八、书面表达。（共10分）
假设你是来自英国的交换生John,请根据下面的思维导图,发一封电子邮件给你的好朋友Peter,介绍你在镇江的学习和生活情况。
注意:1. 内容应包含思维导图的全部内容,可适当发挥。2. 词数不少于70,已给出部分不计入总词数。3. 不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your email. I have been in Zhenjiang for three months. I'd like to
Would you like to come to Zhenjiang? I'll show you around.
Yours,
John
假设你是来自英国的交换生John,请根据下面的思维导图,发一封电子邮件给你的好朋友Peter,介绍你在镇江的学习和生活情况。
注意:1. 内容应包含思维导图的全部内容,可适当发挥。2. 词数不少于70,已给出部分不计入总词数。3. 不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your email. I have been in Zhenjiang for three months. I'd like to
tell you about my life here.
We start lessons at 8 a. m. from Monday to Friday. We do many after-school activities. I often go to the library with my classmates on Friday afternoon.
I have a healthy lifestyle. I usually have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables, meat and rice. In the afternoon, I often do sports to keep fit.
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together. People set off fireworks and enjoy delicious food.
I like staying in Zhenjiang. My dream life is to live in a city like Zhenjiang. It is a great place to study and live.
We start lessons at 8 a. m. from Monday to Friday. We do many after-school activities. I often go to the library with my classmates on Friday afternoon.
I have a healthy lifestyle. I usually have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables, meat and rice. In the afternoon, I often do sports to keep fit.
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together. People set off fireworks and enjoy delicious food.
I like staying in Zhenjiang. My dream life is to live in a city like Zhenjiang. It is a great place to study and live.
Would you like to come to Zhenjiang? I'll show you around.
Yours,
John
答案：八、One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your email. I have been in Zhenjiang for three months. I'd like to tell you about my life here.
We start lessons at 8 a. m. from Monday to Friday. We do many after-school activities. I often go to the library with my classmates on Friday afternoon.
I have a healthy lifestyle. I usually have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables, meat and rice. In the afternoon, I often do sports to keep fit.
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together. People set off fireworks and enjoy delicious food.
I like staying in Zhenjiang. My dream life is to live in a city like Zhenjiang. It is a great place to study and live.
Would you like to come to Zhenjiang? I'll show you around.
Yours,
John
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your email. I have been in Zhenjiang for three months. I'd like to tell you about my life here.
We start lessons at 8 a. m. from Monday to Friday. We do many after-school activities. I often go to the library with my classmates on Friday afternoon.
I have a healthy lifestyle. I usually have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables, meat and rice. In the afternoon, I often do sports to keep fit.
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together. People set off fireworks and enjoy delicious food.
I like staying in Zhenjiang. My dream life is to live in a city like Zhenjiang. It is a great place to study and live.
Would you like to come to Zhenjiang? I'll show you around.
Yours,
John
解析：
【分析】
本题要求以交换生John的身份给好友Peter写邮件，介绍在镇江的学习生活，需覆盖思维导图的所有内容：学校活动、节日（What/How）、生活方式（运动、饮食）、梦想生活。解题思路为：1. 承接邮件开头，明确写作主题；2. 分模块展开内容：先写学校日常与课后活动，再介绍健康的生活方式（饮食、运动），接着说明最喜欢的节日及相关习俗，最后点明梦想生活；3. 结尾发出邀请，符合邮件格式，适当发挥，确保词数达标。
【解析】
首先承接已给开头，点明要介绍在镇江的生活；然后依次展开：1. 学校活动：说明上学时间，课后参与的活动（如周五下午和同学去图书馆）；2. 生活方式：介绍日常饮食搭配，以及运动保持健康的习惯；3. 节日：介绍最喜欢的春节，说明节日的重要性、家人团聚的场景和相关活动（放烟花、吃美食）；4. 梦想生活：表达希望住在像镇江这样的城市的愿望；最后发出邀请，完成邮件。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your email. I have been in Zhenjiang for three months. I'd like to tell you about my life here.
We start lessons at 8 a. m. from Monday to Friday. We do many after-school activities. I often go to the library with my classmates on Friday afternoon.
I have a healthy lifestyle. I usually have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables, meat and rice. In the afternoon, I often do sports to keep fit.
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together. People set off fireworks and enjoy delicious food.
I like staying in Zhenjiang. My dream life is to live in a city like Zhenjiang. It is a great place to study and live.
Would you like to come to Zhenjiang? I'll show you around.
Yours,
John
【知识点】
英语书面表达、邮件写作、话题介绍
【点评】
本文严格覆盖思维导图所有要点，结构清晰、层次分明，语言流畅自然，符合邮件格式要求，适当补充了细节，满足词数要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以交换生John的身份给好友Peter写邮件，介绍在镇江的学习生活，需覆盖思维导图的所有内容：学校活动、节日（What/How）、生活方式（运动、饮食）、梦想生活。解题思路为：1. 承接邮件开头，明确写作主题；2. 分模块展开内容：先写学校日常与课后活动，再介绍健康的生活方式（饮食、运动），接着说明最喜欢的节日及相关习俗，最后点明梦想生活；3. 结尾发出邀请，符合邮件格式，适当发挥，确保词数达标。
【解析】
首先承接已给开头，点明要介绍在镇江的生活；然后依次展开：1. 学校活动：说明上学时间，课后参与的活动（如周五下午和同学去图书馆）；2. 生活方式：介绍日常饮食搭配，以及运动保持健康的习惯；3. 节日：介绍最喜欢的春节，说明节日的重要性、家人团聚的场景和相关活动（放烟花、吃美食）；4. 梦想生活：表达希望住在像镇江这样的城市的愿望；最后发出邀请，完成邮件。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your email. I have been in Zhenjiang for three months. I'd like to tell you about my life here.
We start lessons at 8 a. m. from Monday to Friday. We do many after-school activities. I often go to the library with my classmates on Friday afternoon.
I have a healthy lifestyle. I usually have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables, meat and rice. In the afternoon, I often do sports to keep fit.
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together. People set off fireworks and enjoy delicious food.
I like staying in Zhenjiang. My dream life is to live in a city like Zhenjiang. It is a great place to study and live.
Would you like to come to Zhenjiang? I'll show you around.
Yours,
John
【知识点】
英语书面表达、邮件写作、话题介绍
【点评】
本文严格覆盖思维导图所有要点，结构清晰、层次分明，语言流畅自然，符合邮件格式要求，适当补充了细节，满足词数要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6