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八、书面表达。(19分)
假如你是学校英语俱乐部的一名通讯员,请你用英文为你校七年级正在举行的时装秀写一篇简报。
要点:1. 七年级的同学们正在学校艺术大厅内举行时装秀;
2. 瞧,米莉走过来了。她穿着一件紫色的羊毛衫,一条棕色短裙和一双黑色长靴(boots)。她的短裙是棉的,长靴是皮革的。她看起来很酷,也很时髦;
3. 很多人都来观看时装秀,入场券(ticket)价格为每人五元;
4. 所得钱款将用来帮助有需要的孩子们。
注意:1. 简报内容须包括所有要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;2. 70词左右。





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答案:One possible version:
The students of Grade 7 are having a fashion show in the school art hall. Look! Here comes Millie. She's wearing a purple wool sweater, a brown skirt and a pair of long black boots. Her skirt is made of cotton and the boots are made of leather. She looks cool and fashionable. Lots of people come to watch the show. The ticket for the show is five yuan per person. The students will use the money to help the children in need.
解析:
【分析】
作为学校英语俱乐部通讯员,需为七年级正在举行的时装秀撰写英文简报,解题思路如下:1. 确定时态:描述正在进行的活动用现在进行时;2. 梳理要点逻辑:先点明活动基本信息(地点),再介绍核心人物Millie的穿着及材质,接着说明观演情况与票价,最后说明钱款用途;3. 选用学过的词汇(如wool、cotton、leather等),确保语句通顺,控制在70词左右,覆盖所有给定要点。
【解析】
按照上述思路组织内容:首先点明活动基本信息:“The students of Grade 7 are having a fashion show in the school art hall.”;接着引出Millie,描述其穿着及材质:“Here comes Millie. She's wearing a purple wool sweater, a brown skirt and a pair of long black boots. Her skirt is made of cotton and the boots are made of leather. She looks cool and fashionable.”;然后说明观演与票价:“Lots of people come to watch the show. The ticket for the show is five yuan per person.”;最后说明钱款用途:“The students will use the money to help the children in need.”,确保所有要点齐全,语句连贯,符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
The students of Grade 7 are having a fashion show in the school art hall. Look! Here comes Millie. She's wearing a purple wool sweater, a brown skirt and a pair of long black boots. Her skirt is made of cotton and the boots are made of leather. She looks cool and fashionable. Lots of people come to watch the show. The ticket for the show is five yuan per person. The students will use the money to help the children in need.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作,现在进行时,服装材质表达
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖所有要点,时态准确,语句通顺自然,符合七年级学生的英语水平,字数达标,是符合要求的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
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