十、书面表达。(共20分)
假如你是王林,你将在11月20日邀请美国笔友John到园博园(Garden Expo Park)一日游,请根据以下内容提示,写一封90词左右的邮件给你的朋友Amy,告诉她这件事情。

Dear Amy,
I'm writing to tell you that I am planning a day out with my pen pal John.
Yours,
Wang Lin
假如你是王林,你将在11月20日邀请美国笔友John到园博园(Garden Expo Park)一日游,请根据以下内容提示,写一封90词左右的邮件给你的朋友Amy,告诉她这件事情。
Dear Amy,
I'm writing to tell you that I am planning a day out with my pen pal John.
John is a Grade 8 student from an American school. He's fourteen years old and has a round face and a small nose. He has short hair and looks smart. He's crazy about DIY and always enjoys himself in making model planes.
For the one-day trip on 20 November, we plan to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m., and then take a bus to Garden Expo Park. It will take us about an hour to get there. We had better prepare some food and drinks at home. In the park, we will see all kinds of models, and enjoy the dance shows. We also plan to row a boat on the lake. After that, we will take the underground to go back home at about 4:30 p.m.
It will be a great day. I hope you can join us.
For the one-day trip on 20 November, we plan to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m., and then take a bus to Garden Expo Park. It will take us about an hour to get there. We had better prepare some food and drinks at home. In the park, we will see all kinds of models, and enjoy the dance shows. We also plan to row a boat on the lake. After that, we will take the underground to go back home at about 4:30 p.m.
It will be a great day. I hope you can join us.
Yours,
Wang Lin
答案:One possible version:
Dear Amy,
I'm writing to tell you that I am planning a day out with my pen pal John. John is a Grade 8 student from an American school. He's fourteen years old and has a round face and a small nose. He has short hair and looks smart. He's crazy about DIY and always enjoys himself in making model planes.
For the one-day trip on 20 November, we plan to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m., and then take a bus to Garden Expo Park. It will take us about an hour to get there. We had better prepare some food and drinks at home. In the park, we will see all kinds of models, and enjoy the dance shows. We also plan to row a boat on the lake. After that, we will take the underground to go back home at about 4:30 p.m.
It will be a great day. I hope you can join us.
Yours,
Wang Lin
Dear Amy,
I'm writing to tell you that I am planning a day out with my pen pal John. John is a Grade 8 student from an American school. He's fourteen years old and has a round face and a small nose. He has short hair and looks smart. He's crazy about DIY and always enjoys himself in making model planes.
For the one-day trip on 20 November, we plan to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m., and then take a bus to Garden Expo Park. It will take us about an hour to get there. We had better prepare some food and drinks at home. In the park, we will see all kinds of models, and enjoy the dance shows. We also plan to row a boat on the lake. After that, we will take the underground to go back home at about 4:30 p.m.
It will be a great day. I hope you can join us.
Yours,
Wang Lin
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,任务是给Amy写一封邮件,告知邀请笔友John前往园博园一日游的相关安排。解题思路:1. 补充笔友John的核心信息(年龄、年级、外貌、DIY爱好及实例);2. 详细说明11月20日一日游的具体流程(集合时间地点、交通方式、准备事项、园内活动);3. 发出邀请,确保邮件格式正确,涵盖所有提示要点,词数约90词,语言通顺自然。
【解析】
首先承接开头,介绍John的信息:John is a 14-year-old Grade 8 student from an American school. He has a round face and short hair, and is crazy about DIY, for example, he likes making model planes. 接着说明行程安排:On November 20th, we plan to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m., then take a bus to Garden Expo Park. We need to prepare some food and drinks. In the park, we can see various models, row a boat on the lake and enjoy dance shows. We will return home at about 4:30 p.m. 最后发出邀请:I hope you can join us. 整合后形成完整邮件,符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Amy,
I'm writing to tell you that I am planning a day out with my pen pal John. John is a Grade 8 student from an American school. He's fourteen years old and has a round face and a small nose. He has short hair and looks smart. He's crazy about DIY and always enjoys himself in making model planes.
For the one-day trip on 20 November, we plan to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m., and then take a bus to Garden Expo Park. It will take us about an hour to get there. We had better prepare some food and drinks at home. In the park, we will see all kinds of models, and enjoy the dance shows. We also plan to row a boat on the lake. After that, we will take the underground to go back home at about 4:30 p.m.
It will be a great day. I hope you can join us.
Yours,
Wang Lin
【知识点】
英语书面表达、邮件写作、信息整合
【点评】
本题考查学生运用英语完成书面表达的能力,要求整合给定的人物信息与行程要点,写出符合格式的邮件,需注意要点齐全、语言连贯,是初中英语常见的写作题型,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题,任务是给Amy写一封邮件,告知邀请笔友John前往园博园一日游的相关安排。解题思路:1. 补充笔友John的核心信息(年龄、年级、外貌、DIY爱好及实例);2. 详细说明11月20日一日游的具体流程(集合时间地点、交通方式、准备事项、园内活动);3. 发出邀请,确保邮件格式正确,涵盖所有提示要点,词数约90词,语言通顺自然。
【解析】
首先承接开头,介绍John的信息:John is a 14-year-old Grade 8 student from an American school. He has a round face and short hair, and is crazy about DIY, for example, he likes making model planes. 接着说明行程安排:On November 20th, we plan to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m., then take a bus to Garden Expo Park. We need to prepare some food and drinks. In the park, we can see various models, row a boat on the lake and enjoy dance shows. We will return home at about 4:30 p.m. 最后发出邀请:I hope you can join us. 整合后形成完整邮件,符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Amy,
I'm writing to tell you that I am planning a day out with my pen pal John. John is a Grade 8 student from an American school. He's fourteen years old and has a round face and a small nose. He has short hair and looks smart. He's crazy about DIY and always enjoys himself in making model planes.
For the one-day trip on 20 November, we plan to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m., and then take a bus to Garden Expo Park. It will take us about an hour to get there. We had better prepare some food and drinks at home. In the park, we will see all kinds of models, and enjoy the dance shows. We also plan to row a boat on the lake. After that, we will take the underground to go back home at about 4:30 p.m.
It will be a great day. I hope you can join us.
Yours,
Wang Lin
【知识点】
英语书面表达、邮件写作、信息整合
【点评】
本题考查学生运用英语完成书面表达的能力,要求整合给定的人物信息与行程要点,写出符合格式的邮件,需注意要点齐全、语言连贯,是初中英语常见的写作题型,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6