(2026·江苏徐州铜山区一模改编)在成长的过程中,总有一些让我们感到恐惧的事情,如害怕某种动物,害怕在众人面前发言……只有克服恐惧才能帮助我们成长。请根据下面
,以“Overcome fear”为主题写一篇短文投稿至“校园成长”英语栏目。
【要求】
1. 词数90左右(首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
2. 所写内容应包括所给要点,可适当发挥。
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Everyone has fears in life, and so do I.
【要求】
1. 词数90左右(首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
2. 所写内容应包括所给要点,可适当发挥。
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Everyone has fears in life, and so do I.
I used to be afraid of speaking in front of my classmates. I was worried that I would make mistakes and be laughed at.
To overcome this fear, I practised my speeches again and again in front of the mirror every day.
I also tried to answer questions actively in class.
Little by little, I became more confident.
Now I no longer fear public speaking.
I feel proud of myself for making such a big change.
Overcoming fear makes me braver.
and helps me grow better.
答案:One possible version
Everyone has fears in life, and so do I. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of my classmates. I was worried that I would make mistakes and be laughed at.
To overcome this fear, I practised my speeches again and again in front of the mirror every day. I also tried to answer questions actively in class. Little by little, I became more confident.
Now I no longer fear public speaking. I feel proud of myself for making such a big change. Overcoming fear makes me braver and helps me grow better.
Everyone has fears in life, and so do I. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of my classmates. I was worried that I would make mistakes and be laughed at.
To overcome this fear, I practised my speeches again and again in front of the mirror every day. I also tried to answer questions actively in class. Little by little, I became more confident.
Now I no longer fear public speaking. I feel proud of myself for making such a big change. Overcoming fear makes me braver and helps me grow better.
解析:
【分析】本题是英语话题书面表达题,主题为“克服恐惧”,要求围绕三个核心要点(害怕的事物、克服恐惧的做法、改变后的感受)写作,需结合给定首句,词数90左右,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:1. 选取贴合学生生活的恐惧点(如当众发言);2. 说明恐惧的原因;3. 具体阐述克服恐惧的行动;4. 表达改变后的感受及成长意义,确保覆盖所有要点,语言通顺连贯。
【解析】写作时,先承接首句,明确自己的恐惧是当众发言,说明担忧(怕出错被嘲笑);接着写克服的具体方法:每天对着镜子反复练习,课堂主动回答问题;最后写现在的状态(不再害怕当众发言),表达对自己的自豪及克服恐惧带来的成长,控制词数符合要求,无真实信息。
【答案】One possible version
Everyone has fears in life, and so do I. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of my classmates. I was worried that I would make mistakes and be laughed at.
To overcome this fear, I practised my speeches again and again in front of the mirror every day. I also tried to answer questions actively in class. Little by little, I became more confident.
Now I no longer fear public speaking. I feel proud of myself for making such a big change. Overcoming fear makes me braver and helps me grow better.
【知识点】英语话题作文、成长主题写作、要点覆盖写作
【点评】本题结合学生成长经历,引导学生反思自我,紧扣给定要点,内容真实可感,符合校园栏目的定位,考查学生的英语表达与逻辑组织能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时,先承接首句,明确自己的恐惧是当众发言,说明担忧(怕出错被嘲笑);接着写克服的具体方法:每天对着镜子反复练习,课堂主动回答问题;最后写现在的状态(不再害怕当众发言),表达对自己的自豪及克服恐惧带来的成长,控制词数符合要求,无真实信息。
【答案】One possible version
Everyone has fears in life, and so do I. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of my classmates. I was worried that I would make mistakes and be laughed at.
To overcome this fear, I practised my speeches again and again in front of the mirror every day. I also tried to answer questions actively in class. Little by little, I became more confident.
Now I no longer fear public speaking. I feel proud of myself for making such a big change. Overcoming fear makes me braver and helps me grow better.
【知识点】英语话题作文、成长主题写作、要点覆盖写作
【点评】本题结合学生成长经历,引导学生反思自我,紧扣给定要点,内容真实可感,符合校园栏目的定位,考查学生的英语表达与逻辑组织能力。
【难度系数】0.5