六、书面表达(满分20分)
某英文报刊以“Colourful summer vacation”为主题向广大初中生征稿。假设你是李明，请你以“Three things to do for summer vacation”为题目，根据以下思维导图和要求用英语写一篇短文投稿。
【要求】
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
3. 词数80—120。
Three things to do for summer vacation
某英文报刊以“Colourful summer vacation”为主题向广大初中生征稿。假设你是李明，请你以“Three things to do for summer vacation”为题目，根据以下思维导图和要求用英语写一篇短文投稿。
【要求】
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
3. 词数80—120。
Three things to do for summer vacation
答案：One possible version
Three things to do for summer vacation
With the temperature rising, a colourful vacation is around the corner. Three things come into my mind when I am making a list.
On the top of the list is a self-improvement plan, which includes reading books, watching movies and writing diaries. Besides, I also plan to build my body to keep a good shape and stay lively. I'll invite some classmates to go to the gym together and keep a daily record. The last thing is to relax with friends. It's a nice chance to meet some friends who I haven't seen for a long time because of my busy study.
In a word, I can't wait to enjoy the coming vacation.
Three things to do for summer vacation
With the temperature rising, a colourful vacation is around the corner. Three things come into my mind when I am making a list.
On the top of the list is a self-improvement plan, which includes reading books, watching movies and writing diaries. Besides, I also plan to build my body to keep a good shape and stay lively. I'll invite some classmates to go to the gym together and keep a daily record. The last thing is to relax with friends. It's a nice chance to meet some friends who I haven't seen for a long time because of my busy study.
In a word, I can't wait to enjoy the coming vacation.
解析：
【分析】
写作时需围绕题目“Three things to do for summer vacation”，结合思维导图给出的三个核心要点（自我提升、体重管理、娱乐交友）展开。首先开头引出暑假计划，中间分三点具体阐述每一点的具体做法，结尾总结表达对假期的期待。需注意语句通顺、语法正确，词数控制在80-120，避免出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
【解析】
先点明暑假即将到来，引出要分享的三个暑假计划；接着分别说明：第一，自我提升计划，包含读书、看电影、写日记等；第二，健身保持良好体型，和同学一起去健身房；第三，和久未见面的朋友放松相聚；最后总结表达对假期的期待，完成短文写作。
【答案】
Three things to do for summer vacation
With the temperature rising, a colourful vacation is around the corner. Three things come into my mind when I am making a list.
On the top of the list is a self-improvement plan, which includes reading books, watching movies and writing diaries. Besides, I also plan to build my body to keep a good shape and stay lively. I'll invite some classmates to go to the gym together and keep a daily record. The last thing is to relax with friends. It's a nice chance to meet some friends who I haven't seen for a long time because of my busy study.
In a word, I can't wait to enjoy the coming vacation.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、思维导图应用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖思维导图的三个要点，语言流畅自然，符合初中生的英语写作要求，满足题目的各项规范。
【难度系数】
0.7
写作时需围绕题目“Three things to do for summer vacation”，结合思维导图给出的三个核心要点（自我提升、体重管理、娱乐交友）展开。首先开头引出暑假计划，中间分三点具体阐述每一点的具体做法，结尾总结表达对假期的期待。需注意语句通顺、语法正确，词数控制在80-120，避免出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
【解析】
先点明暑假即将到来，引出要分享的三个暑假计划；接着分别说明：第一，自我提升计划，包含读书、看电影、写日记等；第二，健身保持良好体型，和同学一起去健身房；第三，和久未见面的朋友放松相聚；最后总结表达对假期的期待，完成短文写作。
【答案】
Three things to do for summer vacation
With the temperature rising, a colourful vacation is around the corner. Three things come into my mind when I am making a list.
On the top of the list is a self-improvement plan, which includes reading books, watching movies and writing diaries. Besides, I also plan to build my body to keep a good shape and stay lively. I'll invite some classmates to go to the gym together and keep a daily record. The last thing is to relax with friends. It's a nice chance to meet some friends who I haven't seen for a long time because of my busy study.
In a word, I can't wait to enjoy the coming vacation.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、思维导图应用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖思维导图的三个要点，语言流畅自然，符合初中生的英语写作要求，满足题目的各项规范。
【难度系数】
0.7