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假设你是Andy,请你根据下面的提示,写一封邮件给你的好朋友John,向他介绍你的学校,不少于70词,已给出部分(画直线部分)不计入总词数。
Moonlight Middle School
The number of grades and classes:
3 grades, 27 classes
Teacher
120; kind
Nice places: library, playground ...
假设你是Andy,请你根据下面的提示,写一封邮件给你的好朋友John,向他介绍你的学校,不少于70词,已给出部分(画直线部分)不计入总词数。
Moonlight Middle School
The number of grades and classes:
3 grades, 27 classes
Teacher
120; kindNice places: library, playground ...
答案：Dear John,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school, Moonlight Middle School.
It is a very nice school. There are 3 grades and 27 classes in our school. We have 120 teachers here, and all of them are very kind to us. We have a big library with many kinds of books, we often read books there after class. There is also a large playground, we can play sports and have fun with our classmates there after school. I enjoy my school life very much and I love my school a lot.
Welcome to my school when you are free!
Yours,
Andy
I'd like to tell you something about my new school, Moonlight Middle School.
It is a very nice school. There are 3 grades and 27 classes in our school. We have 120 teachers here, and all of them are very kind to us. We have a big library with many kinds of books, we often read books there after class. There is also a large playground, we can play sports and have fun with our classmates there after school. I enjoy my school life very much and I love my school a lot.
Welcome to my school when you are free!
Yours,
Andy
解析：
【分析】
本题为英文邮件写作题，解题思路：1. 采用标准邮件格式，开头写称呼，结尾署名；2. 开篇点明要介绍的学校名称；3. 按提示依次介绍学校的年级班级数量、老师情况、学校场所，补充合理细节让内容更丰富；4. 表达对学校的喜爱，发出邀请，确保词数达标。
【解析】
按照邮件写作规范，结合提示信息组织内容：
1. 开头：Dear John, I'd like to tell you something about my new school, Moonlight Middle School.
2. 介绍学校基本情况：There are 3 grades and 27 classes in our school. We have 120 teachers here, and all of them are very kind to us.
3. 介绍学校场所：We have a big library with many kinds of books, we often read books there after class. There is also a large playground, we can play sports and have fun with our classmates there after school.
4. 结尾：I enjoy my school life very much and I love my school a lot. Welcome to my school when you are free!
5. 署名：Yours, Andy
【答案】
Dear John,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school, Moonlight Middle School.
It is a very nice school. There are 3 grades and 27 classes in our school. We have 120 teachers here, and all of them are very kind to us. We have a big library with many kinds of books, we often read books there after class. There is also a large playground, we can play sports and have fun with our classmates there after school. I enjoy my school life very much and I love my school a lot.
Welcome to my school when you are free!
Yours,
Andy
【知识点】
英文邮件写作；学校介绍表达
【点评】
该作文符合邮件格式，完整覆盖所有提示要点，语言通顺，内容充实，情感真挚，能清晰完成介绍学校的任务，符合初中英语写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英文邮件写作题，解题思路：1. 采用标准邮件格式，开头写称呼，结尾署名；2. 开篇点明要介绍的学校名称；3. 按提示依次介绍学校的年级班级数量、老师情况、学校场所，补充合理细节让内容更丰富；4. 表达对学校的喜爱，发出邀请，确保词数达标。
【解析】
按照邮件写作规范，结合提示信息组织内容：
1. 开头：Dear John, I'd like to tell you something about my new school, Moonlight Middle School.
2. 介绍学校基本情况：There are 3 grades and 27 classes in our school. We have 120 teachers here, and all of them are very kind to us.
3. 介绍学校场所：We have a big library with many kinds of books, we often read books there after class. There is also a large playground, we can play sports and have fun with our classmates there after school.
4. 结尾：I enjoy my school life very much and I love my school a lot. Welcome to my school when you are free!
5. 署名：Yours, Andy
【答案】
Dear John,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school, Moonlight Middle School.
It is a very nice school. There are 3 grades and 27 classes in our school. We have 120 teachers here, and all of them are very kind to us. We have a big library with many kinds of books, we often read books there after class. There is also a large playground, we can play sports and have fun with our classmates there after school. I enjoy my school life very much and I love my school a lot.
Welcome to my school when you are free!
Yours,
Andy
【知识点】
英文邮件写作；学校介绍表达
【点评】
该作文符合邮件格式，完整覆盖所有提示要点，语言通顺，内容充实，情感真挚，能清晰完成介绍学校的任务，符合初中英语写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6