自我介绍写作、词汇运用
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖思维导图所有信息点,内容连贯自然,用词准确恰当,符合初中英语写作规范,是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李娜(英文名Anna)的身份写自我介绍,需覆盖思维导图中所有内容(年龄、班级年级、外貌、性格、爱好等),开头已给出,词数约80。解题思路:1. 承接给定开头,补充外貌描述(对应looks);2. 介绍性格特点(对应character);3. 说明兴趣爱好(对应hobby);4. 添加收尾语句,使内容连贯完整,符合词数要求。
【解析】
先使用给定开头,接着描述外貌:“I'm tall and slim, and I wear a pair of glasses.”;再介绍性格:“I'm a polite and friendly girl. I like to smile and get along with others, so I have many good friends. I'm also helpful—I'm always ready to lend a hand when someone needs it.”;然后写爱好:“In my free time, I enjoy playing volleyball and reading books. They make me happy and keep me active.”;最后添加邀请语句:“Do you want to be my friend?”,确保覆盖所有思维导图元素,语言通顺符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello! I'm Li Na. I'm 13 years old. My English name is Anna. I come from Nanjing, and I'm in Class 6, Grade 7.
I'm tall and slim, and I wear a pair of glasses. I'm a polite and friendly girl. I like to smile and get along with others, so I have many good friends. I'm also helpful—I'm always ready to lend a hand when someone needs it.
In my free time, I enjoy playing volleyball and reading books. They make me happy and keep me active.
Do you want to be my friend?
【知识点】
英语书面表达、自我介绍写作、词汇运用
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖思维导图所有信息点,内容连贯自然,用词准确恰当,符合初中英语写作规范,是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5