任务四 书面表达
本周是学校的运动周,班级要评选“运动之星”。假如你是安迪,你也想参加评选。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,介绍自己的情况。

注意:
1. 要点齐全,可适当扩充;
2. 70个词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! My name is Andy.
本周是学校的运动周,班级要评选“运动之星”。假如你是安迪,你也想参加评选。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,介绍自己的情况。
注意:
1. 要点齐全,可适当扩充;
2. 70个词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! My name is Andy.
答案:Hello, everyone! My name is Andy. I am a tall and strong boy. I like sport. I like swimming, running and jogging. But my favourite sport is basketball. I often play basketball with my classmates at the weekend. Sometimes I play it after school. I think playing basketball makes me strong and happy. And it is always great fun. I hope to be a great player in the future.
解析:
【分析】
这是一篇人物介绍类的英语书面表达,用于参加班级“运动之星”评选。解题思路:先承接已给开头介绍自身外貌,再说明喜好的运动并重点突出最喜欢的篮球,接着点明篮球运动的时间,适当补充运动的益处,最后表达自己的愿望,确保要点齐全、语句通顺、词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头“My name is Andy.”,介绍外貌:I am a tall and strong boy.;
2. 引出运动喜好,点明最喜欢篮球,补充少量其他运动丰富内容;
3. 说明篮球运动的时间:often play basketball with classmates at the weekend, sometimes after school;
4. 适当扩充运动的好处:Playing basketball makes me strong and happy, it's great fun;
5. 表达愿望:hope to be a great player in the future。控制词数在70左右,符合要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! My name is Andy. I am a tall and strong boy. I like sport. I like swimming, running and jogging. But my favourite sport is basketball. I often play basketball with my classmates at the weekend. Sometimes I play it after school. I think playing basketball makes me strong and happy. And it is always great fun. I hope to be a great player in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物介绍、一般现在时
【点评】
本文紧扣“运动之星”评选主题,覆盖所有给定要点,适当补充合理内容,语句连贯通顺,符合初中英语书面表达的要求,是一篇合格的习作。
【难度系数】
0.3
这是一篇人物介绍类的英语书面表达,用于参加班级“运动之星”评选。解题思路:先承接已给开头介绍自身外貌,再说明喜好的运动并重点突出最喜欢的篮球,接着点明篮球运动的时间,适当补充运动的益处,最后表达自己的愿望,确保要点齐全、语句通顺、词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头“My name is Andy.”,介绍外貌:I am a tall and strong boy.;
2. 引出运动喜好,点明最喜欢篮球,补充少量其他运动丰富内容;
3. 说明篮球运动的时间:often play basketball with classmates at the weekend, sometimes after school;
4. 适当扩充运动的好处:Playing basketball makes me strong and happy, it's great fun;
5. 表达愿望:hope to be a great player in the future。控制词数在70左右,符合要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! My name is Andy. I am a tall and strong boy. I like sport. I like swimming, running and jogging. But my favourite sport is basketball. I often play basketball with my classmates at the weekend. Sometimes I play it after school. I think playing basketball makes me strong and happy. And it is always great fun. I hope to be a great player in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物介绍、一般现在时
【点评】
本文紧扣“运动之星”评选主题,覆盖所有给定要点,适当补充合理内容,语句连贯通顺,符合初中英语书面表达的要求,是一篇合格的习作。
【难度系数】
0.3