任务四 书面表达
七年级的生活已经开始一段时间了,丰富多彩的初中生活一定给你留下了许多美好的记忆。请根据以下思维导图提示,选择你最喜欢的一次活动,用英文描述它。要点如下:
1. 此次活动的过程;
2. 你的收获或感受。
注意:
1. 60个词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

My school life in Grade 7 is colourful.
七年级的生活已经开始一段时间了,丰富多彩的初中生活一定给你留下了许多美好的记忆。请根据以下思维导图提示,选择你最喜欢的一次活动,用英文描述它。要点如下:
1. 此次活动的过程;
2. 你的收获或感受。
注意:
1. 60个词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My school life in Grade 7 is colourful.
答案:My school life in Grade 7 is colourful. During it, I took part in lots of interesting activities. Last month, our class held a party to celebrate National Day. Students liked taking part in it very much because it was really meaningful. At the party, I danced with my classmates. We prepared for it a month ahead. Our teacher helped us a lot. We worked very hard to dance it well. We all sang and played games until it was ten o’clock at night.
When the party came to an end, we said “Happy National Day” to each other. We all had a good time.
When the party came to an end, we said “Happy National Day” to each other. We all had a good time.
解析:
【分析】首先明确题目要求:根据思维导图中七年级学校生活的活动(如聚会、运动会等),选择最喜欢的活动,用英文写短文,需包含活动过程和收获,开头已给出,字数约60词。解题思路:1. 确定要写的活动(如参考答案选了班级国庆聚会);2. 按“承接开头→介绍活动过程(准备、具体内容)→表达收获感受”的结构写作;3. 确保语句通顺,符合七年级英语水平,满足字数要求。
【解析】先承接开头点明参加了很多活动,再具体描述所选活动:提前准备、活动中的具体内容(跳舞、唱歌、玩游戏),最后表达活动带来的开心、有意义的感受,保证要点齐全,语句连贯。
【答案】My school life in Grade 7 is colourful. During it, I took part in lots of interesting activities. Last month, our class held a party to celebrate National Day. Students liked taking part in it very much because it was really meaningful. At the party, I danced with my classmates. We prepared for it a month ahead. Our teacher helped us a lot. We worked very hard to dance it well. We all sang and played games until it was ten o’clock at night.
When the party came to an end, we said “Happy National Day” to each other. We all had a good time.
【知识点】英语书面表达;七年级英语写作;活动话题写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查学生的英语写作能力,要求学生梳理活动要点,用连贯语句表达活动过程与感受,符合七年级学生的学习要求,能锻炼语言组织和表达能力。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】先承接开头点明参加了很多活动,再具体描述所选活动:提前准备、活动中的具体内容(跳舞、唱歌、玩游戏),最后表达活动带来的开心、有意义的感受,保证要点齐全,语句连贯。
【答案】My school life in Grade 7 is colourful. During it, I took part in lots of interesting activities. Last month, our class held a party to celebrate National Day. Students liked taking part in it very much because it was really meaningful. At the party, I danced with my classmates. We prepared for it a month ahead. Our teacher helped us a lot. We worked very hard to dance it well. We all sang and played games until it was ten o’clock at night.
When the party came to an end, we said “Happy National Day” to each other. We all had a good time.
【知识点】英语书面表达;七年级英语写作;活动话题写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查学生的英语写作能力,要求学生梳理活动要点,用连贯语句表达活动过程与感受,符合七年级学生的学习要求,能锻炼语言组织和表达能力。
【难度系数】0.7