经典例题
（2025·江苏泰州姜堰区第一教研站调研）假如你是Lily，目前在英国的一所中学读八年级。请你写一封电子邮件给你的中国好友王丽，向她介绍一下你的新朋友Helen以及你丰富多彩的学校生活。
【要求】1.文章必须包含所提供的所有信息，并作适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3.90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Li，
Best wishes!
Yours，
Lily
（2025·江苏泰州姜堰区第一教研站调研）假如你是Lily，目前在英国的一所中学读八年级。请你写一封电子邮件给你的中国好友王丽，向她介绍一下你的新朋友Helen以及你丰富多彩的学校生活。
【要求】1.文章必须包含所提供的所有信息，并作适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3.90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Li，
Best wishes!
Yours，
Lily
答案：I have a new friend called Helen at my new school. She is a good-looking girl with a round face and big bright eyes. She has a great sense of humour and always tells funny jokes to make me laugh. She is also very helpful, and she often gives others a hand when they have problems.
My school life is very colourful. Our classes start at 8 a.m. and finish at 3:30 p.m. We have many interesting lessons, and we can join different clubs after class. I really have a great time at school every day.
My school life is very colourful. Our classes start at 8 a.m. and finish at 3:30 p.m. We have many interesting lessons, and we can join different clubs after class. I really have a great time at school every day.
解析：
【分析】这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以Lily的身份给好友王丽写邮件，需覆盖两大核心内容：一是介绍新朋友Helen（外貌：好看、圆脸；性格：有幽默感、乐于助人），二是介绍自己丰富多彩的学校生活（可从作息、科目、活动等方面拓展）。解题思路：1. 明确邮件结构，正文分两段对应两个核心内容；2. 整合给定信息，补充合理细节（如Helen讲笑话、学校的作息时间等）；3. 控制词数在90左右，使用八年级所学的简单句型，确保语言准确流畅。
【解析】正文第一段先点明Helen是自己的新朋友，接着描述其外貌“a good-looking girl with a round face”，再通过“tells funny jokes”体现幽默感，用“gives others a hand”说明乐于助人；第二段介绍学校生活，补充作息“classes start at 8 a.m. and finish at 3:30 p.m.”，提及有趣的科目和课后俱乐部活动，最后表达在学校的愉快感受，整体语言符合八年级水平，覆盖所有要点并适当拓展。
【答案】I have a new friend called Helen at my new school. She is a good-looking girl with a round face and big bright eyes. She has a great sense of humour and always tells funny jokes to make me laugh. She is also very helpful, and she often gives others a hand when they have problems.
My school life is very colourful. Our classes start at 8 a.m. and finish at 3:30 p.m. We have many interesting lessons, and we can join different clubs after class. I really have a great time at school every day.
【知识点】英语书信写作、人物特征描写、学校生活表达
【点评】本题为初中英语应用文写作题，考查学生整合信息、书面表达及合理拓展的能力，要求覆盖所有给定要点并符合词数要求，是八年级英语写作的典型题型，能有效检验学生的基础语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】正文第一段先点明Helen是自己的新朋友，接着描述其外貌“a good-looking girl with a round face”，再通过“tells funny jokes”体现幽默感，用“gives others a hand”说明乐于助人；第二段介绍学校生活，补充作息“classes start at 8 a.m. and finish at 3:30 p.m.”，提及有趣的科目和课后俱乐部活动，最后表达在学校的愉快感受，整体语言符合八年级水平，覆盖所有要点并适当拓展。
【答案】I have a new friend called Helen at my new school. She is a good-looking girl with a round face and big bright eyes. She has a great sense of humour and always tells funny jokes to make me laugh. She is also very helpful, and she often gives others a hand when they have problems.
My school life is very colourful. Our classes start at 8 a.m. and finish at 3:30 p.m. We have many interesting lessons, and we can join different clubs after class. I really have a great time at school every day.
【知识点】英语书信写作、人物特征描写、学校生活表达
【点评】本题为初中英语应用文写作题，考查学生整合信息、书面表达及合理拓展的能力，要求覆盖所有给定要点并符合词数要求，是八年级英语写作的典型题型，能有效检验学生的基础语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
写作指导
1. 用第一人称和第三人称来写。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 要写出朋友的性格特征和自己的学校生活并进行适当发挥。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 她有一张圆脸和含笑的眼睛。（with smiling eyes）
2. 她是班上最大方的学生之一。（one of the＋形容词最高级＋复数名词）
3. 我们每天花一个小时做家庭作业。（spend one hour）
1. 用第一人称和第三人称来写。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 要写出朋友的性格特征和自己的学校生活并进行适当发挥。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 她有一张圆脸和含笑的眼睛。（with smiling eyes）
2. 她是班上最大方的学生之一。（one of the＋形容词最高级＋复数名词）
3. 我们每天花一个小时做家庭作业。（spend one hour）
答案：1. She has a round face with smiling eyes.
2. She is one of the most generous students in the class.
3. We spend one hour doing homework every day.
2. She is one of the most generous students in the class.
3. We spend one hour doing homework every day.
解析：
【分析】本题是英语基础遣词造句题，需结合题目给定的句型结构、人称（第一/第三人称）和时态（一般现在时）完成句子。解题时要对应每个句子的要求，准确运用指定短语和句型，保证语法正确。
【解析】1. 第一句：主语为第三人称单数She，一般现在时谓语用has，“圆脸”是a round face，“含笑的眼睛”用with smiling eyes作后置定语修饰face，组合得She has a round face with smiling eyes.；2. 第二句：运用“one of the + 形容词最高级 + 复数名词”结构，“大方的”最高级为most generous，范围是in the class，组合得She is one of the most generous students in the class.；3. 第三句：运用“spend + 时间 + doing sth”结构，主语为We，时间one hour，“做家庭作业”是doing homework，时间状语every day，组合得We spend one hour doing homework every day.
【答案】1. She has a round face with smiling eyes.
2. She is one of the most generous students in the class.
3. We spend one hour doing homework every day.
【知识点】英语句型运用、一般现在时、固定搭配
【点评】本题考查基础英语遣词造句，聚焦指定句型的掌握，是英语写作的入门练习，难度较低，适合巩固基础表达。
【难度系数】0.8
【解析】1. 第一句：主语为第三人称单数She，一般现在时谓语用has，“圆脸”是a round face，“含笑的眼睛”用with smiling eyes作后置定语修饰face，组合得She has a round face with smiling eyes.；2. 第二句：运用“one of the + 形容词最高级 + 复数名词”结构，“大方的”最高级为most generous，范围是in the class，组合得She is one of the most generous students in the class.；3. 第三句：运用“spend + 时间 + doing sth”结构，主语为We，时间one hour，“做家庭作业”是doing homework，时间状语every day，组合得We spend one hour doing homework every day.
【答案】1. She has a round face with smiling eyes.
2. She is one of the most generous students in the class.
3. We spend one hour doing homework every day.
【知识点】英语句型运用、一般现在时、固定搭配
【点评】本题考查基础英语遣词造句，聚焦指定句型的掌握，是英语写作的入门练习，难度较低，适合巩固基础表达。
【难度系数】0.8