七、书面表达(本题满分25分)
[2025镇江市丹阳市期末]成长路上,学会自我调节、突破困境是青春的必修课。听歌、画画、观影等方式都能帮助我们走出困境、实现成长。学校英语报开展以“A Special Way to Grow Up”为题的征文比赛,请根据以下提示,写一篇短文分享你的经历。
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包含上述所有要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清晰,书写规范;
3. 文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
A Special Way to Grow Up
Growing up is a journey full of ups and downs.
[2025镇江市丹阳市期末]成长路上,学会自我调节、突破困境是青春的必修课。听歌、画画、观影等方式都能帮助我们走出困境、实现成长。学校英语报开展以“A Special Way to Grow Up”为题的征文比赛,请根据以下提示,写一篇短文分享你的经历。
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包含上述所有要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清晰,书写规范;
3. 文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
A Special Way to Grow Up
Growing up is a journey full of ups and downs.
答案：One possible version:
A Special Way to Grow Up
Growing up is a journey full of ups and downs.
Last term, I had a hard time with my studies. I often felt stressed because I couldn't follow the teacher in class and did badly in exams. I even lost confidence in myself. To get out of the trouble, I started to listen to soft music every day after school. Music helped me relax and forget my worries. Sometimes I also wrote down my feelings in a diary. Slowly, I felt much better and found the courage to face my problems again.
From this experience, I learned that it's important to find a proper way to deal with bad feelings. Music became my special friend. It taught me to be patient and never give up. Now I believe every difficulty is a chance to grow.
A Special Way to Grow Up
Growing up is a journey full of ups and downs.
Last term, I had a hard time with my studies. I often felt stressed because I couldn't follow the teacher in class and did badly in exams. I even lost confidence in myself. To get out of the trouble, I started to listen to soft music every day after school. Music helped me relax and forget my worries. Sometimes I also wrote down my feelings in a diary. Slowly, I felt much better and found the courage to face my problems again.
From this experience, I learned that it's important to find a proper way to deal with bad feelings. Music became my special friend. It taught me to be patient and never give up. Now I believe every difficulty is a chance to grow.
解析：
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“A Special Way to Grow Up”主题，结合三个提示要点完成写作。解题思路：首先确定成长烦恼选学习类（如学习压力大、成绩差）；其次选择对应的解决方式（如听音乐、写日记）；最后提炼感悟收获（如学会调节情绪、直面困难），确保内容连贯、符合字数要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】写作时遵循“烦恼-解决-感悟”的结构：1. 承接开头，描述学习上的烦恼：上学期学习困难，跟不上老师，考试失利，失去自信；2. 介绍解决方式：每天放学后听轻音乐放松，偶尔写日记记录心情；3. 阐述感悟：明白要找合适的方式处理负面情绪，音乐教会自己耐心、不放弃，困难是成长的机会。
【答案】One possible version:
A Special Way to Grow Up
Growing up is a journey full of ups and downs.
Last term, I had a hard time with my studies. I often felt stressed because I couldn't follow the teacher in class and did badly in exams. I even lost confidence in myself. To get out of the trouble, I started to listen to soft music every day after school. Music helped me relax and forget my worries. Sometimes I also wrote down my feelings in a diary. Slowly, I felt much better and found the courage to face my problems again.
From this experience, I learned that it's important to find a proper way to deal with bad feelings. Music became my special friend. It taught me to be patient and never give up. Now I believe every difficulty is a chance to grow.
【知识点】英语书面表达、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，涵盖所有提示要点，内容具体真实，语言通顺流畅，符合英语写作的规范要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时遵循“烦恼-解决-感悟”的结构：1. 承接开头，描述学习上的烦恼：上学期学习困难，跟不上老师，考试失利，失去自信；2. 介绍解决方式：每天放学后听轻音乐放松，偶尔写日记记录心情；3. 阐述感悟：明白要找合适的方式处理负面情绪，音乐教会自己耐心、不放弃，困难是成长的机会。
【答案】One possible version:
A Special Way to Grow Up
Growing up is a journey full of ups and downs.
Last term, I had a hard time with my studies. I often felt stressed because I couldn't follow the teacher in class and did badly in exams. I even lost confidence in myself. To get out of the trouble, I started to listen to soft music every day after school. Music helped me relax and forget my worries. Sometimes I also wrote down my feelings in a diary. Slowly, I felt much better and found the courage to face my problems again.
From this experience, I learned that it's important to find a proper way to deal with bad feelings. Music became my special friend. It taught me to be patient and never give up. Now I believe every difficulty is a chance to grow.
【知识点】英语书面表达、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，涵盖所有提示要点，内容具体真实，语言通顺流畅，符合英语写作的规范要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6