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《中学生英语报》发起了以“To Be Stronger”为主题的演讲征文活动,请同学们分享自己遇到的一个困难或挑战,谈谈自己是如何应对的,并分享自己的收获或感悟。
要求:1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
3. 80~100词,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:记叙文。② 时态:一般过去时和一般现在时。③ 人称:以第一人称为主。④ 首先分享自己对演讲主题的理解;其次讲述自己遇到的困难或挑战以及应对方式;最后谈谈自己的收获与感悟。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
Ladies and gentlemen,
Today, I'd like to share my view and personal story on “To Be Stronger”.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
《中学生英语报》发起了以“To Be Stronger”为主题的演讲征文活动,请同学们分享自己遇到的一个困难或挑战,谈谈自己是如何应对的,并分享自己的收获或感悟。
要求:1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
3. 80~100词,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:记叙文。② 时态:一般过去时和一般现在时。③ 人称:以第一人称为主。④ 首先分享自己对演讲主题的理解;其次讲述自己遇到的困难或挑战以及应对方式;最后谈谈自己的收获与感悟。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Ladies and gentlemen,
Today, I'd like to share my view and personal story on “To Be Stronger”.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案:One possible version:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Today, I'd like to share my view and personal story on "To Be Stronger". As a famous saying goes, "What doesn't kill us makes us stronger."
Last month, I joined the school 1,000-meter running race. I fell down on the way and hurt my knee badly. Although I felt pain and wanted to give up, I stood up quickly and kept running. I didn't win the race, but I finished it.
This experience tells me we should never give up when meeting troubles, and only this way can we become stronger and better.
That's all. Thank you!
Ladies and gentlemen,
Today, I'd like to share my view and personal story on "To Be Stronger". As a famous saying goes, "What doesn't kill us makes us stronger."
Last month, I joined the school 1,000-meter running race. I fell down on the way and hurt my knee badly. Although I felt pain and wanted to give up, I stood up quickly and kept running. I didn't win the race, but I finished it.
This experience tells me we should never give up when meeting troubles, and only this way can we become stronger and better.
That's all. Thank you!
解析:
【分析】
本次写作是围绕“To Be Stronger”主题的英语演讲稿,需遵循“理解主题→讲述经历→表达观点”的思路完成。第一步,结合主题引出理解,可借助名言点明主题内涵;第二步,选取自身的困难事例,明确时间、地点及事件经过,体现应对过程;第三步,总结感悟,表达“永不放弃”的观点,同时注意时态(经历用一般过去时,观点用一般现在时)、人称(第一人称)、字数要求,不得出现真实信息,衔接给定开头即可。
【解析】
1. 理解主题:用名言“What doesn't kill us makes us stronger”引出对“To Be Stronger”的理解,点明主题核心;
2. 讲述经历:选取参加学校1000米跑步比赛的事例,明确时间(Last month)、地点(school 1,000-meter running race),事件(摔倒伤膝,想放弃但坚持跑完),符合“my story”的要点;
3. 表达观点:总结经历,提出“never give up”的感悟,呼应主题,结构完整,语言通顺,符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Today, I'd like to share my view and personal story on "To Be Stronger". As a famous saying goes, "What doesn't kill us makes us stronger."
Last month, I joined the school 1,000-meter running race. I fell down on the way and hurt my knee badly. Although I felt pain and wanted to give up, I stood up quickly and kept running. I didn't win the race, but I finished it.
This experience tells me we should never give up when meeting troubles, and only this way can we become stronger and better.
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、主题表达、时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“To Be Stronger”主题,结构清晰,按照“理解主题→分享经历→表达观点”的逻辑展开,用具体事例支撑观点,语言简洁流畅,符合演讲稿格式及写作要求,是一篇优秀的中学生英语作文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作是围绕“To Be Stronger”主题的英语演讲稿,需遵循“理解主题→讲述经历→表达观点”的思路完成。第一步,结合主题引出理解,可借助名言点明主题内涵;第二步,选取自身的困难事例,明确时间、地点及事件经过,体现应对过程;第三步,总结感悟,表达“永不放弃”的观点,同时注意时态(经历用一般过去时,观点用一般现在时)、人称(第一人称)、字数要求,不得出现真实信息,衔接给定开头即可。
【解析】
1. 理解主题:用名言“What doesn't kill us makes us stronger”引出对“To Be Stronger”的理解,点明主题核心;
2. 讲述经历:选取参加学校1000米跑步比赛的事例,明确时间(Last month)、地点(school 1,000-meter running race),事件(摔倒伤膝,想放弃但坚持跑完),符合“my story”的要点;
3. 表达观点:总结经历,提出“never give up”的感悟,呼应主题,结构完整,语言通顺,符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Today, I'd like to share my view and personal story on "To Be Stronger". As a famous saying goes, "What doesn't kill us makes us stronger."
Last month, I joined the school 1,000-meter running race. I fell down on the way and hurt my knee badly. Although I felt pain and wanted to give up, I stood up quickly and kept running. I didn't win the race, but I finished it.
This experience tells me we should never give up when meeting troubles, and only this way can we become stronger and better.
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、主题表达、时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“To Be Stronger”主题,结构清晰,按照“理解主题→分享经历→表达观点”的逻辑展开,用具体事例支撑观点,语言简洁流畅,符合演讲稿格式及写作要求,是一篇优秀的中学生英语作文。
【难度系数】
0.5