经典例题
理性的人类应当深怀敬畏之心，敬畏自然，敬畏生命，实现人与自然和谐共生。作为观鸟俱乐部的一员，你将作为学生代表谈谈入会以来的所见、所闻、所感。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇演讲稿。
【要点】1. 你喜欢什么鸟？
2. 鸟面临什么样的问题？
3. 你如何与鸟和谐共生？
【注意】1. 词数90左右。
2. 包含上述所有要点信息，可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
Hello, everyone! I am happy to be here to share my ideas with you.
Thanks for listening!
理性的人类应当深怀敬畏之心，敬畏自然，敬畏生命，实现人与自然和谐共生。作为观鸟俱乐部的一员，你将作为学生代表谈谈入会以来的所见、所闻、所感。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇演讲稿。
【要点】1. 你喜欢什么鸟？
2. 鸟面临什么样的问题？
3. 你如何与鸟和谐共生？
【注意】1. 词数90左右。
2. 包含上述所有要点信息，可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
Hello, everyone! I am happy to be here to share my ideas with you.
Thanks for listening!
答案：I like swans best. They have soft white feathers and look very elegant when they swim quietly on the lake.
However, many birds are in great danger now. Their living wetlands are becoming smaller, so they can't have enough space to live or enough food to feed their babies. Some people even catch birds for money. As a member of the Birdwatching Club, we will build more reserves for birds, and tell more people not to hurt these lovely lives. We can learn to get on well with birds together.
However, many birds are in great danger now. Their living wetlands are becoming smaller, so they can't have enough space to live or enough food to feed their babies. Some people even catch birds for money. As a member of the Birdwatching Club, we will build more reserves for birds, and tell more people not to hurt these lovely lives. We can learn to get on well with birds together.
解析：
【分析】本题要求以观鸟俱乐部学生代表的身份写英语演讲稿，需覆盖三个核心要点：喜欢的鸟、鸟类面临的问题、与鸟类和谐共生的做法。解题思路为：1. 选择易描写且贴合主题的鸟类（如天鹅），说明喜爱原因；2. 从栖息地、食物、人为伤害等角度阐述鸟类困境；3. 结合俱乐部身份提出具体保护措施，收尾呼应主题，控制词数在90左右，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】演讲稿开头已给出，需补充内容：① 点明喜欢的鸟及外形特点；② 转折说明鸟类现状，具体阐述栖息地缩小、食物不足、人为捕捉等问题；③ 结合观鸟俱乐部成员身份，说明保护鸟类的做法，最后表达与鸟类和谐共生的愿望，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】I like swans best. They have soft white feathers and look very elegant when they swim quietly on the lake. However, many birds are in great danger now. Their living wetlands are becoming smaller, so they can't have enough space to live or enough food to feed their babies. Some people even catch birds for money. As a member of the Birdwatching Club, we will build more reserves for birds, and tell more people not to hurt these lovely lives. We can learn to get on well with birds together.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点式英语表达
【点评】本题结合生活实际，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求围绕指定要点完成演讲稿，既考查语言组织能力，又渗透了保护自然的意识，符合英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】演讲稿开头已给出，需补充内容：① 点明喜欢的鸟及外形特点；② 转折说明鸟类现状，具体阐述栖息地缩小、食物不足、人为捕捉等问题；③ 结合观鸟俱乐部成员身份，说明保护鸟类的做法，最后表达与鸟类和谐共生的愿望，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】I like swans best. They have soft white feathers and look very elegant when they swim quietly on the lake. However, many birds are in great danger now. Their living wetlands are becoming smaller, so they can't have enough space to live or enough food to feed their babies. Some people even catch birds for money. As a member of the Birdwatching Club, we will build more reserves for birds, and tell more people not to hurt these lovely lives. We can learn to get on well with birds together.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点式英语表达
【点评】本题结合生活实际，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求围绕指定要点完成演讲稿，既考查语言组织能力，又渗透了保护自然的意识，符合英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】0.6
写作指导
1. 本文是一篇演讲稿。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写作要求已给出，不要遗漏所给要点，可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意词数要求。
写作模板
开篇点题 → I have known much about different kinds of birds.
↓
详细介绍 → Each time I go birdwatching, I always find that most people treat birds kindly...
However, birds are still facing some problems...
↓
收篇结尾 → So it's time for us humans to change the bad situation...
1. 本文是一篇演讲稿。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写作要求已给出，不要遗漏所给要点，可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意词数要求。
写作模板
开篇点题 → I have known much about different kinds of birds.
↓
详细介绍 → Each time I go birdwatching, I always find that most people treat birds kindly...
However, birds are still facing some problems...
↓
收篇结尾 → So it's time for us humans to change the bad situation...
答案：Good morning, everyone!
I have known much about different kinds of birds. They are our close friends on the Earth, with colorful feathers and beautiful singing voices.
Each time I go birdwatching, I always find that most people treat birds kindly. Many bird lovers take cameras to watch birds quietly and never disturb their daily life. Some volunteers even build safe nests for birds in the park, and give out leaflets to tell more people not to hurt birds. However, birds are still facing some problems. People cut down too many forests, so lots of birds lose their ideal living places. What's worse, some people catch wild birds for money, and environmental pollution also makes it hard for birds to find clean food and fresh water. The number of many rare bird species is getting smaller and smaller these years.
