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十四、书面表达。(6分)
同学们,你知道你父母的生日在哪一天吗?在那一天,他们通常做些什么?你为他们做什么呢?他们的心情是怎么样的?请以“My parents’ birthdays”为题,从When、What、How等方面描述一下他们过生日的情况。
要求:内容包含以上要点,语句通顺,书写美观。至少6句话。
My parents’ birthdays
My father's birthday is on April the third and my mother's birthday is on July the fifth. On my mother's birthday, she usually cooks her favourite food at home. On my father's birthday, he often goes fishing with his friends. On their birthdays, I usually make birthday cards for them. Sometimes I also help clean the house or make a simple cake with my parents. When they get my cards and see the cake, they always feel very happy.

I love my parents very much, and I hope they can be happy every day.


答案:My parents' birthdays
My father's birthday is on April the third and my mother's birthday is on July the fifth. On my mother's birthday, she usually cooks her favourite food at home. On my father's birthday, he often goes fishing with his friends. On their birthdays, I usually make birthday cards for them. Sometimes I also help clean the house or make a simple cake with my parents. When they get my cards and see the cake, they always feel very happy.
I love my parents very much, and I hope they can be happy every day.
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解析:
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以“My parents’ birthdays”为题,从When(父母生日时间)、What(父母及“我”在生日当天的活动)、How(父母的心情)三个方面写作,需至少6句话,语句通顺。解题思路:①先明确父母各自的生日时间,用正确的英文日期表达;②分别描述父母生日当天的日常活动,使用一般现在时;③写出“我”为父母准备的生日相关行动,体现孝心;④描述父母收到心意后的心情,最后可补充表达对父母的爱,确保覆盖所有要求要点,满足句子数量要求。
【解析】写作时按以下步骤完成:1.开篇点明父母生日时间,如“My father's birthday is on April the third and my mother's birthday is on July the fifth.”;2.分别描述父母生日当天的活动,用一般现在时体现日常习惯,如“On my mother's birthday, she usually cooks her favourite food at home.”“On my father's birthday, he often goes fishing with his friends.”;3.写“我”为父母做的事,如“On their birthdays, I usually make birthday cards for them. Sometimes I also help clean the house or make a simple cake with my parents.”;4.描述父母的心情,如“When they get my cards and see the cake, they always feel very happy.”;5.结尾表达对父母的爱,如“I love my parents very much, and I hope they can be happy every day.”,保证语句通顺,要点齐全,句子数量达标。
【答案】My parents' birthdays
My father's birthday is on April the third and my mother's birthday is on July the fifth. On my mother's birthday, she usually cooks her favourite food at home. On my father's birthday, he often goes fishing with his friends. On their birthdays, I usually make birthday cards for them. Sometimes I also help clean the house or make a simple cake with my parents. When they get my cards and see the cake, they always feel very happy.
I love my parents very much, and I hope they can be happy every day.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般现在时、日期表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力,贴近学生生活实际,要求覆盖指定写作要点,锻炼学生的语言组织与运用能力,难度适中,适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
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