写作演练＞＞
假设你是Tom，你作为交流生来到中国某中学。请根据提示给你家乡的朋友Linda写一
封邮件，向她介绍你现在的学校生活。70词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
提示:1. 学习情况。
2. 课外活动。
3. 同学关系。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 按提示顺序对学校生活进行介绍。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
假设你是Tom，你作为交流生来到中国某中学。请根据提示给你家乡的朋友Linda写一
封邮件，向她介绍你现在的学校生活。70词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
提示:1. 学习情况。
2. 课外活动。
3. 同学关系。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 按提示顺序对学校生活进行介绍。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案：One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
解析：
【分析】
这是一封介绍新学校生活的英语书信写作题，要求使用一般现在时、第一人称，按学习情况、课外活动、同学关系三个要点展开。首先承接已给的开头句，第二段对应学习情况，说明学校上课时间、课程设置及喜欢的科目和原因；第三段对应课外活动，列举喜欢的活动并简单说明；第四段对应同学关系，介绍新朋友及相处情况，最后结尾点题，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作时，先承接已给的开头句，第二段写学习情况：说明学校上课时间、每日课程数量，选择一门喜欢的科目并阐述原因；第三段写课外活动：列举两项喜欢的活动，简单说明相关情况；第四段写同学关系：提及有很多新朋友，说明他们的友好及日常相处的活动，最后加上已给的结尾句，确保语句通顺、时态正确，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时运用、要点式英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，按学习情况、课外活动、同学关系的顺序展开，结构清晰，语言简洁，符合书信格式，准确传达了新学校生活的内容，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一封介绍新学校生活的英语书信写作题，要求使用一般现在时、第一人称，按学习情况、课外活动、同学关系三个要点展开。首先承接已给的开头句，第二段对应学习情况，说明学校上课时间、课程设置及喜欢的科目和原因；第三段对应课外活动，列举喜欢的活动并简单说明；第四段对应同学关系，介绍新朋友及相处情况，最后结尾点题，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作时，先承接已给的开头句，第二段写学习情况：说明学校上课时间、每日课程数量，选择一门喜欢的科目并阐述原因；第三段写课外活动：列举两项喜欢的活动，简单说明相关情况；第四段写同学关系：提及有很多新朋友，说明他们的友好及日常相处的活动，最后加上已给的结尾句，确保语句通顺、时态正确，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时运用、要点式英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，按学习情况、课外活动、同学关系的顺序展开，结构清晰，语言简洁，符合书信格式，准确传达了新学校生活的内容，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5