八、书面表达(30分)
假如你是桑迪,收到了露西的电子邮件。请根据邮件内容,用100词左右给她写一封回信。(所给内容不计入总词数)

Dear Lucy,
How wonderful that you're planning to DIY a birthday card for your mum. I'm glad to give you some help.
Yours,
Sandy
假如你是桑迪,收到了露西的电子邮件。请根据邮件内容,用100词左右给她写一封回信。(所给内容不计入总词数)
Dear Lucy,
How wonderful that you're planning to DIY a birthday card for your mum. I'm glad to give you some help.
Yours,
Sandy
答案:Dear Lucy,
How wonderful that you're planning to DIY a birthday card for your mum. I'm glad to give you some help.
First, cut a piece of coloured paper into the shape of a heart with a pair of scissors. Be careful not to hurt your fingers!
Next, write a sweet sentence like "Happy Birthday, Mum. You're the best" on one side. Fill the words with colourful paint to make them stand out. On the other side, draw a beautiful rose. If you want to add a surprise, tape a photo of you and your mum on the card.
Finally, check the card carefully to stay away from mistakes.
Making the card by yourself will not only surprise your mum but also bring you great joy. I'm sure your mum will love it!
Yours,
Sandy
How wonderful that you're planning to DIY a birthday card for your mum. I'm glad to give you some help.
First, cut a piece of coloured paper into the shape of a heart with a pair of scissors. Be careful not to hurt your fingers!
Next, write a sweet sentence like "Happy Birthday, Mum. You're the best" on one side. Fill the words with colourful paint to make them stand out. On the other side, draw a beautiful rose. If you want to add a surprise, tape a photo of you and your mum on the card.
Finally, check the card carefully to stay away from mistakes.
Making the card by yourself will not only surprise your mum but also bring you great joy. I'm sure your mum will love it!
Yours,
Sandy
解析:
【分析】本题要求以Sandy的身份给Lucy写回信,需回应Lucy请求指导DIY生日卡片的需求,要遵循书信格式,分步骤清晰说明DIY卡片的具体方法,语言简洁实用,控制在100词左右,同时要体现对Lucy的鼓励。解题时先确定书信结构:开头回应并表明乐意帮忙,中间分步骤讲解DIY过程,结尾表达祝福;再组织具体内容,使用指令性语言,确保贴合主题。
【解析】首先开头回应Lucy的想法并表示乐意提供帮助;接着分三步说明DIY生日卡片的流程:第一步,用剪刀将彩纸剪成心形,提醒注意安全;第二步,在卡片一面写温馨的生日句子,用颜料让文字醒目,另一面画玫瑰,还可贴和妈妈的照片增加惊喜;最后检查卡片避免错误;结尾说明自制卡片的意义,表达对Lucy的祝福。
【答案】Dear Lucy,
How wonderful that you're planning to DIY a birthday card for your mum. I'm glad to give you some help.
First, cut a piece of coloured paper into the shape of a heart with a pair of scissors. Be careful not to hurt your fingers!
Next, write a sweet sentence like "Happy Birthday, Mum. You're the best" on one side. Fill the words with colourful paint to make them stand out. On the other side, draw a beautiful rose. If you want to add a surprise, tape a photo of you and your mum on the card.
Finally, check the card carefully to stay away from mistakes.
Making the card by yourself will not only surprise your mum but also bring you great joy. I'm sure your mum will love it!
Yours,
Sandy
【知识点】英语书信写作;DIY相关表达;祈使句运用
【点评】本题结合生活实际场景,考查学生的实用英语写作能力,要求清晰有条理地表达DIY步骤,符合书信格式,内容贴近学生生活,能引导学生运用所学英语解决实际问题。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先开头回应Lucy的想法并表示乐意提供帮助;接着分三步说明DIY生日卡片的流程:第一步,用剪刀将彩纸剪成心形,提醒注意安全;第二步,在卡片一面写温馨的生日句子,用颜料让文字醒目,另一面画玫瑰,还可贴和妈妈的照片增加惊喜;最后检查卡片避免错误;结尾说明自制卡片的意义,表达对Lucy的祝福。
【答案】Dear Lucy,
How wonderful that you're planning to DIY a birthday card for your mum. I'm glad to give you some help.
First, cut a piece of coloured paper into the shape of a heart with a pair of scissors. Be careful not to hurt your fingers!
Next, write a sweet sentence like "Happy Birthday, Mum. You're the best" on one side. Fill the words with colourful paint to make them stand out. On the other side, draw a beautiful rose. If you want to add a surprise, tape a photo of you and your mum on the card.
Finally, check the card carefully to stay away from mistakes.
Making the card by yourself will not only surprise your mum but also bring you great joy. I'm sure your mum will love it!
Yours,
Sandy
【知识点】英语书信写作;DIY相关表达;祈使句运用
【点评】本题结合生活实际场景,考查学生的实用英语写作能力,要求清晰有条理地表达DIY步骤,符合书信格式,内容贴近学生生活,能引导学生运用所学英语解决实际问题。
【难度系数】0.5