So it's time for us humans to change the bad situation. We should build more nature reserves for birds, and never do anything that is harmful to them. If all of us can take small action, we will live a much more harmonious life with these lovely animals.
That's all, thank you!
I have known much about different kinds of birds. They are our close friends on the Earth, with colorful feathers and beautiful singing voices.
Each time I go birdwatching, I always find that most people treat birds kindly. Many bird lovers take cameras to watch birds quietly and never disturb their daily life. Some volunteers even build safe nests for birds in the park, and give out leaflets to tell more people not to hurt birds. However, birds are still facing some problems. People cut down too many forests, so lots of birds lose their ideal living places. What's worse, some people catch wild birds for money, and environmental pollution also makes it hard for birds to find clean food and fresh water. The number of many rare bird species is getting smaller and smaller these years.
So it's time for us humans to change the bad situation. We should build more nature reserves for birds, and never do anything that is harmful to them. If all of us can take small action, we will live a much more harmonious life with these lovely animals.
That's all, thank you!
解析：
【分析】本题为英语演讲稿写作题，需按照给定的“开篇点题-详细介绍-收篇结尾”结构完成写作。首先要注意演讲稿的格式（开头问候、结尾致谢），时态统一用一般现在时；开篇点题部分补充鸟类的特点使内容更丰富；详细介绍需分两部分：一是人们对鸟类的友好行为，二是鸟类面临的问题；收篇结尾要发出呼吁，点明保护鸟类的意义。
【解析】1. 开头问候：Good morning, everyone! 符合演讲稿的开场规范；2. 开篇点题：承接模板句，补充鸟类的身份（地球的朋友）和特征（彩色羽毛、美妙歌声），丰富开篇内容；3. 详细介绍：① 列举人们对鸟类友好的具体行为（观鸟爱好者安静观鸟、志愿者筑巢和发传单）；② 说明鸟类面临的问题（森林砍伐、人为捕捉、环境污染），补充细节让内容更充实；4. 收篇结尾：呼吁人类采取行动，最后致谢That's all, thank you! 符合演讲稿的收尾要求。
【答案】Good morning, everyone!
I have known much about different kinds of birds. They are our close friends on the Earth, with colorful feathers and beautiful singing voices.
Each time I go birdwatching, I always find that most people treat birds kindly. Many bird lovers take cameras to watch birds quietly and never disturb their daily life. Some volunteers even build safe nests for birds in the park, and give out leaflets to tell more people not to hurt birds. However, birds are still facing some problems. People cut down too many forests, so lots of birds lose their ideal living places. What's worse, some people catch wild birds for money, and environmental pollution also makes it hard for birds to find clean food and fresh water. The number of many rare bird species is getting smaller and smaller these years.
So it's time for us humans to change the bad situation. We should build more nature reserves for birds, and never do anything that is harmful to them. If all of us can take small action, we will live a much more harmonious life with these lovely animals.
That's all, thank you!
【知识点】英语演讲稿写作、一般现在时运用、写作要点拓展
【点评】本篇写作严格遵循给定结构，要点齐全，补充了具体细节使内容生动，时态正确，符合演讲稿的语气要求，是一篇规范的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开头问候：Good morning, everyone! 符合演讲稿的开场规范；2. 开篇点题：承接模板句，补充鸟类的身份（地球的朋友）和特征（彩色羽毛、美妙歌声），丰富开篇内容；3. 详细介绍：① 列举人们对鸟类友好的具体行为（观鸟爱好者安静观鸟、志愿者筑巢和发传单）；② 说明鸟类面临的问题（森林砍伐、人为捕捉、环境污染），补充细节让内容更充实；4. 收篇结尾：呼吁人类采取行动，最后致谢That's all, thank you! 符合演讲稿的收尾要求。
【答案】Good morning, everyone!
I have known much about different kinds of birds. They are our close friends on the Earth, with colorful feathers and beautiful singing voices.
Each time I go birdwatching, I always find that most people treat birds kindly. Many bird lovers take cameras to watch birds quietly and never disturb their daily life. Some volunteers even build safe nests for birds in the park, and give out leaflets to tell more people not to hurt birds. However, birds are still facing some problems. People cut down too many forests, so lots of birds lose their ideal living places. What's worse, some people catch wild birds for money, and environmental pollution also makes it hard for birds to find clean food and fresh water. The number of many rare bird species is getting smaller and smaller these years.
So it's time for us humans to change the bad situation. We should build more nature reserves for birds, and never do anything that is harmful to them. If all of us can take small action, we will live a much more harmonious life with these lovely animals.
That's all, thank you!
【知识点】英语演讲稿写作、一般现在时运用、写作要点拓展
【点评】本篇写作严格遵循给定结构，要点齐全，补充了具体细节使内容生动，时态正确，符合演讲稿的语气要求，是一篇规范的范文。
【难度系数】0.5